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Summary:
I do not own Inuyasha or The Belgariad/Malloreon. There are no monies being made from this story. All characters are copyright of their rightful owner. When Inuyasha, Kagome, Sesshomaru and Rin find themselves in an odd valley can they find a way to work together? What does Naraku have to do with it? Just who have they found themselves amongst? Can they get back home?
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 509062 Read Count: 5658

[Report This] Published: January 08, 2007 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Quite an intregining story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru react to one another, and to find out more about the strange place they are at, and the people they have meet inso far..hehehe. I loved how Sesshomaru put his foot in it about the mortality of mere humans. lol. 'Tel next chapter I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

OH, what a wonderful story so far! It defently has my interest perked! I'm onto the next chapter, 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Beldin sure is the whipper-snapper huh?..LOL. I also like how the serenity of the place brings to light alittle more of Sesshomaru's feeling, yeah I know he isn't completely feeling less, but you've done a wonderful job of showing us alittle more of him. By the way he cares for Rin, and the bending of his tolerance of Inuyasha, even though it may be just alittle. Though I still perfer Inuyasha WWWWAAAYYY more Sesshomaru. To steal the dirty dwarfs words (lol) he's too much of a "pretty boy" for me...lol..hehe. This is a really wonderful story. Now I'm off to read the next chapter, 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Hehehe..so Inuyasha will have something to spent his restlessness on huh? I'm also sure that Sesshomaru won't let Inuyasha have all the fun. I wonder if Kagome will go, though knowing her she probably won't allow them to leave her behind. I can't wait to read the next chapter (I know, that line sounds awfully familiar hehe) 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Te-he Inuyasha, gotta love him, and so does his horse..lol. So Naraku's presence is finally come into play, mayhap's we will learn some more about the Prophecy? And why are quartet have found themselves in a strange land huh? Oh, and by the way, have I told you what a great story this is? LOL. 'Tel next chapter I'll be reading y'ah, trintiy





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Loved Inuyasha reaction to Kagome's dress. But the parts that had me really rolling were the card game "Go Fish" and Sesshomaru's interest in the "light stick". Poor guy can't go long without being sat, even after stubbing his toe's, which hurts like-a-sun-of-gun let me tell you!!! LOL. Really enjoying the story, 'tel next time I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2007
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Aaahh man I just realized I was at the last chapter of the story so far. I didn't want it to end, this story is so engrossing. I'm glad that Inuyasha finally kissed Kagome, now if only they could talk and or come clean to one another about their feelings, that would be sweet! But you know that saying "Loves Blind" especially when it's staring the two love birds in the face! LOL. Sesshomaru, the sneaky little devil, isn't helping much is he,..hehehe. I wonder if Inuyasha or Sesshomaru are going to offer to leap/carry the horses and people over the cliff. For their both strong enough to do so...hmmm. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. And I wonder why Pol wants everyone to bathe? I guess that's another one I'll have to wait to find out about huh? Oh well, like they say, "All good things come to those who wait" 'Tel next chapter I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2007
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Yash,Yash,Yash,(shaking my head sadly while sighing) poor guy, hopefully he'll realize he's well and truely good enough. That his diffences are what makes him so unique, not to mention so irrestiably handsome..no? lol. I wonder if Sesshomaru will get the answer to his question about Kagome, though the answer is probably yes, I can't wait to read to see how you've written it. Aaahhh..my brain is in over-load melt down, I can't remember the questions or the things I've notice in the story!! lol, but I can say that this is a truely wonderful and amazingly written story that I've read in a while. So thanky-you for sharing it. 'Tel next chapter I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2007
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Ooohh, that was so sweet what Rin did! I can see Inuyasha letting his guard down and playing with Rin, that was also cute and very touching.(I always knew Inuyasha would make a great father! hehe.) And the part with Kagome and the horses, I don't know if you did that for me? or if it was already part of the story, and if so thank-you very much, (and if your reading this thinking what the heck is she talking about, then don't mind me! I'm alittle loopy anyways.lol) I'm also very excited that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru,(alibet slowly I grant you) are getting closer, although Inuyasha is being alittle stubborn about it..lol, which I'm sure they'll both eventually come around. And Naraku has sent Kagara to do his dirty work, which I can't say surprise me. Now to read to see what that baboon wearing,spider-marked fink is up to?..hhmmm, probably no good yup-yup-yup. Lol, well once again you have done a truely remarkable job of sucking me into this wonderful tale. I can't being to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story! 'Tel next time, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2007
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Wooohooo! He finally got it out, that aboy Inuyasha! Lol. So the rest of the gang now knows alittle bit about Naraku. So the game is almost a-foot. Hehehe. I can't wait to read the next chapter, 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2007
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Lol,just how much brew do they have? I swear between Beldin and Belgarath there can't be that much left! LOL. Now to see how things develop between Inuyasha and Kagome, and also the tentive struggle? of brotherliness between Sesshomaur and Inuyasha is worth quite a few chuckles, but also nice to see, as they both said "We both have the same enemy." lol. So Kudo's my friend for another well written chapter in an unbelievably fascinating story. 'Tel next chapter, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2007
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Falls to the floor anime style,with the swirly eyes..lol. Just when it's getting good for them both they get interrupted, though they never could get a brake..hehe. Sesshomaru coming to Inuyasha's defense? I would love to be able to peek inside his head to find out what he's thinking sometime. Though he sure is confusing the hell out of Inuyasha!!..lol. I wonder if it was Naraku or this Bear Cult that sent that spy? I am leaning more towards Naraku, for it's something he'd do, that baboon wearing,spider-marked, fink!! I also loved how Kagome was handling Sesshomaru with his sea sickness. LOL. Minko..hehehe. Well I've enjoyed myself once again with the charactors hijinxs. Can't wait to read the next chapter, 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trintiy





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2007
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

I loved what Kagome said about curiosity and not knowing dog demons.Lol. So Sesshomaru finally knows about Kagome's secret. I also have a question about The Godslayer's Orb. You said that only those of pure of heart,(and of the God Slayers line) could touch it. So what I'm curious about is, can Kagome touch it? For she is also pure of heart and the one who purifys the shards/jewel. I know she's not of his line...but, you know...I'm also like the cat who's alittle to curious for it's own good. Lol. The second thing I was also wondering about is when Kagome uses her minko powers will that give the others the tip they need to figure out her name/meaning in the prophices? Sorry don't mean to bombard you with these question that'll probably be answered in the chapters to come. I really loved this chapter where Kagome/Inuyasha try to explain things from Kagome's time to Sesshomaru..lol. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru really do have alot in common. Hehe. Once again you've done a supber job! And gave me quite afew laughs. Well 'tel next chapter, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: I thought I\'d post my lengthy response here to all of your reviews. I hope you will enjoy the answers! I am so glad you take the time to review my story. I\'m glad you have enjoyed it thus far. And would anyone ever expect Sesshomaru to say anything nice about mortality? I think he\'d rather chop his other arm off first. Beldin is such a youngin\', isn\'t he? Not everyone can pull of 6,000 years old like he can, eh? So you noticed that the Vale tends to tame individuals? Yes, it certainly has affected both our brothers, hasn\'t it? It\'s the nature of the place, considering the master of the valley makes it that way. Belgarath has even mentioned in the past in his own book that the wolves know not to kill in the Vale. Aldur won\'t allow violence in his valley. It\'s only natural that a softer side in both inus would emerge and I\'m glad you like how it\'s come out in Sesshomaru. Good heavens, no, Kagome couldn\'t ever imagine being left behind. And we all know that Inuyasha needs to “play” so it\'s good they\'re going on an adventure to find new playmates...and possibly old ones, too! Yes, Inuyasha\'s horse is a bit in love with him, isn\'t she? I couldn\'t resist making him ride a horse, even if I knew he\'d hate it. The Prophecy..is complex and we\'ll be struggling with it every so often throughout the whole story. It\'s kinda the reason for everything, though, I suppose. Isn\'t Sesshomaru such a curious being? He certainly had to KNOW about Go Fish and it earned him a ticked off Inuyasha. I sometimes wonder (even if we know his mom is a dog in canon), if there isn\'t some cat demon in his heritage. Something has to explain his curiosity. It was about time for Kagome and Inuyasha to kiss, wasn\'t it? Sesshomaru\'s not helping too much, but he\'s trying, that\'s for sure. I think he\'s annoyed with watching them act like silly fools when everyone can tell they want each other. The one thing to remember about Polgara is she likes those around her to be clean. She can\'t do much about Beldin and his aversion to bathing, but that doesn\'t mean she won\'t try to make everyone else around her clean. She\'s raised thousands of little boys, so the motherly nature in her is strong. I think she also has a thing against the smell. The odd thing, though, until the age of 16, Polgara didn\'t bathe hardly at all. She thought herself ugly compared to her blond twin sister and until she had been forced to get a new dress and a good bath for her sister\'s wedding, she didn\'t really know what she was missing. Call it make up for lost time, though at her age she\'s made up for it a thousand times more. Yes, Inuyasha certainly has a complex, doesn\'t he? I don\'t know if he\'ll ever totally get over it, considering how long he spent having it built and beat into him. I rather thought that Inuyasha would have to be a sucker for children, especially little girls. He never stood a chance against Rin, did he? The bit with the horse was already there. I couldn\'t help myself when I put it in, either. Yes, slowly the two brothers are realizing what a waste of time their fighting has been. It\'s too bad they took this long to figure it out. It took enough for Inuyasha to confess his love, didn\'t it? Poor thing, he just is so emotionally inept sometimes. He\'ll get better---someday! Considering between Belgarath and Beldin they can make their own ale out of thin air, it\'s an endless supply. What can I say, they like their brew. I don\'t know if the inu brothers would like you laughing at them as they work out their brother issues! Well you know how it goes, Big Brother can call Little Brother all the bad names he wants, but if anyone else does it, they\'ll get punched in the nose. It\'s okay when Big Brother calls Little Brother a half-breed because it\'s his place as Big Brother. It\'s just how things are. And would anyone expect anything less from Kagome when it comes to Sesshomaru\'s seasickness? Honestly, he\'d never admit it and it\'d aggravate Kagome who\'s never been one to hold her tongue. Sesshomaru will just have to learn to deal with her moods, I guess. Ah, the age old question: If one is pure of heart and that is the requirement to touch the Orb of Aldur/Cthrag Yaska, does that mean Kagome can touch it since she is pure of heart? Well, I\'ve debated with myself about the same question. Yes and no, I suppose. It\'s not so much a matter of purity as it is the Orb gets attached to people. No, it wouldn\'t accept someone who is not “pure” or “innocent,” but it also has a tendency to glue itself to who ever it accepts, too. When Belgarath took the sons of the Alorn king to take the stone back from Torak, Riva was the one to pick it up. He\'s about as innocent as one can come, regardless of the fact by then he had killed more men than many had. He wasn\'t nicknamed Riva Iron Grip for nothing, let\'s just say. However, what made him innocent was he lusted for no power. He was fourth in line to the throne of Aloria, and would have never been a king if it hadn\'t been the division of Aloria, setting up the kingdoms of Riva, Cherek (The King of Aloria, and father of said sons), Drasnia, and Algaria. The second Riva laid his hand on the Orb, it decided to remain with Riva and his line until pretty much the end of days. It would only accept those of the Rivan line to touch and use it, save for Eriond who was used by Belgarath\'s turncoat brother to steal it in an attempt to bring it back to Torak and gain favor with the then sleeping God. I don\'t know if Kagome ever wants to get saddled with that stone on top of the Sacred Jewel. It\'d be an intriguing look and perhaps if it ever fits the plot, possibly. Whew, wasn\'t that a long diatribe? As for Kagome\'s use of her miko powers giving away her status as priestess and her name, no. They already know she is a priestess according to the name. What Belgarath is trying to puzzle out is how she\'s transcending time. He doesn\'t know she\'s from five hundred years in the future on our planet. Time is different in the Belgaraid/Malloreon world. It\'s roughly 5390 or 5400 or so in their calendar. Everything in their calendar revolves around the day Torak cracked the world, where our calendar revolves around Jesus Christ\'s birth. Technically, in their calendar, Kagome would be some 3000 or so odd years from the past if they wanted to figure out what time she came from. It wouldn\'t work, since you\'re dealing with two different world\'s times. And yes, isn\'t Sesshomaru just funny when it comes to the stuff from Kagome\'s time? He sure had to look at all of it and get all curious. I\'d say the brothers are very much alike, more than they\'d ever admit! I don\'t think Inuyasha will mind one hoot about the action upstairs. Not one bit. He\'s enjoying what he\'s doing just fine. Wink wink. I\'m so glad you like how Sesshomaru is working in this story. How could I not have him smell the crayon to find out what it was and all that? I hope you\'ll continue to read and review, and most of all, enjoy the story!





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2007
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

I wonder if Inuyasha will mind missing some of the action?....though the action he's getting right now should definitly make up for what little action he would of gotten up there. Hmmm? LOL. Loved the part where Sesshomaru was sniffing the crayon. I've really come to like Sesshomaru alot in this story. You've done a wonderful job of writting his charactor. I must confess, I check every day to see if you've up dated, just so I can see what those two (Inuyasha and Sesshomaru) are up to next. Even Pol's uncle is quite a trip. Every time I read about him scratching his armpit I keep expecting for him to smell his fingers afterwards. (gross I know) but just something I can see him doing. Lol. Once again my friend, another wonderfully well done chapter, 'tel next time, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Wow. I am so glad you leave such wonderful reviews. It makes my whole day when I see one. If you would like, I can leave you a much more detailed response at my live journal then posting a reply to each and every review individually. I do hope you\'ll continue to read and speak up often! You can find my live journal here: http://farawayeyes4.livejournal.com/



Crossing Swords by bluezinthos Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]

Summary:
Two rival kingdoms, one rulers desperate attempt to halt an all out war. two teenage children brought together by politics, joined by a child, and perhaps the keys to an evil darker than anyone could have imagined.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Naraku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18725 Read Count: 642

[Report This] Published: January 08, 2007 Updated: February 14, 2007


Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: From Strangers to Lovers

Hhmmm, a very interesting and very different story. I like it..hehehe. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next. 'Tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: From Strangers to Lovers

Hhmmm, a very interesting and very different story. I like it..hehehe. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next. 'Tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Sunlight, salutations, and Soap Bubbles

I'm enjoying this story immensely. I can't wait to read to see how it go's with Sango and Kagome's father. Can't wait for the next chapter, 'til then, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity



All I Want for Christmas by Patchcat Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]

Summary:


All Inuyasha wants for Christmas is to finally get the girl; but when his ex-girlfriend Kikyo comes back to town, things start to get a little strange and all of his holiday hopes might not go quite as he's planned. Now Kagome's in real danger, and it's up to him to keep her safe -- no matter what.

Categories: Legends

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9708 Read Count: 267

[Report This] Published: January 09, 2007 Updated: January 09, 2007


Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Yash really put his foot in it this time huh? lol. But hey, you know what they say about Murphy's Law..What Ever Will Go Wrong Will Go Wrong..and foot-in-mouth disease is no exception,lol. I hope Inuyasha gets Kagome the stuff doggie, who wouldn't want one that looks like him to cuddle up with? And the pink glittery and gold heart collar should go well with Sesshomaur's fluffy tail yes!?!..hehehe. Well keep up the great work and 'Tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lol, I can just imagine a pouty faced Inuyasha, and how cute is that! Can't wait to read to see how it goes at lunch for him..hehehe. Maybe he can suck it up some and apologies to Kagome huh? Great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter, 'Tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity



The Soul Within by Angel449 Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]

Summary:
Unable to accept the destiny her father has chosen for her, Kagome runs away from the life she has always known, into a mystery involving time, magic and an angry youkai. [Inspired by Beauty and the Beast]
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35732 Read Count: 6908

[Report This] Published: January 16, 2007 Updated: November 10, 2007


Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: To Escape

Aaah poor Kagome, hopefully she will find her prince charming..and we all know who that is (sighs) lucky girl, whish I was her. LOL. Well I'm off to read the next chapter, 'til then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Hi Trinity!! Thank you so much for your review! And yep...the name of the site gives away the pairing. :P ^_^





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: To Meet

So Kagome has meet our wild hanyou Inuyasha. I wonder how she's going to get out of this? And Kikyou a ghost? Hhmmm..I hope she didn't lead our young miko to any misfortune. I'm off to read the next chapter, 'til then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Kikyo is explained in the next chapter. ^_^ I hope that you enjoy the next chapter!





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: To Befriend

Now my suspicion has been confirmed. This story reminds me of Beauty and The Beast. Though with an enjoyable and suspenseful twist. It's a wonderful story so far. I'm off to read the next chapter, so 'til next time, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Yep, the classic story of Beauty and the Beast with a feual twist. Glad you\'re liking it!





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: To Learn

So now we know why Kikyou has lead Kagome to Inuyasha's castle. Let's just hope this Beauty can tame the wild Youkai before it's to late. Another wonderful chapter. I'm off to read the next, 'til then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Thanks! Your reviews are awesome too read. ^_^ Yes, let\'s hope that the purist act will soon be realized!





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2007
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: To Decide

Kagome must really despise Naraku if she's willing to chance her life by being caught when Inuyash is in his tranformed state. Can't wait to read the next chapter, 'til then, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Yep, she despises him all right! Thanks!





Reviewer: trinity757575 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2007
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: To Change

Hopefully Kagome's plan will work. Especially with Naraku hot on her trail. 'Til next chapter I'll be reading y'ah, trinity

Author's Response: Naraku is coming soon...*jaws music* :P