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Summary:
InuYasha finds out the deeper meaning behind why he was given the locket
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 889 Read Count: 342

[Report This] Published: January 03, 2007 Updated: January 03, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Her Heart Shaped Locket

Oh, wow! That was powerful, heartwrenching, wonderfully tender. You got me right here. *hand on heart* Though that bit at the beginning where Inuyasha admitted that he liked to make her angry really got me too. I almost laughed out loud. :) Great stuff. I look forward to reading your other work.



Shades of Gray by fallenangel7583 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 116]

Summary:

Kagome wants to escape from the pressures of the Higurashi name, InuYasha wishes to prove him more then a black sheep. Both lead duel lives at sun set. When paths cross in that gothic setting, fires of the soul ignite. Little do they know who the other is. Toss in complete disorder of outside influences that refuse to let the lovers unite, and Chaos ensues. AU, inu/kag...with ::gag:: some kikyo/inu and kag/oberon
Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Hentai, Psychological
Warnings: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 435743 Read Count: 9740

[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: August 09, 2012


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: in the forest of illusions

Hmm... You weren't kidding when you said it was kind of dark. Usually when people say that I'm disappointed. I'm intrigued by this story. I'll definitely be back for more.

Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad that you're intrigued. that makes mesmile. >.< Hope i don't dissapoint!



Crossing Swords by bluezinthos Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]

Summary:
Two rival kingdoms, one rulers desperate attempt to halt an all out war. two teenage children brought together by politics, joined by a child, and perhaps the keys to an evil darker than anyone could have imagined.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Naraku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18725 Read Count: 645

[Report This] Published: January 07, 2007 Updated: February 13, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signed
Date: January 17, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: From Strangers to Lovers

I'm so happy to have found this story again. I'm going to re-read it as soon as possible. :)




Summary:



A tale of artificial obsession.
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Horror, Oneshot, Sci-fi
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4481 Read Count: 734

[Report This] Published: March 17, 2007 Updated: March 17, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Guilty by Design, a Tale...

Wow! The ending was a bit of a shocker but I think I love it more because of it. I'd like to read more of work. Looking forward to the day you take the maintence page down. :)



Displacement by Drake Clawfang Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]

Summary:
Based on a collaboration with InuGrrrl. During an aurora over Asia, Inuyasha and Kagome leap down the well...and end up a few thousand years and miles out of place. Fanfic in a historical background.
Disclaimer: Rumiko Takahasi owns all these featured characters. I don't...yet. Gimme a few years.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45773 Read Count: 3659

[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: "Yaoguai!"

You blinded me with the science bit but I'm back now. I can do history... most of the time. :) Great start. Love the detail. I'm looking forward to reading more of this tomorrow night.



Springfever Obsession by vikikibouki Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]

Summary:
When Springfever hits, it hits hard. How does Inuyasha cope? And for that matter, how does Kagome?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10361 Read Count: 2452

[Report This] Published: June 02, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Mammy! Oh, it's lovely. It's so hot and sweet and sensual all at the same time. I'm going to come by tomorrow night and read the rest of it. It's late and now I've got to go bed. I hope you get my message soon. What was that you called me, your bunnykins? :) I don't think I've ever had so cute a nickname.

Author's Response:

Yes, my babybunnikins.

 

And I'm glad that you liked it. Take care, now.




Summary:
this is basically Goodbye, Farewell done from Inuyasha's point of view. the ever so AWSOME Ro0tin4Kagome suggested it, so i'm like, i got time, y not! =D so yes, hope you enjoy. This one goes into more detail as to what happened that chilly, earie day 2 years ago, when Kagome took matters into her own hands. I SUGGEST READING GOODBYE, FAREWELL BEFORE THIS ONE. oh yes, and sorry in advance! this one is a little lengthy
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Language, Suicide
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1414 Read Count: 128

[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 04, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: My Angel

Oh wow! I'm stunned. Not exactly the outcome I expected but... beautifully written like before... and the suggestion that Inuyasha was having sex with both of them... *shakes head* At times it seemed to me in the manga that there was no contest. What Inuyasha felt for Kagome was different but Kikyou would always be his first love first and foremost. I guess that's where fanfiction comes in... for me at least. :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEW! and SOOO sorry for the VERY LATE reply >.< thank you so much for your read and comment, much much appreciated.



Making Things Right by inufan625 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]

Summary:
Kagome makes a wish that changes the world to give everyone a chance at the lives they were meant to have. With a new threat looming she must remember what was forgotten. AU but also ties into the story of the manga. CONTAINS LEMONS NC-17... Set in the future with ties to the past.

Blanket disclaimer: I don't own InuYasha or any of its characters. This work is no way intendended to infiringe on the copyrights of Rumiko Takahashi or various others who liscense InuYasha, or make me any money. This applies to all chapters contain within...
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kouga, Miroku, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141084 Read Count: 15725

[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: November 11, 2013


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: A First Date

Oooo... I like this one. It's unfolding so nicely already. I wonder where you'll take it? Sorry! Just thinking (typing) out loud. I really like this concealment spell thing. It's kind of implied that daiyoukai's can do it in the manga but you're taking it to a whole other level. Great stuff! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!




Summary:


InuYasha is a reclusive, eccentric, rock star and Kagome is hired as his personal assistant. She gets in a lot of shady, dangerous situations as she helps him search for the missing Shikon no Tama formula.


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Naraku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance, Sci-fi, Thriller
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118023 Read Count: 24299

[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Interview

Hmm... well I'm intrigued. :) Been meaning to read this for a while and it was well worth the wait. I'm looking forward to getting through all 39 chapters (was it?) in time. Fantastically written. I'm loving your Inuyasha already but then again I've always had thing for gorgeous, grumpy men. :) But now I've got to go to bed. Roll on tomorrow night!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read my "little" story! LOL! Yes, there are 39 chapters - and much more to go! I wouldn't be surprised if there were 60 in the end, but it all depends on where my muses take this. I wouldn't be surprised if I was on chapter 42 by the time you read all I have posted so far! I really appreciate the review, and look forward to seeing how you like the rest of the story.



12 Trees of Christmas by Chibi Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]

Summary:


Kagome’s sick and spending Christmas in the Feudal Era. What will her friends do to make her feel better?
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Fluff
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1162 Read Count: 530

[Report This] Published: November 14, 2007 Updated: November 14, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: On the 12th Tree of Christmas, Kagome gave to me...

*chuckles* Awww... Cute ending. You mean Kouga's tail isn't real? *shocked expression* *mutters to self* And all this time I thought it was... Nice description though. :) I felt sorry for the poor bastard.

Author's Response: hahaha! I heard somewhere that it wasn\'t. =P And thanks, lol. I felt sorry for him too.




Summary:

Inuyasha loved to tease Kagome. Until she used her secret weapon. Out came the incense, down went Inuyasha.

Now Inuyasha's realised something of great importance. Has Kagome gotten more than she bargained for? Will she survive?


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15934 Read Count: 1719

[Report This] Published: November 16, 2007 Updated: April 18, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Incense & Mirth

Oh Mammy, that was so funny I laughed out loud. I love it! On to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Glad that you liked it. Sorry I couldn't get to you sooner. I've been ill.





Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: The Prayer

Ooo... very pretty ending. Uh, sorry! I'm back now. Got distracted by the stars. Wow! That was a bit of a rollercoaster of a read veering between conflict and tenderness. I liked the fluff at the beginning but I really liked the angst as well. I really hope that Kagome does recover soon. Inuyasha praying was really sweet and funny but heartbreaking too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great stuff! :)

Author's Response:

Which 'stars' are you talking about, Bunnykins?

This story is surprising me even more than my readers, believe me. Once I start to write, all kinds of ideas pop into my head. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. If I'm not feeling too bad, I'll try to get out another chapter for the week-end. I'm still working on the title. I have 3, but I'm still not satisfied. Watch out for it, though.

Hugs, Sweetie!



The Best Gift by inuyashaloverr Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]

Summary:

It is said that music sooths the savage beast, but what of the soul.

On a holiday, a certain Hanyou reflects back on his, and sees all as 'The Best Gift'.


Categories: Fables
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2090 Read Count: 991

[Report This] Published: November 25, 2007 Updated: November 25, 2007


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Fantastic stuff. I wish I could leave you a prettier review but I'm a little stuck for words...

Author's Response: These words here work just fine for me! *hugzz* Am so glad you liked it. I didn't lose all my hair writing this, I have a few strands left, hehe. :D




Summary:
This is both my first one-shot and my very first lemon. I hope you enjoy it. It was a trip to write. There really is no need for a summary. The title should explain it all.  Inuyasha is talked into confessing his feelings for Kagome and I'm pretty sure you can figure out what comes next.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6132 Read Count: 618

[Report This] Published: January 16, 2008 Updated: January 16, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Confessions of a Hanyou

Wow! I'm trying to organise my thoughts here. That was fantastic. The first bit was so tender and wow! that love scene was hot. I'm sorry but I laughed out loud at the bit with the youkai talking. You'll forgive me won't you? And Kagome's little snore at the end. Nice touch. :) Oh this story is so cute! Faved.

Author's Response:

Thank So Much!  Nah, don't mind a bit.  I was chuckling myself as I was writing it.  Had to have my "dirty demon" in there, though.  ROFL  Thanks again! 



Love's Smirking Revenge by Langus Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]

Summary:

**Chapter 20-23 now up!** Inuyasha Takahashi is a beat down detective heading the most publicized yakuza murder investigation of the year. Kagome Higurashi is a journalist who likes a good mystery. When the two clash over the investigation will sparks fly or will they get burned?
Categories: Legends

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kouga
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123459 Read Count: 2895

[Report This] Published: February 16, 2008 Updated: January 11, 2009


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: On A Dark and Stormy Night

Langus! I'm so happy that you're posting this story here. I read it on MediaMiner sometime ago. I reviewed once or twice under my old name but rest assured I will reveiw under this penname too. I'm looking forward to re-reading this fic again come porn night (Friday). :)

Author's Response:

That's fantastic! I'm glad to hear I've managed to recruit you from Mediaminer :) Just out of curiosity, what was your old penname? Well I hope you have a fantastic week and I should definitely have another updated posted by Friday :) Cheers!

- Langus



A Captain's Prize by chanda Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]

Summary:

Kagome Higurashi was a normal woman about to be wedded to a fine solider. On her way home from a short vacation her ship is attacked. With her being the only survivor, Kagome must now rely on a Pirate to become her rescuer; but she never expected to fall madly in love with him. How will she explain this to her father, and more importantly to her fiancé?

This story is now being Beta'd!


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Language, Rape/Non-consensual
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70096 Read Count: 4453

[Report This] Published: February 22, 2008 Updated: March 20, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2008
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Pirates! Heehee... I'm getting very excited here, all those rough men fighting and swaggering around talking in that old-fashioned English. And those scenes between Inuyasha/Kagome and Miroku/Sango, very tender. Ooo... I like it a lot. I'm looking forward to more but I read ten chapters on the trot and my brain needs rest. *sigh* Roll on tomorrow night! :)

Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so excited that you like it! Yes, don't over do it. I don't want to be responsible for whatever ails you. :P Yes, I like the old English flair myself.

Thanks for the review...



Phantom Horses by vikikibouki Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]

Summary:
Kagome Higurashi has a very special gift. One that could either make her famous, or get herself killed. When she's asked to help out because of strange things going on in a meadow where a new house is being built, how will she cope? Especially when the detective is none other than Inuyasha Taisho, himself?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Naraku, Other, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, Occult, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Molestation
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15762 Read Count: 1410

[Report This] Published: March 07, 2008 Updated: November 12, 2009


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it a lot. The way it's written, the characters just jump off the page. I'm a sucker for this kind of thing. I know it's completely different but Medium is one of my favourite TV shows. Please write more.

Author's Response:

I will Bunnykins. It's based on a true story. I'm already working on the next chappie.

And I'm really happy that you like it.





Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fantastic. :) It was well worth the wait. Gods! I could feel her terror as the spectral horse came towards her. I can't help but wonder what in all the hells pissed if off so much! Pardon the bad language, Mammy, but I'm getting excited by this fic. I just love the Inuyasha/Kagome dynamic in this one. There's real passion in that shouting. Can't wait for it to translate into something else! :) I'm looking forward to your next update. I hope it will be soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Bunnykins. I'm trying to do good with this one. Be patient. I promise that you'll like it. I'll be updating as soon as possible.

As for what pissed the horses off so damned much, you'll see. It's worth the wait. HUGS!



Of Pink and Black by Knittingknots Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
Pink the Plot bunny is struggling to get a story written with Fabio, my romance writing muse.  Her evil twin Black the Plot Fairy escapes and runs poor Inu and Kagome through their paces trying to plot a one shot.  Definitely not to be taken seriously.  Written for the At First Tweak LJ community challenge, "Calligraphy."
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Oneshot, Parody
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1373 Read Count: 52

[Report This] Published: March 26, 2008 Updated: March 26, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Of Pink and Black

Aww... that end bit was so cute. :)

*chuckles* K-chan's entry suddenly makes a lot more sense. Great stuff.

Your fics are on my list of things to read. I'm guess as stalkers go I've been a little remiss. Must remedy that in the near future.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!  I don't do fics like this that often, and when people laugh, it really makes me feel good!  Thanks!



Bark At The Moon by Dangersque Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Summary:

Photobucket Inuyasha was looking forward to the best summer ever after graduation. Instead, he finds out his father's alive, he's not human, and he's being recruited by both sides of a secret war. And he thought calculus was hard...
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29087 Read Count: 2270

[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: March 07, 2010


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo... I like it already. :) You got me well and truly hooked. Looking forward to your next update.

P.S. I just love your kluzy Inuyasha. *kidnaps him* 



Author's Response: Hey, give that back! I can't finish the story without him!





Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Cool! Two chapter together. :) I'm seriously loving this story. I can't wait to see what you do with it next. I just adore you InuTaisho. I want to kidnap him too and tie him up in the playroom with Inuyasha. Oops! I think I said too much. *blushes* *kidnaps him anyway* Sesshomaru's a wonderfully snotty little brat and Kagome's tough but sexy. When is she going to show us that tender heart? I'm looking forward to more. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hey! Stop abducting my cast!





Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sesshomaru, the psycho, eh? But he's still a pretty kitty, right? I feel sorry for poor Yashie, having to put up with that crap. I like the Kagome-the-spy angle. Teehee... I can see life at WcDonalds becoming very interesting indeed. :) Hmm... baseball is pretty popular in Japan and they really dig American rock bands so I wouldn't worry too much about it. It is AU so you can pretty much do anything you like - I do! :) Looking forward to your next chapter.



The Kiss by chanda Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]

Summary:
This is my first one shot of the reuniting of Inuyasha and Kagome. This contains spoilers from Manga 558.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 631 Read Count: 732

[Report This] Published: June 18, 2008 Updated: June 18, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that's so sweet! :) Thank you for sharing. I haven't read up to the end yet but in a way we all knew it was coming.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks, for reading this even though you didn't finish the Manga. Yes, thank heavens we have fan fiction to read. :)

Thanks for the review and stars. Until next time, my friend....

 




Summary:

Just a little tribute and a giftfic! to the wonderful Inugrrrl for her three wonderful years of IY fiction writing.

Here is to BUAU. . .



Categories: Fables

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Yaoi
Warnings: BDSM, Explicit Sex, Homosexual/Gay Sex, Implied Rape, Language
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27794 Read Count: 5352

[Report This] Published: June 22, 2008 Updated: November 25, 2008


Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: On Your Knees Part Three

Hmm... I think that it's true to say that not only is this story outside the box, it's smashed the thing to pieces. I can't say that Inuyasha's a very attractive character. He's everything that I despise in a man, yet I felt compelled to keep reading. (I admit the description of him made me chuckle though. He sounds absolutely gorgeous.) Your style of writing is so rich in description, so sensuous; I wanted more. (That gay sex thing with Miroku was interesting, by the way. :)) What is Kagome's secret? To what levels to do you plan to take this, as uncomfortable as the last scene made me feel? I really want to know. Update soon. Pretty please? *puppy eyes*

Author's Response: Thanks! That one of the things I usually try to avoid in stories both reading/writing. So I made several adjustments to make him easier to write. Like saving himself for his one love. He is beautiful! He\'s a very confident man with little to no insecurities. Thanks again! That part with Miroku was so incredible hard to write. I get pretty uncomfortable with writing InuYasha in a M/M setting. Other characters I can handle with no problems at all. Kagome\'s secret is very soon to be revealed! Go back to the warnings and you\'ll know how far it\'ll be. I was uncomfortable at first writing it but I did remember what the ending twist is. I can\'t say much more because I\'ll give away my twists and the surprises. But if it\'ll help you out.. just send me a private email and I\'ll ease your mind if you like. But any who decides to stick with it will be very surprised and do double-takes. There are many twists up ahead and Inu hasn\'t finishing Dommin\' her.





Reviewer: midnightwhispers Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2009
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: On Your Knees, Bitch, You Are MINE!!! Part Six

Well, this next section should be interesting! Heheh... Sorry I took so long to catch up, Nikkie. I've got so much reading ahead of me, and I'm only getting to it now... I had an idea that she might be a "intersexed", but I never thought she'd have both sets of organs, and that they'd be functioning, but it's your story, Nikkie. You can do whatever you want. :) If you've ever read any mpregs you'll know that people take quite a bit of artistic licence with the human/youkai body... I have to express my relief that this didn't turn into a rape fic, that there was a twist in the end. I like how you turned it around. I'll be watching out for your next update.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I sure hope it does stay interesting. Yes, when they have both genders one or both is underdeveloped or misformed some way. My little artistic license was to have them normally formed and functioning. Thanks! I was hoping that twist would work! Having Kagome pushing his buttons just to get him to make a move. *bows* As soon as I work out this one scene. LOL