Reviewer: Say0mi Saki Signed
December 03, 2010
Chapter 14: Then She Realized: She Was Still Just A Little Girl
Oh. my. god.
WHAT IS WITH YOU AND THESE KILLER ENDINGS?! Seriously, each ending for each chapter has left my mouth hanging open either in shock or disbelief. -____- You're tryna kill me here. LOL. (sigh) I really should be doing my homework, and I was making progress restraining myself from clicking the link to this chapter, BUT OF COURSE, I STILL CAVED! I couldn't resist the temptation. GAH!
I liked how you emphasized more on Kagome's age, because she really is just a teenager. She hasn't even experienced her life to the fullest yet. She's been raped, gang banged, given away by her parents, fallen in love with two men, and then married! Yet, she still hasn't gotten the chance to really live like a teenager. Sneaking out late at night, worrying over huge tests, highschool crushes, and college isn't even an option for her since she already plans on starting a family. She's missed out on so much, and she's still missing out. It's pretty tragic once you think about it.
So, I'm assuming that Inuyasha wasn't surprised with Kagome's statement since it was mentioned that his impulsive decision was purely based on the nature of Kagome's call. Michiru's a sweetheart, he really is, but like I said... it's scary shit when my favorite couple aren't together. LOL. SERIOUSLY. GAAAH! But dang, Michiru's freakin' Mister Perfect over there! I can't stand the thought of him getting hurt, yet I'm still over here cheering Inuyasha on to get his girl back. Even when Michiru's obviously the good guy here. What a damn shame, I'm over here wooting for the bad guy. -___- LOL. Sheesh, I'm just as bad as Kagome. I can't fully make my decisions. >.<
Kagome's reaction from Inuyasha's proclamation did surprise me a bit. Simply because I did expect more of a romantic moment between them, but it still makes sense that she would be terrified of it. She's 16, and confused as fuuuuck. GAAAAAH! Training? I certainly hope this training isn't multiple rape sessions again like all the previous times Inuyasha "trained" Kagome. Then again, I doubt that it would be... but I can never be sure. I'm just so freakin' pumped for the next chapter. I'm wooting and rooting for Inuyasha, but I'm still cheering Michiru on for being the story's sweetheart. -___- AGAIN, a damn shame! ABBY NEEDS TO PICK A DAMN GUY. (X
You are getting more and more amazing with all these speedy updates. SHOOOOT. AWESTRUCK. (X
Oh! And as for Haou Airen, when you do read it, YOU HAVE TO TELL ME ALL ABOUT YOUR THOUGHTS ON IT AND YOUR REACTION TO IT! LOL. That manga had me crying for days. No lie. Days. It certainly helped me out with my dramatic monologue though, because when I finally performed it in class, all I had to think about was the damn ending for Haou Airen and I began BAWLING my eyes out! LOL. I definitely think that you'll fall for Haou Airen's Hakuron as much as you fell for Kaikan Phrase's Sakuya! GAH! SAKUYA! <3
I LOVED Kaikan Phrase, and I wished Haou Airen ended as sweetly at Kaikan Phrase did! I LOVE Mayu Shinjo. My favorite are probably Kaikan Phrase, Haou Airen, Akuma na Eros (I can't believe I cheered on the devil and not the angel in this one), and Love Celeb (though this is probably my least favorite out of all of them).
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what's up with Inuyasha and Kagome next chapter! I have to see how the hell this all plays out!
.. And you know what? I bet that the next chapter's ending gonna drive me crazy too, because you just love feeding us all this suspense. LOL. (X
(Sigh) Now, I have to go back to homework. Smh.
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I <3 you for reals! And DO YOUR HOMEWORK!!!!!! (......Says the girl who still has a paper on tricology to write.) -____-
I'll get to it eventually! X3 And really, I felt the need to express Kagome's age more in this chapter, because you're right; she is just SO young and hardly had a chance to live out life normally. It is so sad, but hopefully, it won't be that way forever....(Hint hint, lolz!!!!!)
And yep! You assume correct; pretty much, the call went like this:
InuYasha: *Groan* Who the hell is calling me this late...? *answers* Hello?
Kagome: H-hi. Did I wake you?
*InuYasha sits up in bed, surprised to hear from Kagome so soon*
"No, I was awake" (total lie)
"Oh." (hesitance) "Good." (Silence for about thirty seconds) "Um...were you serious about...my training?"
"If this an attempt to get out of it..." (actually hadn't fully planned what to do about her training)
"Oh, n-no! I mean...*pause*....I want to."
"*SHOCK*...*PAUSE*...I'll be there tomorrow."
And that's pretty much how it went, lol. He was so shocked, he had to make sure this just wasn't some trick and went to see it for himself. ONLY love can make you jump on a plane on impulse is what I say lol, so it's pretty clear that InuYasha's feelings for her are concrete at this point, whereas Kagome has resigned herself to love him, she just can't be with him because in her own way, she's also "loyal" to Michiru.
BUT!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!! SAKUYA!!!!! SEX! SEX IN LEATHER PANTS AND NECKLACES!!!!!!!! XDDDDDD Oh, Sakuya. So much sex. His pheramones SCREAM "Yes, I know I'm sexy." Kaikan Phrase was actually the first "M for Mature" manga I had ever read and I didn't even know what sort of Manga it was, only that I loved seeing Aine (a GREAT manga heroine) in charge for the most part and I'm SUCH a romantic, and then when I started seeing WHY it was rated "M" for Mature, I was like, "SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" I have ALSO read Akuma no Eros and Love Celeb (I'll agree with you on Love Celeb; not a fave, but I don't mind reading it again) and IALSO cannot believe I was cheering hardcore for the devil in Akuma No Eros!!!! X3333 But it was hard NOT to cheer for him! Oh, Mayu Shinjou, how your works turn some of us into "bad girls" lol. And I will DEFINITELY get around to reading Haou Airen, probably towards the end of THIS story, because I don't want to take any ideas and I will DEFINITELY tell you if I was bawling my eyes out (which I will undoubtedly be doing lol). I'm so excited!!!!!!
But, I'm dozing hardcore, I'll see you next chapter! *HUGS* Thanks so much, as always!!!!!!!!!!!!