Reviewer: jambam Signed
July 28, 2010
Chapter 5: Kindness
The first few chapters was just shocking for me. I would have never expected it to turn out like the way it did. Your such an amazing writer and I love your ideas for your stories, they are so different, dark and it seems to have no limit about anything. I never know what to expect for up coming chapters, I always try and guess and always get it wrong, and I love it that way because it is so unpredictable.
This ‘Mr. Wonderful’ I feel a bit ikky about him, why would he spend so much money just by talking?? Seems kinda off I reckon. Lol
By the way I love the last scene where Kagome gets spank, and not in a pleasurable way. I’m not Fucked in the head or something, I just reckon it’s really appropriate especially when your trying to punish someone. I mean why would you punish someone and give them pleasure in some way??
Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to whats going to happen in the story.Author's Response: Thanks so much for the love! <3 I seriously, seriously mean it! Thanks so much for your kind words. I used to write happy fluff, but I figured...meh, okay, a little darkness makes for a good story, you know? AND YES! Another opened-minded soul about Mr Wonderful. It DOES seem off, doesn't it? Thank you so much not assuming he is Kagome's white knight! I mean, he could be, but you never know! And I had SO much fun with the spanking scene. Originally, it was going to be just a boring spanking one, but at the same time, InuYasha is a hardcore sadist, you know? That's like being snapped with a soaking wet towel JUST as you're stepping out of the shower! And I really wanted it to be a harsh punishment, you know? Glad you liked it! I'll be updating soon! <3 <3 <3