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Real Name: Leah Hudson
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Metamorphosis by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]

Summary:
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"Sometimes in the winds of change we find our true direction." An unusual youkai attack transforms Kagome's very being. Can she come to terms with her new self, and can Inuyasha accept, perhaps even love, the new Kagome?


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 387448 Read Count: 42723

[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: December 02, 2010


Reviewer: Damara Signed
Date: February 04, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Rebirth

Coming a bit late to the party, but I've spent more than a week reading this when I should have been working, so the least I can do is comment.

Things I liked:

-The way you handled Kagome's transition to hanyou. It seems realistic and in character.

-Your villains could have been lifted from the canon series; they fit in seamlessly and didn't come off as Mary Sueish as so many fanfic OCs do.

-The details of characterization. I find that the more IC a fanfic holds, the more I forgive other faults.

Things I loved:

-The Demon!Inuyasha mating scene in chapter 29. There are some pretty grody and violent depictions out there on the net of what happens were he to lose control, and I think you nailed the dynamic - that he would never actually hurt her, that it wasn't so much non-consensual as it was inevitable (If she hadn't been willing, she would have purified him), and his guilt afterward.

-When Souta tells his mom she's creepy, and she agrees; very Stepford. It made me laugh.

All in all, very well done and worth the read.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  That chapter 29 was a fun one to write, though I always did wonder if I overdid the lemonade.  So I'm grateful that you mentioned it.  Your take was exactly what I was going for.