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Maintenance by cesuraee Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]

Summary:
InuYasha has worked maintenance at the Sunset Apartments for years. In all that time he has thought the tenants to be nothing but a bunch of idiots who couldn't fix their own problems if their life depended on it. He never expected that one tenant would make him see things differently, and he definitely didn't think he would end up spending every waking moment thinking about her. It all came as a surprise, and he cannot bring himself to regret any of his actions.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Religious, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Voyeurism
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13572 Read Count: 525

[Report This] Published: June 01, 2014 Updated: June 02, 2014


Reviewer: Ranaka Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Maintenance

Holy crap this was hot as hell, and also the story itself was just adorable. I'm in agreement with the other reviewers: you have absolutely nothing to be shy about when it comes to posting your stories. You have a gift for writing. The fact that I read every single word without skimming is a testament to that, as I tend to glaze over paragraphs if it doesn't seem like there's much dialogue coming up. I'm a slow reader, so that's why I'd do that. However, the way you describe Inuyasha's mindset was just so fun to read that I powered through!

Seeing that this was published just last month, I'm really anxious to see what other stories you'll throw up on here. I just joined this site today, and your story is the first I read. I just felt compelled to leave a review (though I usually don't have much to say). I understand if you don't feel like writing, or if you have writer's block, or simply aren't interested anymore...but lack of courage should not be the reason to decide not to post something. Truly, you have NOTHING to fear. You're awesome. I hope you intend to keep up the amazing work! :)

Author's Response:

Oh my, that was just about the highest compliment to ever receive. It seems that we have very similar reading styles, and while it's usually nothing against the writing when I do end up skimming, it does say something when I do read every single word. I am glad that you enjoyed every word, I'm working up to posting another story soon. Hopefully I get it out shortly, and I really hope that you enjoy it just as much.

Welcome to the site! I joined back in 2012 and there are a lot of fun stories to read. I'm sure you'll love all of them. I really appreciate your review, it means a lot! 

I come upon writer's block quite often. Personally I think it's because I lack the proper faith in my story and it makes me over think everything, but I'm working through that! I will be publishing a new story in a few days, so I hope you enjoy that one just as much.

Thank you again for your kind words! It means a lot that you read my work, and the review is just icing on the cake :) So thank you!