Reviewer: Skibbles Signed
June 15, 2012
Chapter 1: Initiation Night
When I first started reading this story I was a little thrown off by how evil Inuyasha seemed, but after the second chapter he immediately grew on me and continued to be even sexier as the story went on. At the end I almost missed his sexy evilness. XD
I really enjoyed reading this story even though I had to stop for a couple of days after the whole Kiyomi plot twist chapter. I was so heartbroken I couldn't keep reading! Seriously. I tried reading other fanfictions to make myself happy again but my mind just kept drifting back to this story and screaming at me "WHY?!?!" Haha. Where in the world did you pull that twist from? I would have died while writing such heartbreaking chapters! But...after a couple of days of digesting the information I realized I LOVED the twist. Heartbreak and all. It added a fresh and unique storyline. =]
I do have a few questions for you about the story.
1. While I'm not a huge fan of Miroku/people other than Sango pairings, I found the Miroku/Rin pairing very interesting. =] At first i wasn't sure how I'd feel about it, but it really grew on me. So my question is, did you pair those two together because their characters happened to work for your storyline or because you love putting Miroku and Rin together? I've actually never read a Miroku/Rin story so I'm just curious as to your thoughts behind that pairing? =]
2. When and how did Inuyasha get his adorable ears back? Was Kikyou's purifying of them not permanent? You mentioned his ears a couple of times in the last chapter so I was just wondering if perhaps I missed something? Did he get them back after getting his youkai powers back from Kagome?? (By the way his ears were sorely missed the whole time I was reading this. I LOVE HOW DIFFERENT THIS STORY IS AND HOW MANY FEELS IT GIVES ME!!! ADHGHSGY! LOVE!)
3. Did you have the Kiyomi plot twist in mind since the very beginning of the fic?!?! That twist seriously blew my mind. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around it! =D
And 4. Your dirty mind seriously calls to my dirty mind. :3 I can't get over how sexy all of your stories are. (Ok. So that was a statement and not a question.)
Overall....I love this story. I have a feeling this will be one that sticks with me and I'll be waking up three years from now with it on my mind like the also amazing story Shades of Gray. Now onto read some of your other amazing stories!
<3/ Skibbles, your new fan. :]