Penname: Rochoa [Contact]
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Member Since: May 09, 2012
Membership Status: Member
Bio: 20152903


Quick Update:


Risen in Patria – Updated. I finally finished this during my spring break, so go give it a read!


Craigslist – Totally lied to you guys about this being the next update. I'm still like 60 pages in...and struggling with the structure. I keep adding stuff on and moving stuff around and rewriting, and I'm still not yet satisfied with my Frankenstein. I've probably read and reread it so many times I'm not even sure what I need to take out or sprinkle in. Sorry, y'all.


ALWH, Home, and School Bonding – I have a decent chunk of each completed, but I haven't had the time or inspiration to work on them extensively for a while
(and I don't anticipate that will change until summer break rolls around), but as always, check my profile for any news on progress.


P.S. I am currently in the process of looking for a beta!


Why I'm Looking for a Beta:


Because no matter how hard I try, I will always be lacking in certain areas and will always make mistakes. Also, I hate proofreading and, as a consequence, I'm sure my stories are riddled with typos and errors.


What I Want:


1. Someone to bounce ideas, scenes, plot ideas, etc. off of. Sometimes I just can't tell which scenes are off, which paragraphs out of place, what dialogue reads awkwardly, what event contradicts something else, etc. This keeps me from posting any of my stories in a timely manner, so someone please save me!


2. Someone with a solid grasp of English grammar, syntax and spelling. While I do my best to use proper grammar and avoid typos, I make silly mistakes quite often; it would be great to be able to send a near-final draft to a reader, and have him or her be able to catch things like, “I'm will go to...” or have him or her point out how a character seemingly teleported from one position to the next in a paragraph.


I'm not looking for someone to beta read all my stories, and if you are interested in one story, feel free to send me a message anyway.


I'm looking though the beta databases as well, but I figured if I posted a note in my profile, this at least guarantees that any potential users that stumble across this don't think I'm a rando and enjoy (I assume) at least one of my stories. If this is a prerequisite, I would be happy to act as proofreader or beta in return, as long as you're okay with my taking a bit longer to respond with edits.




About Me


Honestly, I feel weird writing this part, because I have no idea what people would want to know about me, so I'm just going to use this as a fun, therapeutic 'dump' for both the pertinent and completely irrelevant aspects of myself that I don't mind people knowing.


I'm an avid fanfiction reader and have been since 2005, when I was first introduced to the world of Inuyasha. Since then, I have come to like Avatar: The Last Airbender, Legend of Korra and Game of Thrones fanfiction as well. I tried my hand at writing many, many years ago, under a different penname, but they were poorly planned, terribly written, and just overall bad. I took a six year hiatus from writing and finally decided to give it another shot...so here I am again.


My appetite for smut and sex is insatiable, but I do love romance, fluff and adventure as much as anyone else. I'm also a sucker for happy endings.


I'm currently a college student studying engineering. I love dogs, custard, my cell phone, the internet, tea, perfume, egalitarianism, and my hair.


I am a staunch believer that each and every one of us is unique, just like everyone else. I'm also a little bit pure evil.


I can be pretty insecure about a number of things, and I'm a pretty preemptively defensive person (but don't even bother telling me that. I don't care what you think!).


When I hit a writer's block, I like to work on my profile and think of more miscellaneous things about myself you probably don't care to read. If you had seen my profile when I first started writing, you might have an idea of how frequently I get writer's block.


Age: College-aged


From: The land of the free and the home of the brave


Favorite food: Asian food


Favorite star: The Sun!


Favorite temperature: 70 degrees F


Favorite video games: Skyrim, Civilization V and IV, Minecraft, Dota 2, Sims 3, Warcraft III


Favorite TV shows: Inuyasha, A:TLA, Legend of Korra, Game of Thrones, Sherlock, The Walking Dead, Breaking Bad, Arrested Development, Numb3rs, Parks and Recreation, Better Off Ted and Doctor Who!...I make time to watch TV.


Favorite Disney character: Mulan.
Good 'Ol Miscellani!


Collection of Favorite Jokes:


There are 10 types of people in the world: those who understand binary, those who don't, and those who don't expect a base three joke.


A physicist, a mathematician and an engineer were each asked to establish the volume of a red rubber ball.



The physicist immersed the ball in a beaker full of water and measured the volume of the displaced fluid. The mathematician measured the diameter and calculated a triple integral. The engineer looked it up in his Red Rubber Ball Volume Table.



What's red and bad for your teeth?


A brick.


How do you confuse a blonde? Paint yourself green and throw forks at her.


Collection of Favorite Quotes:


“It is forbidden to kill; therefore all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets.” - Voltaire


“Beauty is an enormous, unmerited gift given randomly, stupidly.” - Khaled Hosseini, And the Mountains Echoed


"Why does a man do the things he does? Why does a man try to put his pants on both legs at the same time? Why does a man choose Bulbasaur as a starter? Why does a man put more pizza rolls than the recommended amount in the microwave? Son. The answer to this question has always and will always be the same. Why do men do? Because fuck you. That's why." - Someone on the Internet


"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored." - Aldous Huxley


“I don't believe in astrology; I'm a Sagittarius and we're skeptical.”Arthur C. Clarke


“Physics is like sex. Sure, you can get some interesting results, but that’s not why we do it.” – Richard Feynman


"Outside of a dog, a book is probably a man's best friend, and inside a dog, it's too dark to read." - Groucho Marx


“I wish there was a way to know you’re in the good old days before you’ve actually left them.” – Andy, The Office


"Well, I don't want to blame it ALL on 9/11, but it certainly didn't help." - Dr. Tobias Fünke, Arrested Development


“Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can make me think I deserved it.” – XKCD comic


“Two roads diverged in a wood, and I took the road less traveled by and they CANCELLED MY FRIKKIN' SHOW. I totally shoulda took the road that had all those people on it. Damn.” - Joss Whedon


“I'm bad at metaphors, but I'm great at sex.” - Linda, Better Off Ted


“Life happens wherever you are, whether you make it or not.” – Uncle Iroh, Avatar: The Last Airbender


"All generalizations are dangerous." - Alexandre Dumas


“When I finished high school, I wanted to take all my graduation money and buy myself a motorcycle, but my mom said no. See, she had a brother who died in a horrible motorcycle accident when he was 18, and I could just have his motorcycle.” - Anthony Jeselnik


“The belief in a supernatural source of evil is not necessary. Men alone are quite capable of every wickedness.” - Joseph Conrad


“If you make people think they're thinking, they'll love you; but if you really make them think, they'll hate you.” - Harlan Ellison


“I have a lot of beliefs, and I live by none of them.” – Louis C.K.


"A plunger is one of those things you would rather have, but not need, than need, but not have." - A bit of wisdom from yours truly
Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 18, 2014
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18: Heart Heart Head

Oh no haha I've been having so much fun reading about Inuyasha and Kagome's lovey-dovey ness that I basically ignored all the warning signs of bad things to come!! That scene was pretty awful to imagine! Those poor dogs :( (and poor Kagome too, but man I hate the thought of someone killing dogs just to be a major ass to Kagome). And I actually forgot about the whole Inuyasha-has-to-figure-out-who's-messing-with-Kikyo's-company thing too! Lol but I'm glad they got through their first real fight, and hopefully get back to happily sexing each other up worry-free!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 25, 2014
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Commitment

Whoooo!! Omg I actually had a sinking suspicion about the reveal in this chapter (except, I thought I was totally over-reading everything)!! Honestly, I'm one of those people that really doesn't care/judge lol so Inuyasha's fear that his calculations are a little too dead on didn't leave a bad taste in my mouth. If there's no harm to anyone else, then who cares (though, there's always that issue of children, but I guess they can deal with that if it comes up?)! I would guess that, if true, either Kikyo reveals it to Kagome on her death bed or Inuyasha ends up telling her the truth, and I don't know how Kagome would take it.

And man I am trying to sympathize with Kikyo and to come up with different reasons for why she was acting so bitchy (e.g. her company's facing some hostile outside force and her husband is totally cold to her and the easiest person to blame is Kagome), but I can't really bring myself to feel the least bit sorry for her. What an uncool lady.

Anyway, loved this chapter, as always!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 03, 2014
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Do It Again

Wow, I finally found some time to catch up on the most recent chapters and there was some real craziness going! I'm probably most concerned about Sango lol of all people! If that really was Kikyo, then dang I cannot believe how ridiculous she is! And then Kagome going missing?! Holy moly I had not expected that, and I thought for sure Kikyo had stolen her away or something (like maybe in beating up Sango, Kikyo managed to figure it all out!!), but I'm glad this chapter was mostly happy :) my heart needed it haha. Great updates! Can't wait to (find time lol and) read more!




Summary:
Inuyasha braves a world of humans. Surviving and scoring are of equal importance to him and he does so in creative ways.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Romance
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sex, GenderBender/TransGender, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Rape/Non-consensual , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11975 Read Count: 484

[Report This] Published: July 22, 2014 Updated: March 18, 2016


Reviewer: Rochoa Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Want Some Help to Please Myself

Ughhhhhh I love this!!! Omg this was the first story I have read in a long time when I was like...seriously how did the writer come up with this?! The whole Shippo transforming relationship thing with Inuyasha was completely unexpected. This wouldn't be the first itme I've thought about a similar scenario or read a fic with one, but that was certainly the most spectacular and unexpected way I've ever seen it played out. Haha teach me your lemon-situation-coming-up-with ways!

Lol ugh I just loved this so much. I love rough, smutty sex and this was absolutely perfect.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you for your praise! I\'ve got a lot of different ideas in the works. Seriously, just pages and pages of two-line outlines for things. I have no idea where they come from, but I love it.



[Report This] Published: July 23, 2014 Updated: July 23, 2014


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: July 31, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: The Madonna and the Whore

Haha wow this was a unique take on the Madonna/Whore complex that I don't see often in the Inu-verse (at least not intentionally in other stories)! I loved it, and I think I might have a thing for Kag/Kik now haha. Anyway, great story and idea and really well put together!



Fire and Rain by chelseatygers Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]

Summary:
Kagome tries to adjust to her new life as best as she can. Will she embrace new possibilities, or will she give in to the desire to let her past become her present?
Categories: Legends
Characters: Hojo, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Family, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Implied Rape, Language, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Suicide
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49580 Read Count: 1802

[Report This] Published: July 28, 2014 Updated: November 01, 2014


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: August 18, 2014
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: That Was My Veil

Omg I just started this story and it's so good while being really heart-wrenchingly difficult to read.  And I'm really, really sorry to hear about your dad and what he/your family went through.  I have a family member that's been hospitalized for a few years (not a coma), so I really empathize with what you went through and what Kagome's went through (even if it's kind of silly to feel that way about a fictional character/story).  I don't know yet how I feel about Inuyasha/Kikyo because we haven't really heard their side of the story, but it was so awful to imagine what Kagome is going through as she processes everything.  Haha I'm sure this is bad since I'm on an Inu/Kag website, but I actually totally think Kagome/Houjo is such a lovely pairing (right now at least haha) just because, from her perspective, he's the one 'real' friend in her life right now!

 

Anyway, I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it was tough for a while, but now I kind of just think of it as something interesting I got to experience, as weird as that sounds. I\'ve been sort of worried I made Inuyasha too unlikable and Hojo too likable, which several people pointed out I did in Strictly Taboo, and I\'m unsure of whether or not he\'s going to be perceived as properly redeeming himself later on. Thanks for the review!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: August 18, 2014
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Mr. Duplicity

Whoooo man lots to take in!  I still love and hate Inuyasha so much that I don't even know what to think of him!  Asshole for how he treated Kagome and Kikyo, but I'm such a diehard Inu/Kag deep, deep down, that I am rooting for him now that he admitted what happened after her accident.  Ughhh so much feel everywhere!!!!  Update again when you can!  Lol I'm really enjoying having my feelings toyed with haha!



Man Like That by Kinky-Hoe Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]

Summary:

AU. Kagome's job is to give advice to self-conscious, average women, since it's the story of her life. Struck by a curse that makes her attractive only to already taken men, she can't help but laugh at romance, marriage, lovesick girls, etc. When her ridiculously perfect sister turns into a bride, she shrugs it off. Until she's told the groom is the guy who used to persecute her.
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: Hojo, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jii-chan, Kaede, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou, Souta, Tsubaki
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Family, Fluff, Friendship, Romance, School Life
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sex, Language, Masturbation/SoloM/F, Mild Sexual Situations, Unresolved Sexual Tension
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17821 Read Count: 721

[Report This] Published: September 14, 2014 Updated: April 13, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 31, 2015
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: All The Kicking And Screaming

Woo this chapter was fantastic! Haha I love all the little hints Inuyasha/the people around Kagome give throughout that he may not have disliked her as much as she probably thinks! Kagome is so feisty and funny and relatable, and LOL I can't believe she punched Kouga. Add me to the list of people who didn't see that coming haha. I'm glad he made an appearance either way, because I've always been a fan of Kouga in fanfics, and I can't wait to see what you do with him!

Great job, and please update when you can :D!

Author's Response: Hehehe. Thank your for this amazing review, it made me laugh :D Expect an update pretty soon. I still need to catch up with your latest update! GAH! So many things to do!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 29, 2015
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Do You Really Wanna Do This

Woot finally got around to reading this and I still love that Kagome punched Kouga hahaha.  I can't get over it because it's one of those things that seems so...in character for her yet so out of it, too.  I like the bits and pieces of history between InuKag that we're getting each chapter (even though the impulsive part of me always wants to know everything that happened in one sitting and just wants them to get together!! but I know it will be much more gratifying in the end if I wait for it >.





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 29, 2015
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Do You Really Wanna Do This

(Whoops I don't know why the other half of my review was cut off, but here it is!) Your writing is very revealing and yet leaves a lot of space for my imagination. I think my favorite little exchange of the chapter was when Kagome said that Inuyasha should be wooing her, and it seems that he takes it a very different way than she intended at first. I like to imagine all the things that might have run through his head if his first thought was that she wanted him to hit on her, and you know that feeling when someone you like suggests for the first time that he/she might like you back? That's what I keep imagining is going through him for that split second before she brings him back to reality. Haha sorry I'm just rambling now, but point is: really liked this chapter and can't wait to read the next update!



The Fairest of All by Kinky-Hoe Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]

Summary:
AU. "You, Your Holiness, are fair, but I see lips as red as blood and hair as black as night," the voice repeated. "Kagome, with the seven mercenaries, is a thousand times fairer than you," the voice concluded. "Find me someone who doesn't fear the dark forest to hunt her down," Kikyo demanded. This is Snow White, the horror/psychological thriller version.
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: Bankotsu, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Jakoutsu, Jii-chan, Kagome, Kagura, Kaguya, Kanna, Kikyou, Kouga, Kyokotsu, Midoriko, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Mukotsu, Mushin, Naraku, Renkotsu, Sango, Sesshomaru, Souta, Suikotsu, Tsubaki
Genres: Action-Adventure, Film/Televison Adaptation, Hentai, Horror, Psychological, Thriller
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Pedophilia, Molestation, Religious, Slavery, Unresolved Sexual Tension
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22997 Read Count: 574

[Report This] Published: October 10, 2014 Updated: March 22, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: October 11, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Woooow!  What a first chapter!  I love the direction and the writing style of the story so far.  I'm super curious about how exactly Kagome has been living (presumably with the bandits) until this point and whether she remembers Kikyo at all! I think the way you have developed the world and Kikyo's character has been awesome and I am really excited to see how Inuyasha fits into all of this! 

Loved everything so far, and I can't wait to read more! 





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: October 29, 2014
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

Wooo boy, this chapter had everything! Some character developments with Sango/Miroku, bloody-gorey action, a bit of background, and some very, very sinful sex. At first I was like, "there's no way this is going to happen!" but you certainly proved me wrong! I actually really like that Inuyasha gave in (as horrible of me as that sounds), because (well, 1. I'm probably messed up in the head haha and) I like that the only aspect of their relationship is something so primal and that they're off to a rough start (understatement of the year) what with him massacring her family, hunting her down, and then forcing himself on her as I'm curious how you'll resolve everything in just three parts (+epilogue)! Anyway, great chapter again :) and I can't wait to read the next update!




Summary:
AU: "My dear, naďve little child," he whispered from behind, his hot breath fanning over her ear and sending a shiver of fear up her spine. "You're in my world now, and here, you're the monster. Not me." One year. She has one year to kill him, or she marries him. She should have known better - everything has consequences. No one can save her...them...now. No one but herself. (new story, old fairytale)
Categories: Legends
Characters: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30147 Read Count: 528

[Report This] Published: January 05, 2015 Updated: March 16, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: January 12, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the first chapter, and I can't wait to see where this story is headed. I have always loved fairytale-inspired stories, and it's always interesting to see how authors adapt their characters to the fairy tale. And I'm glad I'll have something awesome to look forward to on Mondays!! It absolutely is the worst day of the week! Great job and really excited to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I couldn\'t agree more - I adore fairytales too! And Mondays always suck... It\'s the start of a new week and no one wants that. Thank you so much for the great review, and I hope that you will continue to read!! Thanks again!!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: February 01, 2015
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh I can't wait for their first meeting! Not sure whether to expect something electrifying, explosive, eerie, exciting, edible (ok, now I'm just looking for more words that begin with "e" to keep the pattern haha), etc! I always love a gutsy, danger-prone (intentional or not) Kagome, and Inuyasha seems just as interested in what she's up to. Plus, I'm guessing the "her" is Kikyo (as she's naturally the one people create a backstory for when it comes to Inuyasha), though I'm curious what their history is and why he's so angered at the thought of her. Great chapter and again, really excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: LOL!!!!!!! Exactly how I feel ;). Dear sweet Kikyo... How do I love thee? Let me count the ways... I obviously can\'t confirm or deny if you\'re right, but it does the heart good to know that\'s who you thought of ;). All secrets will be revealed in due time. And I\'m very excited for that time ;). Thanks again for a truly wonderful and AWESOME review!! It means a lot to me :D. I hope that you will keep reading, and I hope that you will enjoy the next chapter as much as - if not more than - this one!!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: February 22, 2015
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wooo the past two chapters have certainly brought about a lot of changes for Kagome's life haha. I'm glad that Kagome hasn't been charmed yet, and that she's headstrong enough to go up against Inuyasha. And it's always interesting to see Inuyasha's reactions to what she says (man I want to know what's going on in that head of his!), since it appears he hasn't really made much progress in their first month! I'm enjoying where the story's going and I'm really excited to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I\'m glad you\'re liking the story far, and I hope that you\'ll continue to!! One of the things that I always disliked was how chill beauty was about everything that was happening to her. Mind you, different time and different place, but it always struck me as \"really?? You\'re just going along with this??\". I wanted mine to have a little more fight and put up more resistance, and I\'m glad that\'s translating so well!! Thanks for the awesome review, and I hope you\'ll enjoy what\'s to come in chapter 5!!



The Basics of Texting by cesuraee Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]

Summary:
Exchanging text messages is one thing, meeting is another thing entirely, and Kagome isn’t sure she is prepared. Plus she’s been feeling a little out of sorts ever since she met him. There's no explanation for it.
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Fluff, Friendship, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, PWP, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sex, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, OOC/Out of Character, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Voyeurism
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22452 Read Count: 872

[Report This] Published: January 28, 2015 Updated: March 20, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: February 09, 2015
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Message

Hot damn...I don't even know what to say! (And now I'm going to prove myself wrong by subsequently having lots to say :P!) First, I love Kagome's point of view in this story. Her thoughts and reactions are very well-written, and they really fit the whole typical 'romantic' Kagome that I always imagine. I think she's very relatable in the sense that we get a good idea of why she acts the way she does throughout the night and I feel for her when Inuyasha reveals his (from-our-perspective) dickishness. On the one hand, poor Kagome for getting herself into that situation...on the other...boy, what did she think Inuyasha and Kikyo were doing for so long? Baking brownies? Interior decorating? Haha I'm guessing there's some explanation for what actually happened, but whether or not he really did do that with Kikyo and then decide to have sex with Kagome, I hope Kagome gets the closure she needs. You know, I always read these InuKag/InuKik/KagKouga stories, and aside from the pure chemistry/physical attraction stuff, I find myself rooting for the alternative pairings a lot (yeah, haha I'm aware I'm on an InuKag website) just because it occurs to me how well Kagome and Kouga kind of logically 'make sense.' On paper (in my opinion), he fulfills a lot of the things Kagome seems to want in relationship, and evidently she does the same for him, but it's always fun to see how authors get Inuyasha and Kagome together.

Either way, I've rambled on about unimportant stuff long enough! Point is, I really enjoyed reading this and I'm excited to read the third chapter! I'm not even sure how I want the next chapter to play out, but how ever it does, I'm sure it will be fantastic :). Please update again when you can!

Author's Response:

I do that same thing every time I go to leave a review. I'm constantly telling people I'm speechless only to have a million things to say. It's very flattering to see the same thing done to my work!

Thank you so much! Kagome's thoughts and everything were one thing I agonized over during the duration of writing this. I am so glad to hear that they work, because that is really what I was trying to get across. I wanted her to appear real, because I'm sure we all know the pain of liking someone too damn much. I also am glad her actions make sense, because there were a few times I was had to stop and think about what I was writing and wonder whether or not the circumstances were justified. As horrible as it sounds, I am really enjoying writing InuYasha as a major prick. OMG the baking brownies comment killed me! 

I'm a die-hard InuYasha and Kagome fan, but there are times when I find myself doing the same thing. Though I do always want InuYasha and Kagome together in the end, I tend to most enjoy the routes that offer up the most angst. You're right about that, but I think that's part of the reason they don't work out most of the time is because they are so similar. You know what they say, opposites attract ;)

I very much appreciated your review, and I really hope that the third chapter lives up to all of your expectations! With any luck my update will be posted within the week! 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 



Forget the Storm by chelseatygers Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Summary:
Inuyasha spends all day working at the Sunset Shrine as a jack of all trades and all night in bed with the lady of the house. It's the ideal life for him until a girl comes back from summer camp and changes everything. Now he finds himself struggling to survive with her rather than dying without her.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Hojo, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jaken, Jii-chan, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Souta
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Family, Fluff, Hentai, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Blood/Gore, Character Death, Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Pedophilia, Implied Rape, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, Masturbation/SoloM/F, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Rape/Non-consensual , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Suicide, Underage Pregnancy, Voyeurism
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105122 Read Count: 1740

[Report This] Published: March 14, 2015 Updated: December 29, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 01, 2015
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Milkman

Hahah I love your author's note about this. I have absolutely no problem with how quickly they got together :P and I'm glad you didn't pull a Rumiko and put like fifty episodes/chapters of maybeness before they even somewhat acknowledge their feelings! All that aside, I loved this chapter! I definitely didn't see Inuyasha's last little (well not so little I guess) declaration coming, but I'm really curious what's going to happen after that little epiphany haha. Great job on writing such a fun (and steamy :)!) story! Update soon pleeaase :D!



It Happened One Night by Angelhart Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Kagome is awakened by a noise downstairs in her house in the middle of the night. Who would disturb her sleep? (one shot)
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Oral/Hand job
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5600 Read Count: 185

[Report This] Published: March 25, 2015 Updated: March 29, 2015


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 29, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night

I loved this! Inuyasha and Kagome's interactions felt very genuine and I thought the lemon was really well-written and realistic! I especially loved that things end up going back to normal for the most part in the gang haha. And LOL poor Shippo's gonna be in big trouble for his imitation of Sesshoumaru! Haha anyway, great job on this!

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. Glad you liked it :)




Summary:

Kagome is a freshman at university pursuing her love of history when tragedy strikes and she is forced to start living in her car. Taking advantage of her distress, her favorite professor makes her an offer she just can't refuse...


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, PWP, Romance, Yuri
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Bisexuality, Blood/Gore, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Homosexual/Gay Sex, Language, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Peg , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Threesome
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44332 Read Count: 906

[Report This] Published: April 20, 2015 Updated: March 30, 2016


Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 06, 2015
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Troilism

Aw :( poor/lucky/I-don't-even-know-what-to-think Inuyasha! Haha this chapter was so fun (A++ job on the FFM scenes ;D) but made me feel bad for Inuyasha at the same time. I'm glad that Kikyo wasn't dishonest about anything she wanted or did, but he's clearly not happy with the arrangement (though, I never doubt Kagome's ability to turn things around haha) and I felt so horrible when Kikyo (and Kagome, though she has every right to, since he's been not-so-kind to her) basically ignored him at the end! Either way, I love the premise of the story and I can't wait to see how all their relationships develop!

Author's Response: So glad you like it! Yeah, I've seen a few threesome fics, not with this particular pairing, though, and they always seemed a touch too unrealistic to me. A lot of people would assume that having sex with two hot women is every man's dream, but it's a bit more complicated than that (I hope), especially when it's not just sex and emotions are involved. It's going to be a short fic, only 12 chapters, with a few twists and turns. Thanks for reading and reviewing!





Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 22, 2015
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Somnophilia

Once again, loved it! I was really taken by surprise when Inuyasha demanded pegging, but ugh I LOVE pegging and it's almost never in any fanfics :/, so put me down under super excited and happy that was his request haha. The ending was so sad for Inu, though :(. Poor guy. A part of me really wants him to enjoy and want this arrangement as well, but I can't imagine what it feels like to hear your wife say someone else makes her happier than you ever have. Anyway, I'm super curious how you plan on developing everyone's relationship with each other, and I can't wait for the next update!