Penname: Rochoa [Contact]
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Member Since: May 09, 2012
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Bio: 20152903

Quick Update:

Risen in Patria – Updated. I finally finished this during my spring break, so go give it a read!

Craigslist – Totally lied to you guys about this being the next update. I'm still like 60 pages in...and struggling with the structure. I keep adding stuff on and moving stuff around and rewriting, and I'm still not yet satisfied with my Frankenstein. I've probably read and reread it so many times I'm not even sure what I need to take out or sprinkle in. Sorry, y'all.

ALWH, Home, and School Bonding – I have a decent chunk of each completed, but I haven't had the time or inspiration to work on them extensively for a while
(and I don't anticipate that will change until summer break rolls around), but as always, check my profile for any news on progress.

P.S. I am currently in the process of looking for a beta!

Why I'm Looking for a Beta:

Because no matter how hard I try, I will always be lacking in certain areas and will always make mistakes. Also, I hate proofreading and, as a consequence, I'm sure my stories are riddled with typos and errors.

What I Want:

1. Someone to bounce ideas, scenes, plot ideas, etc. off of. Sometimes I just can't tell which scenes are off, which paragraphs out of place, what dialogue reads awkwardly, what event contradicts something else, etc. This keeps me from posting any of my stories in a timely manner, so someone please save me!

2. Someone with a solid grasp of English grammar, syntax and spelling. While I do my best to use proper grammar and avoid typos, I make silly mistakes quite often; it would be great to be able to send a near-final draft to a reader, and have him or her be able to catch things like, “I'm will go to...” or have him or her point out how a character seemingly teleported from one position to the next in a paragraph.

I'm not looking for someone to beta read all my stories, and if you are interested in one story, feel free to send me a message anyway.

I'm looking though the beta databases as well, but I figured if I posted a note in my profile, this at least guarantees that any potential users that stumble across this don't think I'm a rando and enjoy (I assume) at least one of my stories. If this is a prerequisite, I would be happy to act as proofreader or beta in return, as long as you're okay with my taking a bit longer to respond with edits.

About Me

Honestly, I feel weird writing this part, because I have no idea what people would want to know about me, so I'm just going to use this as a fun, therapeutic 'dump' for both the pertinent and completely irrelevant aspects of myself that I don't mind people knowing.

I'm an avid fanfiction reader and have been since 2005, when I was first introduced to the world of Inuyasha. Since then, I have come to like Avatar: The Last Airbender, Legend of Korra and Game of Thrones fanfiction as well. I tried my hand at writing many, many years ago, under a different penname, but they were poorly planned, terribly written, and just overall bad. I took a six year hiatus from writing and finally decided to give it another here I am again.

My appetite for smut and sex is insatiable, but I do love romance, fluff and adventure as much as anyone else. I'm also a sucker for happy endings.

I'm currently a college student studying engineering. I love dogs, custard, my cell phone, the internet, tea, perfume, egalitarianism, and my hair.

I am a staunch believer that each and every one of us is unique, just like everyone else. I'm also a little bit pure evil.

I can be pretty insecure about a number of things, and I'm a pretty preemptively defensive person (but don't even bother telling me that. I don't care what you think!).

When I hit a writer's block, I like to work on my profile and think of more miscellaneous things about myself you probably don't care to read. If you had seen my profile when I first started writing, you might have an idea of how frequently I get writer's block.

Age: College-aged

From: The land of the free and the home of the brave

Favorite food: Asian food

Favorite star: The Sun!

Favorite temperature: 70 degrees F

Favorite video games: Skyrim, Civilization V and IV, Minecraft, Dota 2, Sims 3, Warcraft III

Favorite TV shows: Inuyasha, A:TLA, Legend of Korra, Game of Thrones, Sherlock, The Walking Dead, Breaking Bad, Arrested Development, Numb3rs, Parks and Recreation, Better Off Ted and Doctor Who!...I make time to watch TV.

Favorite Disney character: Mulan.
Good 'Ol Miscellani!

Collection of Favorite Jokes:

There are 10 types of people in the world: those who understand binary, those who don't, and those who don't expect a base three joke.

A physicist, a mathematician and an engineer were each asked to establish the volume of a red rubber ball.

The physicist immersed the ball in a beaker full of water and measured the volume of the displaced fluid. The mathematician measured the diameter and calculated a triple integral. The engineer looked it up in his Red Rubber Ball Volume Table.

What's red and bad for your teeth?

A brick.

How do you confuse a blonde? Paint yourself green and throw forks at her.

Collection of Favorite Quotes:

“It is forbidden to kill; therefore all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets.” - Voltaire

“Beauty is an enormous, unmerited gift given randomly, stupidly.” - Khaled Hosseini, And the Mountains Echoed

"Why does a man do the things he does? Why does a man try to put his pants on both legs at the same time? Why does a man choose Bulbasaur as a starter? Why does a man put more pizza rolls than the recommended amount in the microwave? Son. The answer to this question has always and will always be the same. Why do men do? Because fuck you. That's why." - Someone on the Internet

"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored." - Aldous Huxley

“I don't believe in astrology; I'm a Sagittarius and we're skeptical.”Arthur C. Clarke

“Physics is like sex. Sure, you can get some interesting results, but that’s not why we do it.” – Richard Feynman

"Outside of a dog, a book is probably a man's best friend, and inside a dog, it's too dark to read." - Groucho Marx

“I wish there was a way to know you’re in the good old days before you’ve actually left them.” – Andy, The Office

"Well, I don't want to blame it ALL on 9/11, but it certainly didn't help." - Dr. Tobias Fünke, Arrested Development

“Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can make me think I deserved it.” – XKCD comic

“Two roads diverged in a wood, and I took the road less traveled by and they CANCELLED MY FRIKKIN' SHOW. I totally shoulda took the road that had all those people on it. Damn.” - Joss Whedon

“I'm bad at metaphors, but I'm great at sex.” - Linda, Better Off Ted

“Life happens wherever you are, whether you make it or not.” – Uncle Iroh, Avatar: The Last Airbender

"All generalizations are dangerous." - Alexandre Dumas

“When I finished high school, I wanted to take all my graduation money and buy myself a motorcycle, but my mom said no. See, she had a brother who died in a horrible motorcycle accident when he was 18, and I could just have his motorcycle.” - Anthony Jeselnik

“The belief in a supernatural source of evil is not necessary. Men alone are quite capable of every wickedness.” - Joseph Conrad

“If you make people think they're thinking, they'll love you; but if you really make them think, they'll hate you.” - Harlan Ellison

“I have a lot of beliefs, and I live by none of them.” – Louis C.K.

"A plunger is one of those things you would rather have, but not need, than need, but not have." - A bit of wisdom from yours truly
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Reviews by Rochoa
The S-android by Karaumea Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]

In the far future, Inuyasha finds himself as the new toy of a beautiful girl while trying to hide from those that hunted him.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Hentai, Romance, Sci-fi
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75034 Read Count: 2887

[Report This] Published: January 26, 2009 Updated: June 25, 2012

Reviewer: Rochoa Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2012
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Cornered

Wowzer am I pissed at Inuyasha! I seriously just want to gut that stupid jerk! Especially after hearing about what will happen to Kagome should she go home, I just feel so bad for Kagome :(. She can't return to Sango's home because the stupid senator will use her as a scapegoat, and obviously Inuyasha is more concerned about himself than he is about her (though he doesn't know about her situation at home...but still!). Haha I don't know how Kagome will get herself out of this, but I can't wait to find out! Great chapter :D

Domestic Disputes by ShouraiChan Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Born the child of a mistress and a rich, powerful, but loving father, Kagome was raised to be the best. Better than that woman's child. However, this delicate rose also has a few thorns; and it's those thorns that attract the attention of Tokyo's top bad boy...and soon, she's ensnared into a world of violence, cruelty...and she loves it.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Character Death, Domestic Violence, Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Orgy, Pedophilia, Pregnancy, Punishment, Rape/Non-consensual , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Slavery, Threesome, Underage Pregnancy, Underage Sex, Voyeurism
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35624 Read Count: 3668

[Report This] Published: July 19, 2010 Updated: August 23, 2011

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 18, 2012
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Bloodlust

AHHHOMGERGOODNESS This story is explosively awesome! Not just regular-level awesome! I love how you've characterized Kagome! She's so badass and fight-to-the-death that I was pretty much thinking "Why am I not such a badassmofo like Kagome?!" throughout all of Kagome's fight scenes. She's so much darker and two-sided in this fic than she normally is, and me gusta very much. And I love how you snuck in Inuyasha's little confession and made it so ambiguous! Did he really mean it or was he just trying to get an advantage over her?! Gahhh. Pleeasseee update soon.

Kagome is desperate on getting the much wanted attention from Inuyasha. She takes matters into her own hands and gets help from a witch in order to charm Inuyasha. But what happens when a love spell goes horribly wrong?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sesshomaru
Genres: Comedy, Fantasy, Hentai
Warnings: Implied Rape, Unresolved Sexual Tension
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10404 Read Count: 660

[Report This] Published: August 09, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2013

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: July 11, 2013
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Haha I have to say that I love this story! You throw in some really humorous lines here and there, and this whole Kagome's-life-turning-upside-down thing is really amusing. I actually went back to reread Inuyasha's reaction to Kagome to see if I could decipher what happened but there are so few clues from him! I am sooo curious how Inuyasha is gonna somehow fix all this, so please update again when you get the chance!

Author's Response: I actually wasn't planning on continuing this story on this site since this is intented to be more Kagome/Sesshoumaru story, but I decided that I'll make a dual ending for this story. :) One for the Sesshy/Kagome fans and one for the Inuyasha/Kagome fans. (I personally root for both of those pairings.)

House of Demons by Dusk Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]


First Place winner of the "Night of the Dog" Halloween contest.

He wanted her and he would have her. Things aren’t always what they seem...
Based on the Grimm's Fairytale, "The Robber Bridegroom".
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Challenge Response , Drama, Oneshot, Thriller
Warnings: Blood/Gore, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Mild Sexual Situations, Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9466 Read Count: 688

[Report This] Published: October 30, 2010 Updated: October 30, 2010

Reviewer: Rochoa Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: House of Demons

Wowzers. Really dark and awesome! I love it! That scene where they devour that poor woman was really grotesque and gross (in the good way), and I love how Inuyasha sort of loves/hates/craves Kagome. Deliciously written. Ahh and the way you ended it was so fantastic! "You're going to be here a long time." :D Great job!

Oodles by Lovers_Angel Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

My little collection of ficlets and randomness I'm too lazy to put in other stories.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drabble, Ficlet, Fluff, Friendship, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Oneshot, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Mild Sexual Situations
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4219 Read Count: 1157

[Report This] Published: December 09, 2010 Updated: September 02, 2014

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 13, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Secrecy

This was really enjoyable to read. I like Kagome and Inuasha's interaction a lot (alas, the forbidden romance!), and how Inuyasha seems to wait for her at night. I do feel bad that Kagome feels like she has to go cleanse or purify herself after being with Inuyasha! Just do him, I says! Be free from your priestessliness! Anyway, I thought this was well-written and quite interesting!


When Inuyasha says he'll wait for for her if anything goes wrong with the well, she believes him with everything that she has. Five years pass and she attempts to move on when by chance she bumps into Inuyasha who has a woman on his arm claiming to be his wife and no memory of who Kagome is.

Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44633 Read Count: 4783

[Report This] Published: March 08, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2014

Reviewer: Rochoa Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2012
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Of Bonds and Necklaces

I'll be totally honest and say that when I first read the summary I was like, "no no no I'm not reading that! the summary itself is too angsty!" While it is pretty sad and angsty, I think you're writing it really well. I thought I would hate Machiko simply because she's with Inuyasha and I'm a pretty rabid Inu/Kag fan, but the way you characterize her and her thoughts really makes me sympathize with her.

I'm so sad for pretty much everyone in this story. Kagome because obviously she's gone through so much and now Inuyasha doesn't even remember or love her anymore. Inuyasha because he's lost such an important part of his life, he suffered so much without Kagome and now he has to go through all this. Machiko because I'm guessing Inuyasha's going to end up with Kagome, seeing as this is posted on an Inu/Kag-specific website. Shippo because he lost Kagome too. I JUST HAVE SO MANY FEEELINGS RIGHT NOWWW. Haha please update again when you can! I can't wait to see how this all unravels.

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: July 16, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Those We Keep Close

Oh wow, what an ominous end. I totally didn't expect that, and it didn't even occur to me when Inuyasha had that attack with Hojo!

I like that Inuyasha's getting closer and friendlier with Kagome and that he's starting to get flashes of memories or feelings! I don't know how this is all gonna work out because I actually feel so bad for Machiko (and obviously Kagome). I can't wait to read more! Awesome chapter :D

Dirty Little Secret by NekoYoukai90 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]

InuYasha is a big shot business man with a crush...on his unobtainable secretary. Fail... What happens when, one day while being locked in his office during a power outage, they are forced to come to terms on their tense relationship? Scandelous stuff ahead, folks!
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8063 Read Count: 868

[Report This] Published: June 24, 2011 Updated: June 24, 2011

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: June 05, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Dirty Little Secret

Cute and super hot! Good job! I'm glad I found this story haha.

Author's Response: Thank you very much ^-^

Bound by Desire by Uhsaw Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]



“Guess what little miko. Your purity and innocence are going to bring this village great pride. You’re the chosen of our hanyou protector. You’re leaving this village and everyone in it right now.”
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: Ah-Uhn, Ayame, Ginta, Hakkaku, InuYasha, Jaken, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kirara, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Myouga, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Angst, Drama, Family, Hentai
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Explicit Sex, Fetish, Implied Incest, Language, Oral/Hand job, Pregnancy, Voyeurism
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4392 Read Count: 3294

[Report This] Published: April 22, 2012 Updated: October 17, 2012

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: June 03, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Startling Revelations

Wow! Super interested in how Inuyasha already knows Kagome and how the Shikon Miko gig is going to tie in with everything! I have to say that I'm a sucker for stories with Kagome as the sacrificial lamb and Inuyasha as the hot...lamb receiver (haha I don't really know what that position is called, exactly), and your story is doing a fantastic job with that plotline! Great job and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha. I\'m glad you liked it. I\'m a huge fan of those kind of stories too. ;)

Spring Dance by Uhsaw Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

**Runner Up Eternally Destined Spring Love Contest**
Kagome is given the honor of being presented to society as the last Available. Once she walks, all she has to do is find her chosen and say yes. Simple right?
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kaede, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Fluff, Friendship, Oneshot, Romance, School Life
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2910 Read Count: 626

[Report This] Published: May 14, 2012 Updated: May 15, 2012

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 15, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Just Say Yes

I really liked this short story. It was sweet, simple and just lovely :D. The premise is pretty interesting too, the idea of being presented as an Available before you're chosen. Reminded me of an auction except the "items" got to choose to whom they went. Neat story and good job!

Author's Response: Well thank you. I actually thought about that correlation too. I can\'t say whether I thought about that while writing it, but that\'s how it turned out! I\'m glad you liked the story!

Sands of Time by SavvytheBanana Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Based on "The Mummy", but with a few extra twists! The tragedy of Naraku and Kikyo in Ancient Egypt leads to the adventure in the 1920s for Inuyasha and the gang! THIS IS NOT A CROSSOVER and it DOES NOT follow the exact same plot as the movie.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Ginta, Hakkaku, Hakudoushi, InuYasha, Jaken, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kirara, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Myouga, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Film/Televison Adaptation, Mystery, Paranormal, Romance, Thriller, WAFF
Warnings: Blood/Gore, Character Death, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, Suicide
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13580 Read Count: 443

[Report This] Published: April 27, 2013 Updated: June 10, 2013

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: May 29, 2013
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Bonding

Omg I absolutely looooove The Mummy series and I'm loving how this story is progressing. O'Connell and Evy are strangely fitting/similar to Inuyasha and Kagome! I think you managed to fit the rest of the characters, like Myouga and the wolves and Jaken in very well. Cleverly done :)! Haha I obviously know at least the general direction of how things will go in the story, but I'm super excited nonetheless!!

If I might offer one critique/request, I think the story would be even awesomer if there were a bit more meat and detail. For the most part, the general plot/dialogue is already there just because it's based off another story, so I would really love to read more of their thoughts, feelings, etc. in greater detail.

Regardless of all that, I like this story and can't wait to relive The Mummy in Inuyasha fanfic form lol! Please update again when you can!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it so far. ^^ Again, I'm not following the exact movie plot, and you might be surprised by where I end up headed. The next chapter isn't very meaty, I'm afraid. It's mostly action, which is admittedly my weak point. As it progresses, there will be some more introspection and original content, and I'll be sure to stay on top of that as I write more. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.

Menage Au Inu by Sunset Miko Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]

A fight between brothers leads to an accident that can only be undone one way. Two brothers have to learn how to share and Kagome finds herself the center of attention. Sess/Kag/Inu
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Sesshomaru
Genres: Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, Masturbation/SoloM/F, Oral/Hand job, Threesome
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87135 Read Count: 3773

[Report This] Published: June 02, 2013 Updated: September 24, 2015

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: June 04, 2013
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Miko in the Middle

I love this! I love SessxKagxInu so I can't wait to read on as we get to the good stuff XP! I also, by the way, love your title haha. Thanks for writing this and please update again when you get the chance :D!

Two-Faced by chelseatygers Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Kagome is different when she and Inuyasha are alone.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sex, Language, OOC/Out of Character
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2583 Read Count: 343

[Report This] Published: October 29, 2013 Updated: October 29, 2013

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: November 17, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WowI enjoyed this a lot! I always love interesting changes in Kagome and Inuyasha's personalities, and the idea of Kagome playing the innocent, doe-eyed girl while teasing Inuyasha in private was super hot! I loved every bit of the chapter and that final sentence! Lol it's so...foreboding...but in a sexy way haha. You must continue! Again, loved it and it would be great to read more!

Blackout by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 112]


*COMPLETE*  A night of celebration yields life-altering consequences for Inuyasha and Kagome.  Can they weather the storm, or will the consequences of their actions prove too much to handle?

Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, Molestation, Oral/Hand job, Pregnancy
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 328087 Read Count: 9790

[Report This] Published: December 24, 2013 Updated: September 03, 2015

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: January 04, 2014
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Morning-After Anxiety

I really like this story so far! I like the way Inuyasha and Kagome are slowly working through it, and after Miroku's mini heart-to-heart with Inuyasha, I'm curious how Inuyasha's gonna talk it out with Kagome. Love the start and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: August 11, 2014
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Recovery

I love how Sango and Miroku's relationship is developing (and the realistic character development overall!)! I'm glad you think Kouga is a decent guy, because I particularly love him in this chapter, and it was great how level-headed he was. I actually have quite a soft spot for him, and not a lot of other stories have him portrayed so reasonable and genuine, so I think you did a really great job with him!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like how Kouga is portrayed.  I was kind of worried that people would think he was *too* level-headed.  I don't mind when people portray him in a less positive light (and I think I've done it before), but I think this is a reasonable interpretation of his character also. 

The Christmas Miracle by naruto3215 Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

For Neo-Anime-Haven.The Christmas Season rolls through the Feudal Era. What are the chances Inuyasha and Kagome survive with no drama. Not likely.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kaede, Kagome, Kirara, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Pregnancy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3321 Read Count: 86

[Report This] Published: January 07, 2014 Updated: January 07, 2014

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: January 10, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Miracle

Aw! This was super sweet and I loved the insight into Inuyasha's thoughts on his child. This had a nice sprinkling of humor and lots of romance fluffiness, and I especially enjoyed Inuyasha's last question haha. Great job!

Author's Response: He\'ll think twice before going on a ride to the park with Kagome anytime soon.

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 06, 2014
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: That's the Way It Goes

Ah!! I'm so glad I finally got the time to read this!! I really like your version of Sango, and I think you make her intelligence, personality and character really realistic and fitting for this story. Haha I had a good guess that she would figure out exactly what was going on between Inuyasha and Kagome, because she's usually a pretty perceptive character.

I also, of course, love the way Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is progressing!! There's such a great combination of love and sex in each chapter :D!!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: February 24, 2014
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Scream of the Butterfly

Wow I love this story already, and boy was I excited to read that it was already finished and would be updated regularly!! I feel for Kagome with all of Kikyo's expectations and rules :/, and I can't wait to see how the Inuyasha-Kikyo-Kagome dynamic changes in the coming chapters. Haha after reading the warnings you had for the first chapter, I'm even more excited for what's to come and I'm really enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 03, 2014
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: It Only Takes a Moment

Omg I love this story sooooo much! Haha reading about Inuyasha's inner conflict is my new official guilty pleasure. I really like that everything is progressing at a steady pace, instead of having the readers wait like twenty chapters to get any tension at all, so I can't wait to read more! I actually woke up this morning super excited to check for an update, and I'm totally planning on being here every Monday like clockwork haha. Great chapter, once again!

Author's Response: Haha, I figured we didn't need the whole "will they or won't they" thing due to the unusual circumstances of their relationship. Hope you stick around!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 08, 2014
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: 'Til the Sunrise

Yay!!! I'm so happy they had their official first kiss! I love that this story is basically all from Inuyasha's perspective, because I get just enough information to guess what Kagome might be thinking through all of this and how she feels about Inuyasha. I'm super excited to see how her actions/reactions might change now that it's out that Inuyasha and Kikyo don't actually love each other (and if she'll figure out why they are getting married in the first place dun dun dun!). Great chapter, again! Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 12, 2014
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Shame

yeessss!! Haha I've been waiting for the good stuff to start! I wonder how Kagome will react to what happened while she was thoroughly intoxicated (if she remembers at all!) or if she can't remember, how Inuyasha will take it! Either way, I loved the lemoniness of this chapter!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 19, 2014
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Tear Us Apart

Woooo wow I was definitely not expecting that!! Can't say I don't like the fact that Inuyasha's got a whole different kind of dark side to him too (kind of Dexter-esque too! which is always hot in a strange sort of way lol). I'm super curious now what else is going to go down (aside from the smut :P)! Speaking of smut, you are really spoiling us with all these wonderful lemons! I loved every word of it, and I'm glad Kagome's so intent on reciprocating Inuyasha's attentions! Another great chapter and can't wait for Friday to come haha!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 23, 2014
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Lasting Treasure

Aww :) This chapter had a lot of charm, and I liked that they talked about their relationship and tried to figure out how this would all work out! Haha and I'm glad that Kagome and Inuyasha get together fairly quickly because I actually don't like when authors err on the side of taking too long (and it takes like 10 chapters just for one of them to acknowledge that they don't hate the other one). I like that the main thing keeping them 'apart' is from their situation and not from either of them really not wanting it. On that note, I'm already preparing my delicate heart for what's to come since the wedding is (probably) coming up soon and that can't be funny for any of them!

Haha also (from your note on no college boning), I'm in the same situation!! I'm in college too and I want to be a post-grad-school-ruling-the-work-force-rolling-in-da-dough-boning woman, so imaginary boning is all we've got!

Author's Response: Haha, oh, college life. If you want to actually put your education to good use, you can't be like they were in the movies. I've wanted to be an archaeologist since I was 5 years old, and there's no way I'm letting anything get in the way of it, not even real life boning, haha.

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: March 29, 2014
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: The One That You Like Best

Wooooaahh haha I was completely caught off guard by the end! I honestly thought it was Kikyo or Suikotsu sneaking around and somehow finding them before Inuyasha realized at first! Now I'm really curious about Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's relationship! Lol it seems so loving!

Reviewer: Rochoa Signed
Date: April 11, 2014
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: Love in the Aftermath

Haha oh god, all these close encounters with Kikyo nearly finding out what's going on are gonna give me a heart attack. Part of me is positive that there's no way she doesn't know but that's probably just because it's so obvious to the readers.

I love how lovey-dovey and tender they are with each other (though, I did have a laugh at the "Oh my god, I murdered Inuyasha!!" part!)! Great chapter, can't wait for next week's update!!