Penname: SugarRos [Contact]
Real Name: That weird chick.
Member Since: July 12, 2007
Membership Status: Member
Bio: I am a 23 year old female from both sides of the USA: Was born in California, moved to New Jersey when I was ten, moved to San Fancisco when I was 18 for college, to LA when I was 20, and back to NJ to take care of my mother when I turned 22. And here I am, a year later, still stuck.

I'm trying to go back to school, but it's harder than they said it would be in the movies. :P

I tend to be optimistic about it all. I love my job (a karate instructor and graphic designer for Cochran's Ultimate Weapons), I love my friends (whom all mostly live in Philly), and my dogs (whom I missed dearly while romping around the west coast). And yes, I love my mom as well.

Anyway, I discovered Inuyasha my freshman year in high school via the girl that sat behind me in homeroom. I had been writing fanfiction for series like Sailor Moon and Gundam Wing up until then. Inuyasha sweeped in and took over my fanfiction life. XD

I usually stick to what I'm best at: Inuyasha/Kagome fluff/love/sex/drama/angst. Angst and romance most of all. Why? I just love a good story of people suffering, only to have it come out okay. I love writing about scary, life-threatning situations, and having my characters saved by their true love (chivalry at it's best!). Maybe that's why I took to Inuyasha so well? I mean, who's more of a natural hero than Inuyasha? Yum.

I love AU's, as well. I love the challenge of keeping a character in character, and despise OOC-ness above all else. (I have been known to make exceptions and read fics with OOC-ness, but it means there's a different aspect to the fic that overshadows it in some way. I call these my guilty pleasures. ^.^

Anyway, I'm fairly new to this site, and I hope you all enjoy my fanfiction!

-SugarRos

P.S: Feel free to IM me if you want to discuss fanfiction, whether it be mine, yours, or just in general. ^.^ It always says I'm offline on Yahoo, so just IM me anyway, and if I'm on, I'll answer! XD

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Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: female
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Sunshower by alterfano Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]

Summary:
Inuyasha and Kagome get time alone in nature to do what comes naturally.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8251 Read Count: 505

[Report This] Published: November 25, 2007 Updated: November 25, 2007


Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 24, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Sunshower

That was really beautiful.




Summary:



Kagome is forced to leave the Sengoku Jidai and the well closes behind her leaving her to grieve the loss of her friends. She soon realizes that she carries something that will always tie her to an era that became her second home.

I am still working on Vices but did not like how it was turning out, so I decided to work on something else to clear my mind. I hope to return to it soon and edit it to make it more enjoyable.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51958 Read Count: 8262

[Report This] Published: February 09, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2008


Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet Beginnings

Hello! I really like the story so far and am looking forward to reading the next six chapters! Thank goodness there are more! Your fic is well written and IC, and I'm extremely surprised you haven't gotten any reviews so far. I saw no obvious grammar or spekking mistakes and the chapter was a good length! I can't wait to read more!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Expecting the Unexpected

Oh thank goodness the well closing is not final! And Kagome's pregnancy coming along so fast is both good news and bad. I hope Inuyaha can get to her soon, I'd like him to be there for the delivery.

Again, everyone is IC, and all is well written.

Can't wait to read more!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Can't Wait To Hold You In My Arms

Wah! I'm worried about Imuyash, and I'm curious about what the baby will look like! I have to say I've never really been one for pregnancy stories, but this one is really good. I'm hooked.





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Reality of Dreams

Omg!! Where is Narake going? To Kagome's time? Is he going to try and kill her there? Oh! Oh, oh, OH!!! Is Inuyasha going to find the portal and go through also? And then they defeat Naraku and live happily ever after together again!

....Okay, I'm getting ahead of myself, so I'll shut up and read the next chapter.

...I think this chapter was good, if you couldn't tell. :)





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Evil Among Us

Ohhhh yeah! Was I right, or what? I can't wait to see what happens! I hope Kagome and Inuyasha can find each other soon, this fic has gotten really exciting!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Fates Unknown

Ahhhh! Go through, Inuyasha! Go through!!! Hurrry!!!!

The suspense is killing me!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: The Future

AHHHHH!!!! Inuyasha's there! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so excited! I hope they finally see each other again! This story is going in my favorites, and I hope you update again very, very soon!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: The Future

Forgot to rate!



Love's Smirking Revenge by Langus Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]

Summary:

**Chapter 20-23 now up!** Inuyasha Takahashi is a beat down detective heading the most publicized yakuza murder investigation of the year. Kagome Higurashi is a journalist who likes a good mystery. When the two clash over the investigation will sparks fly or will they get burned?
Categories: Legends

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kouga
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123459 Read Count: 2895

[Report This] Published: February 16, 2008 Updated: January 11, 2009


Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 19, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: On A Dark and Stormy Night

Hello Langus! ^.^

I was imediately drawn into the description of your story, and was pleasently please at how well it's written! I love this first chapter! Inuyasha totally reminds me of Detective Stabler from Law and Order: SVU, and the way you write fits in really well with the grimy, cop-like rough-and-tumble setting.

At first, I was a bit worried, thinking Inuyasha might turn OOC, but you actually haven't even come close! I feel embarrassed for thinking it might happen. Sorry.

Anyway, love, love, love this first chapter, I'm off to read the second!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was getting a little disconcerted that no one had reviewed yet but thank you for being my first one :) It's funny you should mention Law & Order SVU...I LOVE that show...watch it every day actually and I love Stabler...guess it comes out in my fic eh? I think I'd describe it as a Law & Order meets CSI meets Inuyasha. Well anyways, I made an effort to keep everyone in character so hopefully no one is OOC at all, though Kagome may come across as a little more bitchy than she is in the series ;) Well, I think in honour of my first review I'll have to post up a new chapter so thank you SugarRos :D Good luck with your fic!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Sound Off

lmao! Oh my goodness, the spat between Inuyasha and Kagome was so awesome. I liked the part where she was surprised at his white teeth. XD I can just picture it. lol. I have this really rugged looking Inuyasha conjured up in my mind because of this fic, which is strange because Inuyaha's... well, pretty! Lol. but I admit, a five-o'clock shadow is a weakspot. I find Inuyasha just as sexy in his detective-wear.

Oh, and how old is Inuyasha? I get the feelings he's much normal that most fics would set him as. You might have mentioned ther ages in the chapters, but I honestly can't remember, as I havent't been alseep for over 40 hours, and I'm super-tired.

Still love this fic! I hope you post more soon!

Author's Response:

Yes...rugged Inuyasha spotting a fedora and a 5 o'clock shadow *drool* You got it bang on :) I'm not sure how old he is really since I never say his age. Kagome is 24 if I remember correctly. I'd always pictured Inu as in his 30s and at least 10 years older than Kagome. He may be a drunk but he's fit for his age (not rippling abs etc but solid). I just wanted him to be as realistic as possible but definitely not pretty.

I'm really glad you liked the spat between him and Kagome since there is going to be a lot of that coming up. These two just can't seem to give each other any peace :)

 Thank you so much for the review yay! I hope you like chapter 3 just as much as the others :) Kagome and Inuyasha on a date...there are just SO many ways it could go horribly wrong *evil laugh*





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 19, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Dinner for two? Or maybe three?

Yay! You mentioned me!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 19, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: On A Dark and Stormy Night

Gah! It cut off my review, so here's the rest! :

Another great chapter, and I went back and re-read the whole story now that I've has sufficiant sleep time. XD

Anyway, I love the scene with Inuyasha in the bathroom, and Kikyou (I'm assuming that's her) in the background. It was creepy, gave me the chills. ^.^

Also, I'm in love with your 30-year-old Inuyasha. I've never seen a fic where he's been older than late twenties, so it's a new experiance to see how he'd act in his thirties.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Kagome isn't TOO much of a bitch towards him. Poor Inuyasha. Kagome should be all like: "Forget alcohol, Inuyasha! Drink me!" and he should be all like: "Oh, just you wait, Kagome! I'll drink you good!" And then he pounces and they roll over and have sex with that awesome, sexy, five-o'clock shadow of his scraping against her... Mmmm. lol.

Okay, now that I've had my fantasy...

UPDATE!

Author's Response:

LOL! Your review made me laugh out loud hahaha Don't you worry there is PLENTY of steamy sex between these two coming up! Of course I have to lay the groundwork first...but trust me it's coming and it'll be good. I really needed Inuyasha to be more mature in this story because of what he's dealt with in his past and what he's going to be going through. I didn't think a younger character could pull off the depth of character needed for it...his actions would always seem immature, at least to me anyway. And yes, the figure in the bathroom mirror was Kikyo...more on her later ;)

And since you asked so nicely...another update is on the way...





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 20, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Sweet Revenge

Ohhhh my goodness! *cracks up* I love Kouga because he brings out the worst in Inuyasha, and it's so entertaining. XD I really loved the spat between the two, as well as the moment Inuyasha catches Kagome as she falls.

And please, do take your time with the development of their feelings. It's true that the best part of romance fanfiction is the buildup. I love the buildup. I'm obessed with it. XD

Your chapters are getting longer, too! Yay! I'm a sucker for lengthy chapters!

Please continue! I'm looking forward to Inuyasha and Kagome getting together.

Author's Response:

You're so wonderful :) Thank you so much for all the support! I have a soft spot for Kouga just because he's so chivalrous when he wants to be. He's actually going to play a much bigger role later on :)

Because I've read your absolutely fantastic ficlet Earthshake I thought I should tell you that this next chapter features an earthquake. When I originally wrote the chapter I realized, like you, that not many fanfics feature natural disasters. It's such a great way to add in a plot twist as well as a little bit of excitement! That's partially what drew me to your ficlet - to see how someone else had written the same concept. We went at it from totally different angles so I'll be curious to hear your thoughts on it.

Thanks again for another fantastic review :) You keep me chuggin' along! Hopefully another update later tonight, but if not then by tomorrow. Cheers!

- Langus





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: February 24, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Earthquakes Are No One's Friend

Yay! A new chapter! You have a way of writing this Inuyasha with the perfect amount of... gruffness. It's awesome.

I love the chapter, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the time they spend in the elevator. XD

-SugarRos





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: March 02, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: A Dangerous Encounter

Yay! I was starting to worry it would never be posted!

I just have to say that I am oh-so happy they didn't have sex yet. XD

The making out was scrumptious though.

Another great chapter! well done!

Author's Response: I'm so so sorry about the wait for this chapter. This past week was just ridiculous with school and grading papers and what not but I should be back to regular updates now. Chapter seven will be up and ready in a few days. I'm glad you appreciate the waiting with these two. I know some readers are like "Gah! Just put in the lemon already!" but I really didn't want to rush into it with these two. Knowing their personalities and Inuyasha's trust issues it just wouldn't be realistic yet. Thank you so so much for reviewing :D Your words of support always brighten my day!





Reviewer: SugarRos Signed
Date: May 07, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: The Sound of One Hand Slapping

Langus! Alright, I know it's been forever, and I'm completely, absolutely, totally sorry for the delay in reviewing! Might I just say that you've been busy writing like crazy! ^.^ I've been offline for a bit, writing an original novel, so I haven't had a chance to read and review anything. A terrible excuse, and I'm sorry. The funny thing is, I was flicking through the channels last night and came across Law and Order SVU and was immediately like: *gasp!!!* Omg,Langus! Love's Smirking Revenge! I haven't checked it in forever! So then I come back to find a massive update! O.O Thank you for the dedication of the chapter, It means a lot to me. XD I really enjoyed it, too! The way Kouga is, how he and Inuyasha almost killed each other and the kiss at the end, all perfectly orchestrated as usual. I'm in love with this story.

On to the next!

~SugarRos

Author's Response: Hahaha! I love the Law & Order SVU reference. Guess it's not hard to read the bits inspired by it in this fic eh? Oh Stabler hahaha Working on an original novel is a very decent excuse for not being around online. What's the premise? I'd love to hear more about it! That's probably one of my ultimate goals so it makes me very excited to hear you're working on one. Good luck with it - hope I hear from you again soon ;)





Reviewer: SugarRos Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2008
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Secret's Out

Oh jeeeezus. Langus, that was just all super amounts of hot. I mean... I just... Holy crap. This story is SO FREAKING GOOD. And I love, love, LOVE the way you write Inuyasha. He's perfect. Right straight out of my fantasies. I loved the way he was all gruff and insecure while telling her his secret.

Another job well done. I'm off to work now, but I'll get in another couple of chapters tonight. You've inspired me to get off my butt and get writing the next chapter of my fics. Thank you.

~SugarRos

Author's Response: Hahaha Thanks so much :) Glad you enjoyed the steaminess. Trust me, he's the Inuyasha out of my fantasies too hahaha The next couple chapters should see a bit of development with his character so you get to see a glimpse of who he was before Kikyou. He's got a lot more to him than just a bitter, washed up, love sick hack ;)





Reviewer: SugarRos Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Lemonade Anyone?

Um, okay. Hot and more hot. And even more hot. I love a dominant Inuyasha.

A really well written Lemon, Langus. Really, I shy away from them, and by that I mean I hate the way my lemons sound, which is why I only write heavy lime. They ARE hard to write, aren't they? But anyway, your usage of words weren't gross or crass, and I thought it was very believable, and I thank God that you did not make it virgin sex. I hate virgin sex lemons. Ugh.

Awesome job as always. Can't wait to see what happens next.

~SugarRos

Author's Response:

You and me both! Nothing sucks the "hot" out of a sex scene like virgin sex. Plus she's in her twenties... I don't know too many twenty-something virgins (though props to those who are). Lemons aren't just hard to write, they're almost impossible. There's such a fine line between words that are acceptable and words that aren't and the tone of the entire bit can be altered based on the choice of a single word. It's just frustrating to write them more than anything. Stick to the heavy lime hahaha you'll do yourself a world of favours. Plus, if written well, a lime can be far hotter than any lemon. Glad to hear you're still loving it. Hopefully I'll hear from you again soon ;)

~ Langus