Reviewer: Foayasha Signed
February 03, 2011
Chapter 6: Think of Him and Crave His Presence
Alright... I am officially a huge fan of your writing. It is so... eclectic. In other works of yours, they are so emotionally deep, vivid, poetic... etc. However, in this more light hearted fic, you do an awesome job of creating the humorous atmosphere; create entertaining youth dialog(inner dialog), as well as creating an interesting plot.
I like this story personally, because of the idea of Kagome loving Inuyasha as a friend first, and then realizing how she may love him more later down the road. In their time of separation she wasn't pining over him while feeling envious of Kikyou. For these newer emotions, or at least just realize emotions, of jealousy... who wouldn't feel a little envy at that age, or any age?! Great interpretation in this fic. Just wanted to say my piece, since I haven't reviewed thus far.
Author's Response: Um, WOW. This is, like, one of the greatest reviews I've ever gotten, no joke. xD And I'm glad you enjoy my writing; I'm very insecure about it, and later chapters in How to Lose are going to stink (trust me; they will o.o'), so hopefully your opinion doesn't change TOO much. XD And I agree - teens often are emotional and easily swayed, so they're easily envious or in dispair. Nothing wrong with it, but it's true. :3 And thank you for reading and reviewing; it means a ton. :D Hope you enjoy the rest of the fic - and that the rest doesn't suck much! ^.^'