Reviewer: lonelydusk Signed
May 22, 2010
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's kind of strange how people never incorporate people with 'disabilities' in their stories- characters are usually perfect, aren't they (I am guilty for implementing this in my art and my writing so...)? But, I am glad that you have treaded on that subject, especially with such added elegance.
I love how Inuyasha doesn't mind it at all... he still thinks she is enrapturing despite her flaws. "What a man what a man what a man what a mighty fine man..."
And the way he was all shy and such when he was meeting her- how cute, and very expected out of his character. They seemed to 'get it on' really quickly, though, but I don't mind LOL
Yes - this story was very good!! I would love a sequel as well. :) Author's Response:
Thank you. I usually have the same problem with making characters perfect--at least close to it. So I figured, why not?
I will probably make a sequel to this someday soon :)