Penname: Littlekely [Contact]
Real Name: Melissa
Member Since: May 05, 2010
Membership Status: Member
Bio: I have been an Inuyasha fan for going on 8 years I still love the series even to this day. My fave couples are San/Mir, Ship/Kirara, Sessh/Rin, and my all time favorite Inuyasha/Kagome. I absolutly (sp?) dislike Sessh/Kag, Inu/Kik, or anyone else beside the way Rumiko-san has made them out to be. But I am a fanfic artist and am on hiatus (sp?) untill further notice...I think thats it......for now ;)
Gender: female
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Arrive in Tokyo? Check. Go shopping? Check. See the sights? Check. Get taken advantage of in a dark alleyway...? This is what she got for not only failing to study the language, but wandering away from her class during a school trip to Tokyo...
Categories: Legends, Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, Hojo, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jakoutsu, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kirara, Kouga, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou, Souta
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Psychological, Romance
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Blood/Gore, Body Modification, Domestic Violence, Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Fetish, Graphic Violence, Implied Pedophilia, Implied Rape, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, Masturbation/SoloM/F, Molestation, Oral/Hand job, Orgy, Pedophilia, PlayPen/Sex Toys, Pregnancy, Punishment, Rape/Non-consensual , Roleplay, Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Slavery, Threesome, Underage Pregnancy, Underage Sex, Voyeurism
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215589 Read Count: 28258

[Report This] Published: July 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011

Reviewer: Littlekely Signed
Date: September 13, 2010
Chapter number:
Title: “Nihongo nanase masuka?”

I am so in love right now. "I have his heart......his body is optional." from now on that will be my new favorite quote. For years I have been trying to explain to my friends that so long as my boyfriend or husband can come home to me and still make love to me and still tell me he loves me with passion then I don't care if he cheats, so long as he doesn't bring an STD or AIDS. Thank you so much for that and trust me it really touched my heart.

Reviewer: Littlekely Signed
Date: September 19, 2010
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Cruelty IS Love

Omg, I'm in love with this story. As I've already told you before. "As long as I have his heart....his body is optional" Love it. Really can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I AM SO GLAD YOU REVIEWED AGAIN!!!!!! I felt like an absolute DUMBASS when I realized I'd posted twice and your AWESOME review was on the "extra" chapter. I really am glad. I love how you took her words to heart, seriously. Thanks so much for your review. <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2010
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Progress To Him Means One Step Forward---One-Hundred Steps Back

Oh crap! Just when I thought things were actully going to get better, the queen of mischeif comes in. I think I can actually see what's going to happen. Hopefully I'm wrong.

Author's Response: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I'm going to update as soon as I can, especially because my muse is on a ROLL tonight! WOOT! Look for it soonish!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21, 2010
Chapter number: 17
Title: Chapter 17: Shattered Reflection

Really?! You left us there? So I'm going to have to wait till after X-Mas to know what happens? Ugh, you're killing me lady, on the other hand I liked the chapter. I loved that you went into more detail on Izayoi and Taishokomaru's history. And of course, I loved the heated kiss, absoultely proud of you on this chapter. And hit me up on FB we haven't talked in a long time <3

Author's Response: HEY!!!!! <3 <3 <3 Don't worry, I didn't leave you hanging for long!!!! There is a new chapter up right now! I'm glad you liked this story; and of course, I had to do the InuXIza segment, haha! Here's hoping you enjoy this next chapter! Message me on facebook!!!!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2010
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18: Try, Try Again

Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! That's pretty much all I can say! I have a question, will Michiru be out of the picture for good or is he and Kikyo gonna cook up some plan to get Kagome? Because that's what most authors do, so I guess you can say I'm being sterotypical, but you can judge me later. But I'm really happy with this chapter, finally after so long, Kagome and InuYasha confess their love for another. And I'm going to have to use that Hedgehog Dilema in one of my stories, cus that is pure genius. Again, as I end this I say, I love this story.

Author's Response: Hmmm...I wonder. IS Michiru outta the picture for good? *insert devious smirk*  And feel free to use the Hedgehog's Dilemma, haha! I ended up writing my final psych paper on it freshman year.

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2010
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Home

Awww, I feel so loved. Any who, beautiful chapter, almost brought a tear to my eye. I'm going to pray that the chapter will be put up tomorrow.....if not I think I'll have fun harassing you for it, lol jk. Really loved the ending, Sango has come really far from the girl that couldn't stand Kagome's guts to being her best friend, very different from what other authors would do, which is exactly why I love this story!!! And to comment on your lastest response to my review, I knew it! There was no way Michiru is going to stay the nice guy and just roll over and let InuYasha win, even though InuYasha is going to win because that's InuYasha, I'm excited to see what you'll do.<<<<<<3333333!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey, ladylove!!!! I'm glad you liked this chapter! Sorry the new chapter wasn't up yesterday, but it's definitely up today! I hope you enjoy it!!! And HASN'T Sango come far? God, all I wanted to do was write her outta the story when I first created her, but Kagome is nothing without her best friend/sister Sango. They just compliment each other so well! (Somehow, this is the second story where I end up making Sango this next-to-detestable character *cough, cough, Hell Hath no Fury*cough, but because I like her so much, I always want her to have a happy ending, haha!)

And of COURSE Michiru isn't out of the story, hahah!!!! Remember what I said when I first introduced him into the story and everyone was wondering whether or not he was going to be a good guy or a bad guy? Well...that hasn't changed. *Insert dubious smirk*Hope you enjoy this next chapter!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2010
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Crimson Lies

Word Sho-chan? You're going to leave us there? I think you have a mission to turn us emo cause for the last couple of chapters I was back in love with InuYasha and then you do this?! Not that I have a problem with Yaoiness cause I'm an in and out fan but still you left us off! Why did Kurenai call InuYasha a liar? Oh my head. Any way I hope you have a good New Years and enjoy the rest of the year. I'm going to be expecting a New Years Gift, which is another chapter. Tata <3

Reviewer: Littlekely Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Chapter number: 24
Title: Chapter 24: Labyrinth: Part 2

O.M.G, I can't, I just can't take it. Kurenai is making my list as a fave character, just as long as she doesn't get it twited that InuYasha and Kagome belong together. Now, I would like to say that the last two chapters were really, really, good. I liked that Kagome came there and, surprisingly, that Akuma InuYasha came back. I guess the sadistic side of me likes seeing Kagome hurt, just a little bit. Oh and guess what? I got Yakuza Moon, it is such a page turner, like I'm in love with it. But really please hurry and update cause I'm really excited to see what happpens and what Kagome's answer is going to be.

Author's Response: Painful, isn't it? XDDDDD And everyone is ready to LOVE Kurenai as long as she doesn't interfere, lmao!!!! You're definitely not the only one to say that, promise!!! <3 And I cannot wait to read Yakuza Moon; I found it, as promised!!! Can't wait to start it and I'll update hopefully soon!!!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Pure Death

I knew you still had it in you. I loved the chapter, I have the feeling that Kurenai is going to die, but as I've learned before you've always sent my predictions down the toilet. I'm excited to see that you've come back for the moment, it really makes me happy. ^////^ Please keep up the good work Jaqui-sama. ! <3

Author's Response: "Jaqui-sama"---*IS IMMENSELY FLATTERED AND EMBARRASSED* X3333 Thank you so much, hahahahahaha!!! And fortunately, there is a new chapter up! You won't have to wait long for the next one---I'm working on it as we speak! Hope you enjoy the new chapter and much love, love, love! <3

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2011
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: ...So, Just Pull The Trigger

......................... Wow. That's really all I can say. This chapter really hit a personal point in my heart. My friend, when faced with a conflict, always tries to cut her wrist. Of course me and her boyfriend are always able to stop her. I really hope Kagome will be ok and I'm really happy that InuYasha finally learned to let go of the past. *grumbles* if only he realized that in the anime. lol. But I was right Kurenai did die!!! T~T And Jaqui-sama, Onegai don't let Kagome die, Please!!!!!!

Author's Response: I am UNFORGIVABLY lame for getting back to you SOOOOO late. Seriously, I suck. I'm sorry. Life is SO chaotic right now! -__- And I have a friend like that--so I can honestly emphasize. :( Check out the newest update! Hope you enjoy!!!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2011
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Tied Up; Tied Down; Tied To You...

Beautiful! I'm so happy that InuYasha and Kagome are finally married. Even though, she was just a character may Kami-sama bless Kurenai's soul. Very curious to see what happens now, my first thought was that Michiru would go all psycho crazy and try and win Kagome back, but that's a bust. So I don't know whats going to happen and even after following this story for the past couple of months I still don't know what's going to happen. Keep me guessing Jaqui-sensei!

Author's Response: Hahahahahahahaha, EVERYONE was expecting Michiru to become some form of a bad guy! I just didn't have it in me! :( The little weenie grow on me hahaha!:P So, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story! I hope you enjoy theupdates!

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2011
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: Dragon's Eye

This was a "awwww" and "noooo" chapter. Does InuYasha becoming the new Ryu no Kami mean that his father will die? Also Kagome's pregnant?! FINALLY!!! I mean, it's about freaking time! *calms down* I mean, its about time she had delivered a child to InuYasha. I'm happy to see you're back! I was uber excited when I saw the update message in my email box. By the way, have you read my fic yet?

Reviewer: Littlekely Signed
Date: August 25, 2011
Chapter number: 29
Title: Chapter 29: Doubt

O_O That was my reaction when I read that last line! OMG, I'm so happy for them, if you ask me they deserve this, a chance to be happy. Although knowing you this story is far from over, I'm absolutely still in love with this. A sapphire and pinkish-purple Tengoku no Ryu, huh? Either that means a boy and a girl or we're gonna have a flamboyant boy and a tomboy girl, lol!


Ugh! I can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Author's Response: Hahahahahahahaha!!!! I DIED reading this!!! XDD And I'm keeping the TRUE genders a secret until they are born hee hee!!! X3(And GOD, if one of them is a boy and ends up gay, I will TOTALLY credit you hahahaha!)

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2011
Chapter number: 30
Title: Chapter 30: The Birth of a God and Goddess

Aw, this actually made me want to cry a little. I'm actually very proud of Michiru, even though I still think he has hidden agenda's, to actually put away his pride and jealousy for Kagome makes me understand a nice character development. But the real one I should be proud of is Kagome and InuYasha themselves.


Inu-sama has really come far from the Akuma that I, for a split second, hated. He's now a caring father and a proud husband and lord.


Kagome-sama, boy where do i begin, i'm just truly proud that she wasn't a complete damsell and distress and actually fought for the spot and title she earned.


I don't know how many times I have to say this, but I am completely proud to follow this story and a review in, if not all, most of the chapters. I love this story and I do hope I can create a character that can have this type of serious development. 


I so <3 u!!!!!!!!!!! Like you totally inspire me and I can gratefully say you are one of my idols.

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2011
Chapter number: 31
Title: Chapter 31: A Mother's Blood

one...chapter...ONE....CHAPTER!?!?!?! Oh no! Say it ain't so! Aww I have been through an emotional rollercoaster and had become too attached to this story for it to be over. But as the, stupid, saying goes, all good things must come to an end.


I still can't help but laugh at the fact you named one of the boys Kurenai, because that adds on to my theory that one of the children will be a little (or hopefully a lot) flamboyant. I give Kagome a pat on the back for that.


I can't wait for the...last...chapter...*starts busting out into tears* <3 


(TWO-SHOT Dedicated to the awesome kagome313! The FINAL chapter of the "When Heaven's Light Turns To Hellfire/Hell's Nirvana" triology.)

When we last left InuYasha and Kagome in "Hell's Nirvana", they had just settled into accepting their very abnormal, very sinful relationship. However, sins don't go unpunished; and indeed, they are finally punished for theirs...

Categories: Fables
Characters: Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Kaede, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Psychological, Romance, Slice of Life, Tragedy
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Character Death, Domestic Violence, Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Incest, Language, Pedophilia, Religious, Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Underage Sex
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11464 Read Count: 813

[Report This] Published: July 07, 2011 Updated: July 07, 2011

Reviewer: Littlekely Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2011
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: God's Damned Little Lambs (Part 2)

Sinful ending to a sinful couple, but I still loved it. I wasn't expecting a third chapter, but I still loved it. I'm happy to see you're back to your writing after a long hiatus. Can't wait to see more and I am so expecting an update from “Nihongo nanase masuka?”.