Reviewer: kagome313 Signed
July 21, 2010
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Guard Up
Aren't you the productive type? I really enjoy this read - I cannot tell you how much i enjoy reading ur stuffs and i remember u saying one time that u want to be a published author right? Trust me - i would gladly buy your book - hands down!
My mouth was opened so wide when i read the fighting part n all that bit... It was so cool reading it! But all the sweetness i was reading, i was mindful of the warnings u have (which is a handful...just reading them had me all giddy) lol. I'm very very, perverted when it's called for, am not ashamed bout the sexual stuff n to admit i enjoy it, so to read fics like these, captures my interest to the fullest! Idk... just reading them gives me a rush. I saw the 3sum, the orgy - all that stuff and am just effing giddyy... Tween the 3sum n orgy i nvr did an orgy... but yh... i wanna see how u write those stuffs.(I might ramble cuz the power is out atm so this review will be set later on x]) ...
Inuyasha is hawt, and this fic sorta reminds me of a manga i read one time... i don't remember the name. But the age difference(in the manga the age diff was more though) and the scene where inu went to kags school - yh it reminded me of the manga alot. But anyhoos... i don't wanna bore u with my paragraphs lol
But Inuyasha is such a jerk for taking advantage of Kags - bout he's checking off his list n saying how she'll work... damn him!! I feel sorry for her - poor butterfly is caught in the spider's web. All ur stuff is good, and the plot am eager to read - especially to see how u'll make them fall in love n... be together in the end?? o.o
Just know that i adore your writing and ur squeezing ur way deeper into my fav author's list - which is very hard for authors in general to do. =P
PS. Reading all this dark stuff is really making me wanna pen something(I like it a tad bit more when the girl is dominant though - so u can tell how i'd write if i do pen something xD lol). I've always wanted to pen something really dark that breaks all the safety chains but i've been hesitant. Though reading ur stuff is just makin me itch to write one of my own - especially knowing that at some point, pleasure can be enhanced by...pain xD lolAuthor's Response: Hi again! Yeah, I've been focusing on every story except the one that won me 1st place in the destined awards. REEEEEALLY need to get my priorities straight, but for right now, nothing wrong with a few digressions, haha! And thanks, love!!! You're so sweet!!!! Here's hoping my book actually sells once it's done publishing! YEEEP!!!!! But, that aside, I am loving all of the fighting, you have no idea, haha! And THANK YOU for being mindful of the warnings. -___- Some people haven't been. *mumbles* So, yeah, I'm glad the warnings actually get you EXCITED! XD It always pumps me up to read a story with so many different warnings. Never done an orgy or a threesome either, but that's what imagination *mutters*andalottahentaiporndoujin** is for! XD And I love your paragraphs! Trust me, they are never boring! And you know whatever you write I'll be there reading! I LOVE your writing!!!