Reviewer: Harmony Sunsinger Signed
December 10, 2009
Chapter 40: Finding (Trouble)
Damn you, to leave it there like that! *shakes fist* Heh, it's getting really good, though. I'm excited that she found him, but that monk had me all coiled and pissy too. Kagome's lucky she's more patient than I am - I'd have smacked him around and freed everyone right then!
Anyway, update soon, and cool that you put the link to "Return Service" in here, to let everyone know about the sequel. :D I look forward to your next chapter.
And oh yeah! Beta-ness: In Paragraph 8 = "...but in doing to..." should probably be "...but in doing so..." Just figured Mr. Anal would like to be informed. <33Author's Response:
Well, he has dozens of villagers following his orders, so you would have wound up in a cage! Good thing Kagome's smarter ;)
Yeah, we haven't gotten much love for our sequel, have we? *pouts* Hopefully we'll get a few more reviews after this. Thanks for the typo tip; I will fix it. But "Mr. Anal"? I don't know if I like that nickname. It can be taken too many ways. XD