Reviewer: ShouraiChan Signed
July 18, 2009
Chapter 1: I Need You Back in my Heart, Baby
Omg, I had SUCH a long review for this, but my stupid *%@$!^!!!! computer erased it! BLARG!
Well, pretty much, my eyes were like @_@ WHOA that was so deep! Oh my God, this had twists I didn't even see coming, even if I were standing only an inch away. This was so powerful, so deep, and so...different! It made me really happy, to say the least! I loved the angst--it was portrayed in only YOU could, lady! And I mean, I was GLUED to this story for a while, just sitting here like, "Omg, Inuyasha, don't!!!!!!" At one point, my computer screen blanked out, and I remember sticking my hands to my mouth and just pancking, because it was RIGHT near the end! I made some sort of non-human sound that actively showed my horror, lol. But seriously, this was AMAZING. Totally being honest, I really wish I could write as well as you and Selina! You two are my ALL-TIME FAVE AUTHORS! Woot! Omg, more kudos! This was really great. Author's Response: OH! I know all about that!! It happens so much to me! *bluches* Thank you so very very much! I was trying my hand at doing some real and definite Angst instead of the \'baby\' angst I usually do. *beams* I\'m so glad I could bring you into the story and feel what was happening - be a part of the story. That is the Biggest thing with me. Stories that draw the reader into the story. Just keep writing and writing! And if you are nervous to try something bold and daring - still do it! *blushes some more* I am soooo very thrilled by your review!! I am also thankful that I got assigned that song like I did.. it really helped out!