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Real Name: Mary Thomas
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Getting dumped by your boyfriend of two years? Bad. Getting dumped by your boyfriend of two years while you're eight months pregnant? Double bad. Going into labor in a public park and depending on some stranger for help? Takes the cake. Rated for mature content, adult language and adult situations.
Categories: Legends

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Family, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, OOC/Out of Character, Pregnancy
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32243 Read Count: 2863

[Report This] Published: August 02, 2012 Updated: April 09, 2015


Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lllooovvveedd it :) I liked how you made the whole family acted it was great. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great writing :)





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 21, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read a new chapter, you have readers here that want to read more of this great story an your writing.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 06, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Still love the story can't wait for new chapters please. Keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 23, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I still love that chapter, can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I steel love the story and looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see what you do about the starker chick. How your going to bring Kagome and Inuyasha closer romantically. There's also what are you going to do with Sango an Miroku. Can't wait for more run ins with Inuyasha's family. Keep up the great writing so looking forward to reading the next chapter soon.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hey still love the story can't wait for the next chapter. Hope see it soon keep up the great writing :)





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2014
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hey I don't know what's going on if you having some stuff going in your life or you not in the mood to write any more. If you're not wanting to work on this story now. I was looking forward to a new chapter soon I love your stories and writing this is a great story. Don't give up on this story it's a great story I love it and hope you write another chapter soon





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2015
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really love this story and wondering if you're going to do a new chapter soon. Hope so good luck keep up the great writing.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2015
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved it, I was so looking forward to another chapter soon an you did thanks. I know you have more in your life then writing stories. Especially for people who love your stories and can't wait to read another chapter lol. I can't wait for another chapter I love reading a lot of your stories keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2015
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So loved that, didn't like him going on a date with Iyana even if it didn't happen. Hope you write more soon. Like maybe Inuyasha's mom inviting Kagome an Kai to a family outing with all of them. Inuyasha meeting Kagome's mom for the first time. Or an almost hookup between Inuyasha and Kagome. Hope to read more soon keep up the great writing



Sands of Time by SavvytheBanana Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:
Based on "The Mummy", but with a few extra twists! The tragedy of Naraku and Kikyo in Ancient Egypt leads to the adventure in the 1920s for Inuyasha and the gang! THIS IS NOT A CROSSOVER and it DOES NOT follow the exact same plot as the movie.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Ginta, Hakkaku, Hakudoushi, InuYasha, Jaken, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kirara, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Myouga, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Film/Televison Adaptation, Mystery, Paranormal, Romance, Thriller, WAFF
Warnings: Blood/Gore, Character Death, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, Suicide
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13580 Read Count: 442

[Report This] Published: April 28, 2013 Updated: June 10, 2013


Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2014
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: The Road to Hamunaptra

Hey just saw this and thought it might be interesting and it was a very good story I hope you keep on going with it. I liked how you turned this famous old mummy story to an Inuyasha story to. It was great what you did and hope you finish it I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great writing :)



Blackout by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 112]

Summary:

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*COMPLETE*  A night of celebration yields life-altering consequences for Inuyasha and Kagome.  Can they weather the storm, or will the consequences of their actions prove too much to handle?


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, Molestation, Oral/Hand job, Pregnancy
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 328087 Read Count: 9452

[Report This] Published: December 24, 2013 Updated: September 04, 2015


Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 07, 2014
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: The Poison User

That was great can't wait for the next chapter, just hope you don't kill the baby or something horribly happen to the baby in the story, keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 18, 2014
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: Sacrifice

Love it, it was a great new chapter to the story. I love that part of the story were you wrote Sango in way that showed her woman's strength not a warriors bravery. Were she turn the table an put her self in danger to were she was going to get rape to protect her friend an the unborn baby. Sango's sisterly love for Kagome an a women's love an protection for a child showed a great side of her in the story. Love the story so for can't wait for the next chapter can't wait for what you do for the rest of the story keep up the great writing.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 06, 2014
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Fire and Metal

I still love the story an hope a new chapter or a couple new chapters will come up soon keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18, 2014
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Recovery

That was a great chapter, I agree with you about Kagou. His love for her an her loving heart is what helped change him. I so looking forward to see how you change the story from the origanal version an how you bring the characters in the story. Wondering what your going to do with Kikoyo's death. Hoping soon you bring Inuyasha and Kagome closer then they are now. Looking forward to a great new chapter, keep up the great writing





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 30, 2014
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: The Barrier around Mount Hakurei

I loved it, I was having a hard time waiting for your next chapter. I loved it when Inuyasha stood up to Kikyou. Will some what stood up to her about fucking time. Wondering what your going to do with Kikyou's up an coming supposedly death. Will you really make her dead or like the anime an manga just were everyone thinks she dead for a time then find she's alive an needs Kagome's help. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great writing.

Author's Response:

Yes, I loved it when he stood up to her too, but I had to do it in a little bit of a wishy-washy way.  Otherwise it wouldn't feel realistic to me, at this point in the story. 

BTW, do you know that the chapter review system is based on 10 stars?  It's fine if you want to give it a 5 out of 10, but I'd like to know why.  I can appreciate constructive criticism.  But based on your review it seems like the 5 rating might have been a mistake...





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 26, 2014
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18: Into Darkness

I though it was a good chapter, wondering what your going to do next. How are you going to do the part when Naraku amergise from the mountain. Are you going to have Kagome run into Sessh were he finds out that she having Inuyasha baby. Their so much more like when Kagome is taking later on after Naraku's rebirth. They try to use her, that evil baby and Keigra (spelled her name wrong sorry) kidnapped her after Inuyasha goes looking for Kikyo. Can't wait for the next chapter and many more keep up the great writing.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 30, 2014
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Naraku's True Objective

Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter. Your a great writer keep the great writing an love your stories keep it up :)





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2014
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Lost in a Dream

That was great hope you write another great chapter soon. I liked how you put Kagura in this chapter, the part with Inuyasha and Kagura have teasing talk was great and very regional. I'm wondering if in your story if you'll keep her alive. Not very many stories have her and keep so close to her character. She was one of my favorite characters in the story I was sad when she was killed off. I never thought she was evil not really she was just a person acting as she would with such circumstance that she had. I would love to read more stories were Kagura and Sess "can't reremember how to spell his name right now" get together I think in anime he was falling for her and would eventually come to love her if she wasn't killed. To me I'm sorry to you or who ever see him falling in love with Rin.To me I think he sees her like a daughter and that would be gross I just don't see them together. I love how you also wrote that scene for Sango an Miroku and how she acting. Keep these great chapter's coming love the story

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with you about Kagura.  I've never gone into detail with a Sesshoumaru romance, but I have had him paired with Rin before.  As long as Kagura survives beyond Naraku's death, I agree that she is a more appropriate pairing for him.  In the beginning she did some pretty evil things (slaughtering the wolf-youkai for example), but she never did anything that would be considered unforgivable by the standards of the time.  It's not like the ookami were really innocent themselves.  That's why I don't mind delving into her character a bit and potraying her in a sympathetic light. 





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2014
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: The Hard Way Home

I loved it that was an awesome chapter, I loved how made everything work out in the end. Also I liked how you brought out a camaraderie between Kagura and Inuyasha that came from survival an escape. I'm really enjoying this story looking forward to your next chapters keep up the great writing.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 08, 2014
Chapter number: 29
Title: Chapter 29: Reunions

This story has become one of my favorite, Love what your doing with everything. I also like how your putting more of Kagura in your story. She's one of my favorite characters, can't wait to see what you do next. Keep up the great writing the story is great





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2015
Chapter number: 32
Title: Chapter 32: To the Bitter End

That was a freaking amazing chapter, man so can't wait to read what you do next :).I loved how you made it so climactic here an there with each character. I love what your doing with each character. How you with each situation made a part of them come out that was even better. There were striving to be better in whole other way then the original story. When intell the very end when the final killed Naraka they seem to become better for an from each other. So can't wait for the next chapter loved this one so much. Keep up the kick ass amazing writing :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise.  I have been building up to this chapter for a long time, as you can guess.  The ending should suggest that the climactic scene is not quite over yet.  :)





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2015
Chapter number: 35
Title: Chapter 35: Responsibility

I love this story your writing is amazing, looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how your going to write Inuyasha out of this. Kagome going to school what are you going to do their that will be interesting. An Kagura what are you going to do to her. I hated that she was killed off, Sess in your story how is going to get his other arm back or maybe he won't in yours. I would love to read another story were Sess and Kagura fall in love an stay together their to few of those together. I don't like him with Rin to me it's like incest I think that he looks at her more as a daughter

Author's Response: Well, I don\'t know if I agree about the Sess/Rin incest thing (I did write them together in Metamorphosis), but I do agree that Sess/Kagura is a better match. Not that I\'m promising for them to get together in this story. I\'ve never done a dedicated Sesshoumaru romance with anyone, and I probably never will. He\'s just not that interesting to me as a character. But I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story so far. I\'ll probably post chapter 36 in the next day or two.





Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2015
Chapter number: 38
Title: Chapter 38: The Prince of Thieves

I truly loving this story and wondering what your going to do next in the story. I hope you don't kill any of them off. I would love for Kagura to live and end up with Sess. Hopefully you have Inuyasha back to him self before Kagome has to go home because of her pregnancy. Keep up the great writing :)



The Deadly Siren by JazaraRose Rated: Reserved starstarstar [Reviews - 9]

Summary:
The legend of The Deadly Siren tells the story of a warrior born from the ashes of her decimated kingdom. Her duty is to bring peace to a world that knows only of chaos and destruction. Her beauty and power are unrivaled, and never has she failed to bring down an enemy. But when the world needs her most will she be brought to her knees by one man?
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21627 Read Count: 3336

[Report This] Published: September 12, 2014 Updated: May 23, 2017


Reviewer: kitten Signedstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 14, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Loved it can't wait for next chapter