Penname: Thayet [Contact]
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Member Since: January 05, 2009
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Bio: I love to read and have been a big fan of Inuyasha ever since I first discovered it.  I don't write because my imagination doesn't work that way but if anyone needs a Beta I'm very good at proof reading.
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Strength by inufan625 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]

Summary:
COMPLETE: When InuYasha arives in Kagome's room battered and broken, clutching the Shikon no Tama tightly in one hand, and the world outside seems to have gone mad, Kagome will find herself tested in ways she never imagined, and in the end will learn what true strength really is.


Categories: Legends

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60273 Read Count: 12672

[Report This] Published: March 18, 2008 Updated: October 18, 2014


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: February 24, 2014
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Coming Clean

Yay I was so excited to see the new chapter. The scene with the clothes was adorable, especially followed by their inability to catch a break at home. I also really enjoyed the way you had Kagome tell Asami about their adventures in the past, especially with Inuyasha helping there at the end. I think it showed just how much they truly care about one another, it also seemed to help relieve Asami of some of her worries because she became able to put as much faith in Inuyasha as Kagome has.

Just a few grammar/spelling bits while they are shopping "Another round of giggles finally drew *InuYasha attention and he frowned." InuYasha's name needs an 's on it. 

Also "“We have *you size now,” she said." it should say *your not you.

"“Keh, go grab something you like that you *knew I would never agree to wear,” he told her." *Know not knew.

 "She covered her *mother with her hand as she giggled and then nodded." *mouth not mother.

"InuYasha she noted had his eyes closed and was taking deep breaths as he tried to recover from her assault." I would add a comma either after InuYasha or noted, although it's probably not necessary it might help the flow.

"He was taking slow deep breaths and she genuinely felt bad for him since she could feel just how turned on *her was and probably had as good of an idea as any woman ever had about what it felt like to be left hanging once a certain level of excitement had been reached." *he not her. Also a comma in that sentence might be a good idea.

 

I think that's everything. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the awesome work.



Author's Response: Thanks. I\'ll go back through this one agains since I clearly need to. I was just happy to have another one to post so I wasn\'t as careful. Glad you liked it. I was worried the clothes shopping while filler would be too tedious. I\'m glad it wasn\'t.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: September 06, 2014
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: The Calm Before

I absolutely loved this chapter. The story could almost be left here although I sincerely hope you don't decide to do so. I will admit to being a bit disappointed though that you didn't go into detail on their "double date" with Miroku and Sango's reincarnations.

Amazing work as always, I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: I\'m definitely not leaving it here. Miroku and Sango\'s reincarnations jumped in there and surprised me by showing up and I really did think about having their meeting after in there, but it just didn\'t fit at the start of the chapter, but I do plan on us seeing them again.\r\n\r\nThanks so much for taking the time to review





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: October 10, 2014
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: Culmination

I like how Kagome got to save Inuyasha in a fight, it doesn't happen often. Although it almost made the battle a little anti-climatic in how quickly she ended it, not that I'm complaining. ;) I can't wait for the finale, you do amazing work.

Mrs. H was beautifully in character when Sesshomaru brings Kagome in with Inuyasha limping along. I also love the character development you put into Sesshomaru's evolution of acceptance from the past to the present.

Just a quick editing point I found. Naraku says you instead of your about 1/3 of the way in, after the breeding experiment comment.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know my fight scenes tend to be a little lacking which is why they tend to end pretty quickly, but I\'m glad it wasn\'t a disappointment. I try really hard to get the characters to feel like themselves so I\'m always glad to hear when someone thinks I got it right. Thank for pointing out that typo, since I don\'t have a beta I miss more than I like.



P.B.W. by inufan625 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]

Summary:

Kagome desperately needs a job to support herself and her little brother. When an add that appears too good to be true shows up in the paper, what's a girl to do?

Disclaimer: I do not own InuYasha, nor will I make any money from this work of fiction. No copyright infringment is intended.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Fluff, Hentai, Parody
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11312 Read Count: 1797

[Report This] Published: March 21, 2008 Updated: June 22, 2008


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: March 28, 2009
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Part III

Very good and very amusing. That was a great way to take Sesshomaru down a few notches.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Part III

I hope you don't give up on this story. I just reread it and thought that I was going to wake the house up from laughter but then it has some very sweet and tender moments as well. It is a well written and truly enjoyable story, the fact that it's Inuyasha and Kagome just makes it better but you could put your own characters into this story if you really wanted to.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: September 03, 2016
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Part III

This story always makes me laugh, so thank you for the smiles.




Summary:

A collection of my drabbles focusing on Inuyasha and Kagome. Various ratings applied.

Disclaimer: The characters of InuYasha are not mine, they are property of Rumiko Takahashi, Shogakukan, Yomiuri TV, Sunrise, and Viz. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

 


Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5495 Read Count: 5270

[Report This] Published: April 02, 2008 Updated: March 08, 2015


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Maybe Poison

I love this one.



Hanyou of the Future by paynesgrey Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]

Summary:

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After the final battle, Inuyasha follows Kagome back to her time, only to be stuck there indefinitely. Inuyasha encounters a whole string of oddball jobs, rival suitors, modern society mishaps, and he has to deal with their awkward relationship.
Categories: Legends

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Other, Sesshomaru
Genres: Action-Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, Unresolved Sexual Tension
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67676 Read Count: 6127

[Report This] Published: April 02, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: February 14, 2009
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, I Remember You

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, my only complaint so far is having Mrs. Higurashi attrated to Hojo it's just a little weird.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Haha, yeah that's supposed to be weird.



The Day Planner by InusMistress Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]

Summary:
She didn't expect to meet him in a club and go home with him. He didn't expect her to leave so fast in the morning, without knowing her name. But when she leaves behind a clue, Inuyasha will do everything to find the girl he had a one night stand with...
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7530 Read Count: 700

[Report This] Published: April 05, 2008 Updated: September 06, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: The Taishos

I really like this story so far but Inuyasha and Yura?! (cringes) Anyway I can't wait to see what you have planned for future chapters.



Darkness Fades to Dawn by KodiaqKitten Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]

Summary:

Upon Naraku's defeat the jewel becomes locked in the modern world creating havoc and destruction in Kagome's life. Inuyasha would pull her from darkness and heal her troubled soul. Recovered, the miko befriends a young nephilim plagued by a life of constant suffering. Can a miko of light help heal even the most broken of souls? A new evil threatens the world and together with friends from the past she must rise to the occasion and once again destroy humanities enemy.

Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha or its characters.


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 203107 Read Count: 4865

[Report This] Published: April 20, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: December 13, 2012
Chapter number: 47
Title: Chapter 47: A New Beginning

First off, AMAZING story, it has been added to my blackberry in Document form so I can read it whenever I want without needing an internet connection. I cried, I laughed, my heart hurt for the characters, you put an amzing amount of emotion into your story and for that I commend you. I didn't notice this the first time around when I read this so I don't know if a formating change occurred but the last chapter cuts off in the middle of a sentence, and I thought you should know. I love all your stories and I can't wait to see what you do next.



The Last Time. by Keiko-Chan Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]

Summary:


InuYasha must give upallthat he has come to cherish.
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4676 Read Count: 2650

[Report This] Published: April 27, 2008 Updated: February 22, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: March 09, 2009
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue - Heaven On Earth.

I'm glad that you didn't end it after the first chapter. Happy endings are always better.

Author's Response:

Thanks! It just seemed like such a shame to leave it like that... But I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

 

~ KC



Blood & Tears by doggieearlover Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]

Summary:
InuYasha and Kagome are brutally attacked by someone they consider an ally, if not a friend.  Seriously injured, someone totally unexpected comes to their rescue and helps them to recover. This story is the journey of their recovery, InuYasha and Kagome's realization and admittance of their love for one another, and the proud, stoic, demon lord who comes to terms with the fact that his life is missing something.   (Inu/Kag/Sess but evolves to Inu/Kag, Sess/OC)

Feudal Association Jan 2007 WINNER Best InuYasha/Kagome Romance, and IYFG Q4 2005 2nd Place Best Drama!

Warning: Contains Violence, Rape & Lemons
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Rape/Non-consensual
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269866 Read Count: 19823

[Report This] Published: April 29, 2008 Updated: June 15, 2008


Reviewer: Thayet Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2016
Chapter number: 56
Title: Chapter 56: The Days of Our Lives (conclusion)

I've just finished re-reading your story for probably the 20th time and I love it just as much now as I did the first time. Fabulous work, thank you for sharing it.



Letters by SailorX Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]

Summary:
Princess Kagome agreeed to a written marrige to prevent war to someone she's never met. She writes to him to get to know him. What will he write back? What will happen when they meet? Can they learn to love eachother? Complete.
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27210 Read Count: 3466

[Report This] Published: May 10, 2008 Updated: May 10, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Epilogue

Very cute. Your story was definately well written and the only mild complaint that I have is the lack of lemons. Oh well you can't always have everything. jk :)



Erosion by JMaxwell Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

One-shot: Inuyasha wakes up in Kagome's bedroom after the final battle with Naraku, unable to remember how he got there. With the well sealed, he must adjust to a new life in the modern era even as a force from the past puts his happiness at risk.


Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Drama, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40769 Read Count: 536

[Report This] Published: May 13, 2008 Updated: May 13, 2008


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: July 27, 2010
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It seems to me like he's trapped by some sort of spell. That would explain his memory gaps, why Gramps oufudda worked, as well as why his strength seems to keep disapearing.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: July 27, 2010
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know how I feel about this story, it was very well written with a wonderful emotionial component. It was depressing, had it's happy moments, but as for actually liking the story; I don't know. This isn't meant to keep you from writing as I think that you have great talent and can't wait to see what else you come up with.



Swallowing Your Pride by Rinoa Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]

Summary:

Kagome is a 21 year old woman without a job.

There are only so many times you can ask your friends to pay your rent and bills for you, so now she would have to Swallow her Pride and work for, what she believed to be, a horrible man. After being fired from her last job for her outspoken ways would she be able to hold herself back and do as commanded or would she lose this job too, along with her home, car and everything she had ever worked for in her life? Could she really change who she was, and in truth, did she really want to?


Categories: Legends
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Hentai
Warnings: Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66385 Read Count: 6794

[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: August 23, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: March 16, 2009
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Over & Over Again

You end it like that!!!!!!! I hope the next chapter comes soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry, I had to!

I'm working on a chapter for my other fic at the moment but I hope to get another one up for this within the next day or two. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 8D

~Rinoa~





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: This Had Better Be Good!

I just wish that Sesshomaru was going on the business trip but maybe Inuyasha could take Kagome with him. Another great chapter, hopfully Inuyasha will realize how out of place Kagome feels because he can't do anything to help the situation untill he does.

Author's Response:

Completely agree, but then if I had sent Sesshomaru it wouldn't be much of a story! XD

I think in the newest chapter InuYasha is letting his guard down a little and trying to understand Kagome a little better...it's a slow process but he'll get there in the end...I hope!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Rinoa~





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Just Maybe...

Yay happy times can start to begin again. I just hope that Inuyasha doesn't start to actually believe any bullshit that Kikyou might decide to tell him while they are at that hotel, I still think that Kagome should go with Inuyasha on the trip and he and Kikyou definately need seperate rooms on this trip.

Author's Response:

I am so late in replying to this and I'm so sorry!

I would love to send Kagome on the trip too....but you'll just have to wait and see what comes in later chapters...you might be plesantly surprised ;)

Thank you so much for still reading and reviewing hun *hugs*

~Rinoa~





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: I Hate Snails!

That was great, I can just picture Kagome and Sango showing off then totally blowing Miroku and Inuyasha's minds by taking off their helmets. Also I have to agree with Kagome about the snails, I just hope it really is the snails and not some accident she's not expecting.



Keh by InitialA Rated: Reserved starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]

Summary:
It's finally over... Kagome has one more question though.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 459 Read Count: 962

[Report This] Published: June 12, 2008 Updated: June 12, 2008


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: February 09, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Keh

It's perfect, Kagome always knows what he's trying to say at least at this point in the series.



Harem by Bookworm810 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 47]

Summary:

Due to her father's unlawful actions, Kagome finds herself trust into the Prince's harem and is soon embroiled in a world likes of which she never dreamed of. Forbidden romance, plays for powers and plots for the throne are just part of what she will find within.

While this story does contain several pairngs, including multiple Inu/OC situations, it is at heart an Inu/Kag fic I promise.


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Implied Rape, Language, Suicide
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64320 Read Count: 4474

[Report This] Published: June 15, 2008 Updated: February 17, 2009


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I'm a fan of both couples and truly enjoying your story keep it coming.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: February 21, 2009
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great chapter, but cliffhanger endings are NOT fun!!!





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: March 07, 2009
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I can't wait for the next chapter.



Bark At The Moon by Dangersque Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Summary:

Photobucket Inuyasha was looking forward to the best summer ever after graduation. Instead, he finds out his father's alive, he's not human, and he's being recruited by both sides of a secret war. And he thought calculus was hard...
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29087 Read Count: 2270

[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: March 07, 2010


Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked it and can't wait for your next chapter. I wonder what Kagome will do when she realizes that some demons want to help out the humans.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Inuyasha he really had a bad day. Keep up the good work this is a great start on this story.