Reviewer: Thayet Signed
February 13, 2014
Chapter 11: Inconceivable
OMG X1000!!! I can't believe he's back that's just so unfair. Miroku's journal made me cry it was so beautiful and bittersweet. I also absolutely loved Inuyasha's promise to keep Kagome safe, his saying that there was no way he would ever die on her because she gave him such a strong reason to live is one of the sweetest things ever.
I'm really, really curious about where you are going to go from here. You've given me one major shock, because I never ever expected you to bring Naraku back. I'm also really curious about how you're going to play that out.
I'm also loving how well Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are getting along. While they will probably still have their issues it looks like they will be able to act like brothers that care for one another in the future.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors so kudos for that. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work. Author's Response: Here\'s a little secret, part of the reason I haven\'t been able to write for this is because I wasn\'t sure what was going to happen. The first half of this chapter has been done for literally 6 months. I finally got inspired and I still don\'t know exactly how it is going to play out, but I\'ll get there. Thanks for taking the time to review!