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He Will Be Loved by sexy_capricorn Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
Kagome is engaged to her boyfriend but falls madly in love with his father.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15748 Read Count: 765

[Report This] Published: January 19, 2007 Updated: January 21, 2007


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: There's No Such Thing As Perfect.

Love it!  This is a switch and I like that you are working on something different than most fics I have read, congrats on that!  Hojo is an idiot, can't he sence a little that something is wrong with his realtionship?  Reguardless of the side realationship Kagome has going with Inuyasha which I don't truly blame her in the least, but it is wrnog as hell! I am a believer of closing one door before opening another, to what I was saying she should not marry if she does not really want to be married to him and Yash being Hojo's dad should stress that point with having to go through a broken marriage himself, he shouldn't want it for his son or for her if he really cares.  To if Kagome really cares for Hojo she wouldn't go through with the marriage, not based on the affair but based on her true feelings.  People always say "I don't want to hurt him or her so I won't say anything."  Geesh your hurting them by not saying!  Okay, excellent fic I hope to see more updates real soon!  Now I'm very curious!  Your version of Inu is HOT! Good job! Update soon! Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Phantom Horses by vikikibouki Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]

Summary:
Kagome Higurashi has a very special gift. One that could either make her famous, or get herself killed. When she's asked to help out because of strange things going on in a meadow where a new house is being built, how will she cope? Especially when the detective is none other than Inuyasha Taisho, himself?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Naraku, Other, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, Occult, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Molestation
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15762 Read Count: 1419

[Report This] Published: March 07, 2008 Updated: November 12, 2009


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  It's totally unique.  I love the story line and your version of the characters. The description of the horses sound breathtaking.  I love how you describe everything I can see Kagome conversing with the animals.  Not only is it serious, it's funny!  I love how Inuyasha gets bit in the rear!  How Kagome out does him when they first meet.  The male horse he said that he didn't like Inuyasha because he is deceptive, is he a demon concealled?  I notice that you didn't mention if they were human or demon.  I have pictured Inuyasha in a lot of different looks but never a cowboy look, sounds kinda hot.  Good going.  I am so into your story it's well written and very unique  it seems like your enjoying writing.  I can tell your story has a certain energy to it!  Awesome I can't wait for more!  Till then write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Why, thank you, my dear. I'm glad that you took the time to leave such a wonderful review. I really do have a few surprises for the gang. Glad that you liked it so far.




Summary:

Continuing from InuYasha's Heart, part two is about Kagome leaving for the modern age, where she is brutally attacked. She returns to the Feudal era where through pride and stubbornness, InuYasha accuses her of betrayal. Hurt and bewildered, Kagome runs off only to be captured by Naraku. What will happen when the young hanyou learns the bitter truth? Will it be too late to save her?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Sango
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fantasy
Warnings: Language, Rape/Non-consensual
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 97859 Read Count: 1846

[Report This] Published: August 22, 2008 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: Destiny Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2008
Chapter number:
Title: Part Two - The Trust of InuYasha

I thought I may have reviewed before I couldn't find it.  Your story is intriging!  All I want is more!  I haven't read one like this.  It's excellent!  My favorate is the chapter when Inuyasha and Kikyo talked by the well.  Awesome, you addressed things that I always bring up when I speak of the couple.  I never thought they loved each other really.  I mean they so easliy believed the other betrayed the other.  Kikyo kept secrets from him and he just wanted someone near him to accept him in which she never did.  I'm glad Yash opened his eyes, it's to bad that it took Kagome getting hurt for him to really see.  It's so cool that you used a blind person to help the blind so to speak to see!  Excellent!  At first I was like why is he standing there wasting time talking to her?  Then I realized that if he and Kagome were going to patch things up and live as a happy couple this talk had to take place.  I haven't read a story that addressed these issues.  It was great to read!  I wonder what Yash will do when he learns that Kikyo knows where Kagome is?  Also, it Kagome pregnant?  I remember her being really sick it hasn't been mentioned since, not that she would notice any more being starved and torchered.  Your Sess is an ass. (hee-hee).  To have Yash so opened with himself even is refreshing, usually the fics I've read, he dosen't open his eyes until he has lost her to someone else.  Excellent!  I can't wait for more!  Update real soon. Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response:

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this story.  I have sort of left it to work on one of my other fics.  I, hopefully will get back to it soon though.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady



Metamorphosis by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]

Summary:
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"Sometimes in the winds of change we find our true direction." An unusual youkai attack transforms Kagome's very being. Can she come to terms with her new self, and can Inuyasha accept, perhaps even love, the new Kagome?


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 387448 Read Count: 42795

[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: December 02, 2010


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 31, 2008
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Introspectives

Awesome!!!  I love your story, it's different, I love the notes at the end.  You've mentioned things in your notes that  I have thought about myself, like Miroku being knocked on conscious so much.  That is irratating.  How Kagome sat Inu alot when they first met, of course that would have to come out, you did a great job with it.  I love the merging of Kagome with the demon, how her mother accepted it.  Her mom knows the danger it seems as long as she is well that is all that matters.  I love your Yash, how he is sharing his experiences with Kagome.  I mean before he couldn't really share them with her, she was human and truly couldn't undestand what he was going through.  I mean, we all have had a problem and tried to explain to someone how we feel, to have that someone unknowingly belittle it due to the fact they have never been through it before.  Excellent.  I just love how you are addressing such things in your story and your end notes.  The person who flamed you didn't know what they were talking about it, did they actually read your story before they flamed?  Well, there is always a couple, just don't take it to heart and don't stoop to their level, keep the confidence you have in your work and show them up.  I never flamed in my life, I've read some stories that were just plain awful, but still I didn't flame.  It's hurtful, disrespectful and just plain ignorant.  Anyone, brave enough to put them selves out there for everyone to read deserves respect.  There are ways to say things without being mean or hateful.  You handled it well.  I'm just loving your story and I can't wait for more because I'm hooked.  I'm not one for stories where Kagome is transformed into a demon, or band fics but yours is an exception.  I truly don't like band fics, there is one I've been checking out, but most of them are.... sorry, just my opinion, no offense to anyone who writes them.  Thanks for the great story I can't wait for more.  Update soon,  Write on!  Oh I love the chapter where Kagome has to get use to water again and she jumps naked into the tree, I thought of that dumb but cute poster of the cat hanging from a branch with a statement "Hang in There" LOL.  That was really cute!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response:

Wow, great comments.  Thank you kindly.  I agree with you about band fics, though I will eventually check out Roxotaku's "This Wasn't in the Job Description."  Don't know if that qualifies as a band fic, but oh well...  Anyway, I know it's been a while since my last post, but rest assured.  I fully intend to resume writing soon.  I just needed a short break, and I've had little time over the holiday to write.  I'm also toying with the idea of writing a Black Lagoon fanfic, but right now Metamorphosis is still my top priority. 





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Showdowns

Your story is getting better with each chapter!  I really liked this one the last one so far.  Kagome finally made up her mind, and she learns how her statement about being a filthy hanyou effected Inuyasha.  I was waiting for that to come out, perfect timing!  I'm glad the siblings were finally killed they were beginning to get on my nerves, they weren't very bright, it's a wonder they lasted this long. A turtle demon, great creation!  I like that family.  I felt sad for the others knowing they wished for thta kind of happiness someday.  Your story is excellent!  Fun to read, I check almost daily for updates.  Sorry I don't review every time I read it, sometimes I just don't have the time to.  It's usually late when I get on and check things out, I'm pretty tired, but not to tired to read one of your new chapters.  By the way I took your advice and started reading it isn't in the job description, it's pretty good.  Well update soon, write on.

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Don't worry about reviewing every chapter; I know all about not having time.  That's why it's been taking me longer to update lately.  I hope to get the next chapter out promptly.  Nobody seemed to like Takehiko and Sora, which kind of surprises me.  I guess I didn't make them as sympathetic as I hoped.  Or maybe that's why people don't like them...  If you're ever looking for more good fanfiction, the mediaminer version of this story includes a recommendation at the beginning of every chapter.  "Separation" too.  There are some hidden gems on there that I got lucky to stumble across.  Anyway, thanks again forthe comments. 




Summary:
Kagome is a shy, young woman with a troubled past. InuYasha is a hanyou, who also leads a troubled life. Kagome stumbles over InuYasha, lying unconscious in an alley, and through an act of kindness takes him home. What will be the results of her unselfishness?

The story InuYasha as well as its characters, belong to Rumiko Takehashi. The story, For the Love of a Child, belongs to me, Bobcat Lady. I receive no monies writing this fic, only reviews from my readers.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 280459 Read Count: 10058

[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: December 17, 2010


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Meeting.

I am sooooo loving your story!  I just finished reading up to where you left off, what is up with Inuyasha!?!  Why doesn't he just dump Kikyo as planned and go to Kagome.  Why is he always drunk when he goes to see her?  The deal with Houjo!  Someone needs to hunt him down and kill him now!  Was Kagome an abused child?  She's taking being beaten as if she was one.  I love your Miroku and Sango!  Is Shippo going to make an appearance?  Kagme reminds me of how I once was and still trying to over come.  Maybe being pregant will be her new found strength to protect her unborn baby.  Are her headache due to a past life surfacing?  I believe that Kagome is Yash's reincarnate priestess, not Kikyo.  I love your Tusake ( I know I spelled her name wrong), I like how in between the lines she makes fun of Kikyo and some times she didn't even notice. I know she dosen't like the woman, I hope she betrays her and helps out Kagome, that would be funny, and she still gets paid. Just rip her off!  I'm like tied up in knots in everything that's going on, even with Sango's furnature moving!  More please!  Your are excellent you ROCK!!!!  I'm checking daily for updates!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thank you for a most wonderful review.  Just keep reading and all your answer may be answered.  I can't understand why everyone's asking about the hanyou's drinking problem.  I mean, if you had a fiancee like KiKyo, wouldn't you want to stay drunk too?  I hope you'll continue liking my story.  Chat with you later!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 02, 2008
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Kagome's Nemesis

You're right anyone with Kikyo would do anything to dull the sever pain of just looking at her, but there isn't enough alcohol in the world to take that kind of pain away.

Kikyo is such a sick, demented, bitch!  Bitch is to good for her, she's dirt and crap on the bottom of some bums shoe.  Poor bum.  I hope Kagome tells Sango about what Kikyo said, so Sango can help Kagome clear some stuff up. I can see Miroku going to talk to Inuyasha about all of this.  That would be awesome!  On his wedding day he leaves her at the alter in front of the press and Kikyo did invite her the wedding,  this is getting good I can't wait to see where you take this, I'm forming to many conclusions.  I can't wait to see what happens and Hojou is gonna get his!  Him and Kikyo should hook up!  I can't wait for another up date Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: I did tell you, she had something up her sleeve, didn't I?  Great review.  Loved hearing from you.  Talk to you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 10, 2008
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Kagome...Betrayed!

Oh My DAMN!  I love Sango!  I knew she or Miroku would find the story fishy, they will help her get to the bottom of this and so will Inuyasha, why didn't he show up to her apartment when he was suspose to, ohh, yeah that dinner Kikyo had planned. What a mega jealous skank she is, why would she want to be with someone who dosen't want her?  Hojo would probably go for her. I never wanted to kick someone ass so badly before.  Maybe this is good for Kagome to get a back bone, I was so much like her at one time.  I hope she dosen't have to learn the hard way like I did.  I'm still a lot like her but with caution.  Kagome is not nieve (sp) she's just really nice and wants to see the best in people.  Sometimes like I learned some people have no best inside them and it's scary.  I hope Sango kickes Kikyo's ass fantastically hard!!  Great chapter, I felt everything your characters felt very well written!  Appaluse!  Write on! 

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks.  I was hoping you would see what I wanted.  Kagome does want to see good in everyone.  But KiKyo isn't finished yet.  Which you'll see in coming chapters.  Thanks for the great review.  Bobcat lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15, 2008
Chapter number: 17
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Close But Not Close Enough!

How come Yash couldn't follow her scent out the back door?  I'm a little dissappointed in Sango I though she would make him explain himself.  I'm getting anxious, I want him to find her and clear this up and both of them attack Kikyo.  Is Tusbacki(spelled her name wrong forgive me) is she gonna turn on Kikyo?  She seems the type just to see what happens.  I kinda liked her a little.  Is Sessy really on a business trip or is he out to get Kikyo?  He's all about honor and perserving the family name.  Is Yash really a rich boy just doing what he likes to do fixing cars?  Kagome should tell Kikyo off!  I don't want her to go through her pregnancy without the father, it's sad, been there.  I have so many  questions I'm gonna burst!  Update faster please!  No don't ruin the story it's really great!  Write on! 

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: First question: Just imagine thinking he's found Kagome and then realizing he hasn't?  He just wanted out of there before the lady started to scream.  Second question: You'll have to read to find out.  Third question:  You'll have to read to find out.  Fourth question:  Yes he's really rich and yes he loves fixing machines.  Thanks for the great review.  Love knowing my readers are pleased with my work.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 17, 2008
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Closest Still but Not Quite Close Enough!

I never felt so sorry for someone in my life!  Poor Yash!  Kikyo is just evil as hell and dumb as dirt.  She believes if Kagome is gone that he will return to her.  Do I know some girls like her.  It's sad.  Poor Kagome, her friends are good to her but too good.  Miroku is a smart reasonable man, looks like after a long nap he will start to put things together like he was doing at the club when Kikyo was talking.  Sango should run into her on the street and punch her in her perfect face and keep walking with a giant smile on her face.  Ah, maybe not, people like Kikyo the best revenge is humilation, public humilation from the person that they troubled and from the man she claims to love.  Which she dosen't love, it's all a game for Kikyo now, to be the winner, stupid woman.  OMG! I've never been so involved with a story before.  Your excellent!  Thanks!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks.  The best compliment for a writer I think is when the readers find themselves in the story as well.  I try to do just that.  I'm glad you're liking the story well enough.  I'm working on the next chapter at this time.  Hope you'll you like it as well.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Finally! A Happy Reunion?!

Finally I can breathe!  Geeze, I didn't even realize I was holding my breath!  Oh by the way I thought it was funny how Hojo cowared before Kikyo, I see his problem, he's dominated by women and hates it, he finds some one he can somewhat manipulate a bit to make him feel like a big man!  Am I right?  What's his wife like?  Well, I'm so glad that Inuyasha has found Kagome and they are finally on their way to straightening things out and they can stand together against Kikyo, all four of them. Sango deserves a shot at the skank.  Great chapter!  I can't wait for the next one.  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Yes, you're right, Destiny.  Houjo is dominated so he abuses Kagome so he can feel like a man.  Glad you liked the chapter though.  Hope you'll review again soon.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Country Loving!

I've been wondering about Kagome.  The way she is, someone or something made her the way she is, easily taking the blame for everything.  Something more like someone, she trusted, making her afraid of a lot of things even herself.  She reminds me a lot of myself, maybe that's another reason I'm attatched to your story, besides it's being a great piece of work.  I'm working on a lot of things, I think she should start talking to Inuyasha.  Is she hiding her Miko powers, thinking she may be a freak, well, she may have been raised to believe she's a freak. Most likely her family planted things in her head making her believe every thing bad happened was her fault and she was wasn't worth the time of day.  Okay, no more guessing!  Update so I can find out.  Once she talkes about it she can work on it and they get strong together and kick Kikyo's and Houjos asses, together.  Oh man it would be funny if the two brought eachother down unknowingly.  Houjo is a freak'n sadistic, utterly complete psycho! That man is gonna have to be killed, to be stopped. Excellent job with his character by the way, he even scared me!  It was like I was watching him standing outside of his car losing his already, half gone psychotic mind!  He was the shooter wasn't he?  What happened to the shooter, did he run, or she run when Inu showed up?  Talking about nut jobs, Kikyo's kind of psychosis is scarrier, it's silent and sneaky, she belives every bit of what she says.  Shivers!  I can't wait for more I check daily a couple of times a day sometimes for updates! Excellent!!!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks and as always, love your review.  It really picked me up.  You may just like the next chapter though.  I'm working on it now and will probably have it up before the new year.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Happy New Year!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: January 01, 2009
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Confrontation

What the hell is wrong with Inu?  Trusting her to keep him safe during his human night.  He 's better off tellling Kagome about it, she probably wont' care.  Now his is leaving Kagome vonerable to Kikyo and Houjo.  I know he's anxious and caught off guard, thinking he had more time, but this is just stupid of him, I thought he had more sence now.  Yeah, if Kikyo is going to be there he is gonna need a case of whiskey, to forget how stupid he was.  I hope Kagome dosen't have to pay for his ignorance.  I can't believe he's being so dumb, I hope he comes to his sences, he could have stayed with his brother, Sess doesn't seem to be a total ass when it comes to him anymore.  Of all the people he could have allowed to help him he choses Kikyo when he is trying to convince her that he dosen't love her.  I'm about to pull my hair out!  Great story, great chapter!  Keep it up!  EXCELLENT!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks for the great review.  KiKyo was counting on taking InuYasha off guard, Destiny.  She's not stupid where that's concerned.  He was watching the calendar pretty close and when he arrived to work, the calendar was the furthest thought from his mind.  We both know what was on his mind, don't we?  Hope you like the coming chapters.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: January 16, 2009
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Moonlight Lodge Part 3

Those two keep giving Kikyo new weapons to use against them with every little secret they keep from eachother.  They are beginning to flustrate me, but if the hotel spa thing comes up, I hope Miroku remembers a little piece of information that will help him.  Miroku knows that Inu owns the shop, Kikyo said that Yash had to call his boss to ask for the time off for "their anniversary plans".  That will help.  Kikyo needs some definate psych help.  I love Sango, if she were in this era she wouldn't take no crap, I think you pegged her character of how she would be.  Miroku as well, calm serene and logical.   Sango just needs to tell him everything since him and Yash are becomming close friends.  Excellent once again, I'm glad I finally was able to catch up. Until the next update, write on!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  I've been sort of reluctant to write anymore since I received a blow to my ego.  I guess that must happen to a lot of writers out there but I, unfortunately took what some said personally.  I've not been at this very long, and at my age have actually witnessed these problems so I wanted to relay them so to maybe help one out there who needs it. 

You, though, I'm happy to say, seem to be really reading the chapters and not just skimming them.  So your opinion is very valuable to me.  I've noticed my readers, although do ask questions about my characters, they don't ask about the subtile clues I've entered into my chapters in this story.  Sure, Kagome seems weak minded and all, but the question should be why is she like this, not just take it for granted she should be strong.  InuYasha, to some of my readers, seems like a wimp, (though to me he doesn't,) no one's really interested in why he's having such trouble with everything.  Sango and Miroku also have a secret in their past as well as Sesshomaru.  But recently, I've gotten complaints of how I seem to just drag out the story where all I'm trying to do is show to what lengths KiKyo and Houjo will go to keep InuYasha and Kagome apart.  And there is Tsubaki.  What is happening with her? And just who else is out there, waiting over the horizon. Let's not forget, InuYasha was a player, while living with KiKyo.  So could there possibly be another woman, KiKyo has done this too?

You're right, though, KiKyo and Houjo both need psych help.  KiKyo is rich, and has everything handed to her and doesn't like to give her toys away.  Doesn't anyone care how she came to know InuYasha, in the first place?  Is she indeed the priestess he's waited for, or did someone sort of conjure her up?  And why doesn't anyone ask about Houjo.  Sure he's a bastard, but is he crazy enough to kill Kagome as he threatened in a previous chapter?  I really want my readers to look at these issues.  They are important for the chapters to come.  In my opinion, every relationship has its up and downs.  Some problems are made by the couple, which both Kagome and InuYasha are guilty, but in this story, the problems go a lot deeper, and from more than just Houjo and KiKyo.  There is one, maybe more who may wish the fate for our star crossed lovers.  I hope this peaked your interest some and I won't lose you as a valuable reader.  Hope you'll review again soon.  Bobcat Lady 

 





Reviewer: Destiny Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2009
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Aftermath of a Most Chaotic Evening

Oh no your stuck with me till the end of this story and you write another.  I've though of all of that you mentioned in the response to my review.  I am really interested in Tus(sp), I don't think that woman really likes Kikyo.  I think Kikyo saw Inuyasha and wanted him, researched him and used the information to get what she wants.  Why she wants him is beyond me, besides his looks maybe.  Then again she may know he comes from money.  She's evil but she's not that stupid.  They are all gonna have to team up to conquer her, they need to open up to eachother first.  I know that Sango and Mirokus parents turned their back on them because of their marriage, which was sad, anyone can see how they balance eachother out.  Her harshness, strength and brashness, to his calm, logical wit and knowledge.  They balance each other in every way.  I was a lot like Kagome and it was due to how my family treated me and I ran around trying to please everyone so they wouldn't be mad at me and would think differently of me, I got use to taking everyones blame.  Things that take years to change if you ever.  I know she is strong underneathe all that, the right thing has to happen to push her.  I still believe that Kagome is his preistest(sp), now I really don't think Kikyo wants him, it's a game now, and she dosen't like to lose.  Hojo is just creepy, weak and a poser.  He must have some wicket women in his past and present.  I've seen his type, ususally that's the case.  I do have a question Kagome she dosen't have a job, so how does she pay the bills?  I know Yash helps now but before that, I've been meaning to ask that like chapters ago but it would slip my mind.  I have a lot of theories and questions about your story but it will take me all day to go through them.  I never skim a good story, if I feel the need to skim then why bother?  Your story goes deeper than what's written, that's one thing thats kept me totally intrested.  Your story isn't hollow it has substanance(sp), and your characters have depth and I don't want to miss it as it emerges.  It's beginning to one by one.  I held my breath when Kagome told Inuyasha to leave, I actually felt for him and I yelled at him to stop hiding from her and tell her every single thing right then and there.  I started to breathe again when she walked in with lunch.  What's the deal with Sessh?  It's like what ever it is, it's just beneth the surface, if you could just scratch it just a bit you'd get a peek at it.  Dosen't he believe his brother when it has to do with Kikyo?  I think he does, I think he's just messing with him for his amusement.  I hope he steps in and helps him out with Kikyo.  I hope he isn't involved in a bad with this.  I know he wouldn't let that woman near Rin. It's sweet how Yash protected her when Sess stated about going for Kikyo. I don't think Yash ever really loved her, since he messed around on her and she him they both accepted that behavior from eachother.  I noted that in probably the third or fourth chapter.  Misery loves company I guess.

I'm glad you didn't give up on this story, don't worry about people and their bad remarks, don't let them take away from you.  I've read a lot of stories and some reviews and realized alot of the bad reviews seem to be the same people, it's like they are on a mission to hurt someones feelings.  You are not dragging out your story, it's just not hollow, know what I mean?  I'll be here as long as you are, don't let anyone deprive me of my chapter fixes!  My pet peeve with fan fiction, is unfinished stories, good or bad, the author should be confident in their work and write because they enjoy it, you have to be like a horse in a race, put your blinders on and go for it. Also, when an author dumps a story they are dumping their lovely fans.  I know your not gonna leave it, I was a bit worried though, glad your okay.  Hang in there and keep the chapters coming, I'm addicted and I need my fix!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks for the great review.  You understand Kagome perfectly.  I couldn't have explained her character any better.  And you really seem to understand this story as well.  I'm glad.  I was beginning to think my writing was just a waste of time.  Thanks again and hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: February 16, 2009
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - A Saturday Night Out

Yea Kagome!  I'm glad a had a bit of time to catch up on the missed updats.  Great Chapters, I like this one this best. Kyoshi, let's say in school I had a lot of run in's with his type, wanna be fit in with everyone type.  Will he be back? Is he the hate crime type? Or just a run of the mill big mouth hater?  Hmmm, Kagome had to deal with an acholic parent.  I can imagine the things her mother called her and told her.  It looks like she's coming out of her shell, I hope she tells Inuyasha her secrets and maybe he will trust her enough to tell her his sectets, less amo for psycho Kikyo.  I read each chapter as if Hojou is lurking around every sentence ready to show his crazy sick psychotic self.  It's kinda fun, like those jump out of the closet monster movies.   You are doing great and each chapter better than the next.  I can tell you are very proud of this story.  You GO GIRL!  Thanks again for more great chapters!  Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: YAY, you're back!  So glad to hear from you again, Destiny.  You've been missed.  Oh, don't count Houjo or KiKyo out just yet.  There's still more to come.  Hope to hear from you later!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Chapter number: 32
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - InuYasha's Recipe for Love

Of course Kikyo has not given up yet.  She dosen't want to be embarrassed by her friends that Yasha dumped her for Kagome nor does she like to lose.  She's up to something awful and of course it will backfire because she can't just leave things a lone and get on with her life without ruining someones elses.  I know someone like her. Your betrayal of her anyway.  Great chapters.  I haven't reviewed in awhile sorry but I'm still reading and waiting for update!  Pretty good chapter.  Until next time hopefully it will be soon, Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: Thanks Destiny.  Love reading your reviews.  Hope you'll review again soon.  Bobcat Lady



Lover Untamed by KeiChanz Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]

Summary:

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Kagome and her boyfriend take a walk through an annual fair in their town and Kagome isn't exactly having the best time of her life. However, there is a new attraction this year at the Yukhanza Fair, one that would irrevocably change Kagome's life forever.


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38577 Read Count: 5799

[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: July 17, 2014


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: June 16, 2012
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Is this really complete?  If it is I feel left hanging. Would you write a part 2?

Much love

Destiny



Author's Response: No, this fiction is not complete...I don\'t really know what led you to believe that, but it will be updated again. I just don\'t know when.





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: July 01, 2012
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank goodness.  I missunderstood the status of your fic.  I will tell you this is AWESOME!  I have not read anything like it.  I believe you have captured Inu in his demon form perfectly!  I can not wait to read more!  Your fic is refreshing, it is great to finally read something so unique. I csn not wait for more. Until next time write on!

Much Love

Destiny



The Ties that Bind by moonandstar331 Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]

Summary:
Shippo is an orphan. Inuyasha is a wealthy, privileged business man with a lot of growing up to do. When their paths cross, both find their lives drastically changed. Together they discover the true significance of what it means to be a family.
Inu/Kag eventually.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61246 Read Count: 1497

[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2011


Reviewer: Destiny Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 07, 2010
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Fragile

This is awesome!  It is so refreshing to read something totally new!  I haven't read a fic with this plot or idea before.  I love your style of writing, your descriptions of things it's like you can picture it clearly in your mind as you read, the written emotion is excellent.  I love the way Inu was introduced into Shippous life by way of punishment!  I cracked up when he lunged across the conference table at that guy, cant' remember his name the first chap read it a few days back, but with every new chapter I always reread the chapter before first anyway, that was great!  What I don't get is why Inu didn't notice that the orphanage owner was dressed nicely and feels that he can offer his fathers company money when the orphanage is in such bad shape?  I know he noticed the mans dress and how bad the shape of the orphanage is but he didn't wonder how the owner could help his dad's company where is the money coming from?  I guess that will come later. Also, why didn't Inu question about why Shippou was locked in a basement?  I can't wait for updates! I check a couple times a day for them.  Your AWESOME!  I don't review much and I may not review every chapter but I plan on sticking with this story and I hope you do to.  I'm in love with it, I can't wait to watch Inu change and I can't wait till Kikyou messes up with him, I can't wait to see how he and Kagome meet, well they met once, that was kinda funny.  I'm addicted I want more so update real soon!  I do feel bad for Shippou.  I have to share what I think the scum orphanage owners are doing, they are stealing kids and selling them.  They in a way stole Shippou.  Am I close?  Maybe you shouldn't tell me I want to read it!  Thanks for such a unique point of view and fic can't wait for more.  Until next chapter Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: First of all: Thank thank thank you for the heart felt review! It warmed my heart to see someone put so much detail into a story review, and it makes me want to continue writing and hoefully keep you interested lol. In answer to some of your questions, the reason Inuyasha's father depends on the money from Ikazuchi Corp in order to keep its standing and status quo so to speak. The reason Heten and Naraku are dressed so finley is obviously because of the money they posess through the company and its shares. I purposley made the orphanage run down looking in order to depict the unfortunate lives of the children who live there. Of course Heten could choose to fix it up, but so far he doesn't want too. He has enough money and power to stash away and to keep up appearences with Mr. Takashi. As for his orphange, as long as no one gets suspicious and comes poking around, Heten has decided to keep it the way it is. As for Inu not questioning about Shippo that is mostly because he wanted to get the child out of that enviornment as soon as possible, and you know how he is: action first, ask questions later, he being the brash half demon we know and love. I am so,so glad you love this story, I honestly do too. You have made my day with your wonderful review. Stay tuned! Love,Moonandstar331




Summary:

When Houjo cancells their date, Kagome's best friend, InuYasha, steps in to take her out for her birthday. But there's something wrong with the way her boyfriend has been treating her lately.


Categories: Legends, Fairy Tales
Characters: Hojo, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jakoutsu, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Naraku, Onigumo, Rin, Sango, Sess-Mom, Sesshomaru
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Paranormal, Romance
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Bestiality, Blood/Gore, Domestic Violence, Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Male Dom/Female Dom, Pregnancy, Religious
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77409 Read Count: 8718

[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2012


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Incrediable story!  I recognized the Native American references and legend immediately and got excited.  Your story is awesome and incrediably unique!!! I love it!! Your version of the characters are awesome, I love the relationship between the brothers and their sence of family, I imagined if Inu and Sess grew up together with parents and were there for each other they would be close.  There is nothing bad I can say about your story it's great and beautifully written.  I love it when Inu handed Kagmome the heart of his catch and she took it and ate it, it showed that she fully accepts who Inu is there aren't many stories like that, I mean in most Kagome accepts Inu as he is but he still hides his baser instincts from her, in your story he does not he explains them to her as he goes along and loving makes sure she understands.  There is nothing more I can say but please update this story it's to good to be left floating amoung the abandon fics.  I hope all is well and nothing to bad is keeping you away from this story.  Until then Write on!  I hope to be reading a new chapter soon!!! Can't wait your awesome!!
Much Love

 Destiny





Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi again, disreguard the comment about your updating I misread the date of your last update!  Whew! Wipe sweat!  You have an excellent work in progress!! Until next time write on!

Much love Destiny

 




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What would you change if you had a second chance? Inuyasha makes a wish on the Shikon jewel when Kagome is killed during a battle against Naraku. When he wakes up pinned to Goshinboku he realizes he may have been given a chance to set things right. Will he be able to protect Kagome and reunite his friends, or has he lost them forever?
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Divergence, Drama
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52768 Read Count: 7943

[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome!  I ususlly don't review a fic till the third chapter to give the story a chance, but this is such a breath of fresh air or reading. I haven't read anything this different in a long while. I was dissappointed when I got to the end of the chapter that it was over and I have to wait to read more.  I feel so sorry for Inuyasha, but it's like I tell my friends live your life everyday as if it is your last.  Go to bed with no grudges, thoughts of revenge or regrets.  Make your apologies and mean them you never know what life will bring you.  I have a terminal desease and that is how I live my life every day!  I do feel bad for him and I am glad he's getting another chance.  I just can't wait to see how this Kagome changes, their journey is altered and they will face different problems and troubles that may or may not make her the same as he remembers as well as the others they meet.  Did that make sense?  Anyway, your fic is pretty deep I really hope to read more really soon!  I can feel what Inuyasha is feeling and Kagome, you got their emotions across or feelings in your writing.  Awesome!  I'm waiting for more, Write on!

Much Love

Destiny



Author's Response: I agree, it's very important to live without regrets. Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.




Summary:

Semi-AU. InuYasha lives rather happily at the Western Palace with his parents and siblings. But when he finds a lovely young neko hanyou, he begins to wonder if cats and dogs can get along.


Categories: Legends
Characters: Ah-Uhn, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Myouga, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Hentai, Paranormal, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Abuse, BDSM, Bestiality, Blood/Gore, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, Mild Sexual Situations, Punishment, Slavery
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20030 Read Count: 1049

[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: April 22, 2011


Reviewer: Destiny Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

INCREDIABLE! AWESOME! EXCELLENT! BEAUTIFUL! I can't wait for more! Kagome has a huge story to tell!  Got tons of questions that I can't wait to find answers for!!!! Can't wait for more!!  I usually don't review until the fifth chapter of a story to give it a fair chance but damn this is good and I had to tell you, love little Suteki!  I can't wait to learn more about this family and Kagome her past seems very interesting her father seemed like he held them prisioner or I don't know can't wait to find out.  I'm beginning to wonder if her mom is really dead or out there somewhere.  I can't wait to learn more I'm addicted now!!!  Your an awesome writer!!! Until next time Write on!

Much love Destiny