Reviewer: InusBabyBoo44 Signed
June 14, 2011
Chapter 8: Guts
I have to say, when you first posted this story I avoided thinking about how it was probably just another story about how Kagome had to tell her friends about the real deal with Inuyasha. When you posted chapter 7 on FF.net, I saw your name next to it and was like, "KB MADE THIS STORY?!!" I just HAD to read it! Loved Metamorphosis, so I knew this wasn't gonna be one of those type stories!
So with this chapter, Yamazaki should have known Kagome wasn't gonna give it up to him. He should have seen it coming, but he's just a simple minded pervert! That's what he gets! I like stories when Kagome isn't a wimpy baby who just sits around crying, because sometimes Kagome knows when things NEED to be done.
Can't wait until you update. I've day dreaming about Kagome having to kill Yoshida in self-defense, but when know she wouldn't be able to kill...a human any way...but it is self-defense sooooo...
So glad you're not rushing this. As much as I REALLY want Inuyasha to bust out of there, it wouldn't make much of a story if it was to rush...although I just want Kags and Inu together again.
What are Miroku and Sango doing and how long have Inu & Kags been locked away?
So ends my terrible long review. A first, I believe.
That's okay; I don't mind long reviews. I completely agree with you about Kagome. I think self-defense (or defense of another) is the only way Kagome could possibly bring herself to kill a human. But you're right; that would be extremely difficult for her.
Hm, it's been awhile since we saw Miroku and Sango, hasn't it? Maybe I'll start next chapter with a little "update" scene for them. I do want to keep them at least somewhat involved in the story, though as you've probably guessed they will be only minor characters in this one.