Penname: Selina MacCloveror [Contact]
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So... yeah. It's been a while. A long while. A few years long while. 

If it's any consolation, I'm currently rewriting "Of Strings and Kevlar." (Does anybody need CPR?) So no, I haven't given up on it, and yes I will finish it, but until I do, I won't be posting any chapters. Because of this and my hectic schedule (toddlers take up a lot of time/energy/will to live), don't expect anything from that story anytime soon, but it is coming. At a snail's pace, but it is coming. UPDATE: I've begun reposting 'Of Strings and Kevlar' and plan to update weekly. 

For what it's worth, I sincerely apologize for rooting myself up and disappearing on everyone. I'm still alive and well. 

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Metamorphosis by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]

Summary:
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"Sometimes in the winds of change we find our true direction." An unusual youkai attack transforms Kagome's very being. Can she come to terms with her new self, and can Inuyasha accept, perhaps even love, the new Kagome?


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 387448 Read Count: 42380

[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2010


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010
Chapter number: 51
Title: Chapter 51: Tying Up Loose Ends

I'm eager to see what InuYasha's birthday gift to Kagome might be.  I'll admit I haven't a clue, but I'm sure it will be awesome given all the thought he's put into it (and the nods of approval from two credible sources).  The marriage proposal ought to be interesting as well.  I can only imagine InuYasha getting through something like that without a few well-placed blushes. 

Kagome dropping out of school was a bit of a surprise, but the arguments make sense, especially if she really is having just too hard of a time keeping up.  And equations have practical use in real life, mister - just so you know.  I use basic algebra pretty often, and that's NOT just in my career.  ;)

Aaaand it looks like my prediction was spot-on.  Making up for lost time is definitely a good thing.  The baseball analogy was delightfully corny, and it made me laugh.  

Great chapter - I laughed, I cried, I got a little hot 'n' bothered...well, I didn't really cry, but I needed something else to throw in there.  Can't wait to see the festivities go down.  ^_^



Author's Response:

Hehe, I was wondering what there was in this chapter to cry about.  But you're right; two things a list does not make! 

A little corniness here and there is amusing, right?  I debated with myself for awhile then said 'eh, what the hell.'  I can't believe I haven't seen more stories where Kagome drops out.  Here in the States, dropping out of school isn't so much a question of family honor as it is limiting your job and income opportunities.  Do Japanese families really put that much importance into graduating high school?  *shrugs* 

I'm loving the fact that I have next chapter mostly planned out already.  But I'm going on vacation for a week, so it might take a little longer than this one did.  Not too long, I hope.  It's exciting to be heading toward the end of this monster that I love so much! 





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2010
Chapter number: 52
Title: Chapter 52: A Birthday to Remember

Very nice, and I did notice you cut back on the wordiness.  (That's something I'm currently working on, too, and it's not easy!)  I was totally wrong on the birthday present, by the way; I don't think I ever would have thought of that!

The catnip joke was cute, and the side effects were funny.  Those two just make me want to pinch their cheeks sometimes, LOL.

I was about to be SOOOO mad at you about the proposal.  But I'm glad they worked it out and you didn't save it for the next chapter, because >.> that would have been grounds for hair-pulling.  

Great chapter!  :D



Author's Response:

Oh, come now, would I do that?  *blinks innocently*

Ok, so maybe I would do it, but I didn't even consider leaving a cliffie this time.  I didn't think this marriage argument was something that could burst into a full-on angst-fest.  This time, it really was just a misunderstanding.  And I hope it was your hair you were intent on pulling.  :)

Actually, it was pretty easy for me to cut back on my wordiness.  My academic writing style is naturally concise, so I guess I was channelling that part of me.  That's why I was worried about it.  Was I being too short?  I didn't think so, but I didn't want the chapter to seem choppy either.  The upcoming chapters should be more of the same, with only the really important parts given great detail.  What is it about seeing the finish line that makes you want to run faster? 




Summary:
Kagome is a shy, young woman with a troubled past. InuYasha is a hanyou, who also leads a troubled life. Kagome stumbles over InuYasha, lying unconscious in an alley, and through an act of kindness takes him home. What will be the results of her unselfishness?

The story InuYasha as well as its characters, belong to Rumiko Takehashi. The story, For the Love of a Child, belongs to me, Bobcat Lady. I receive no monies writing this fic, only reviews from my readers.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 280433 Read Count: 10058

[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: December 18, 2010


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Meeting.

Very touching; Kagome's got a big heart, as always!  What's wrong with Souta's heart?  :(  And ugh, that Houjo!  I wanted to slam his face down onto the table and break his nose!  lol  Great work so far - looking forward to the next chapter!  :)



Author's Response: I am currently rewriting this story because of loss of data. It couldn\'t be retrieved. So I hope this version will meet with your approval. You\'re answers will be in coming chapters. Hope you\'ll like them well enough to leave a review. Be chatting with you later! Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A Loving Child's Strange Request

Awww...I honestly didn't see that coming!  I thought, "Yeah, Souta has some sort of heart ailment, but he'll be alright...."  So sad!  I love how he made InuYasha make that promise, though.  Apparently he knew what was about to happen and wanted to make sure Kagome would be taken care of.  And InuYasha seems like a nice enough guy so far, other than having "rough sex" with his "friend...."  Ugh...I hate Kikyou!  lol 

Anyway, great chapter.  Can't wait to see how InuYasha helps - I assume he still won't be at her apartment when she eventually returns, but he does know where she lives now....



Author's Response: Yeah, Kagome loved Souta. Souta loved Kagome. Now she is left without her son, so what will happen? I\'ll leave that up to you to imagine. Glad you\'re liking my story. As I said this story is being rewritten for two reasons. One, lost the data, notes to the story. Two so everyone will know that I am truly the author of this story. Hope you\'ll review again. Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Painful Goodbye

Awww...so sweet.  I'm glad he's there for her like he said he would be.  And I'm SO glad he was there when Houjo decided to show up and make a scene.  Who knows what would have happened if InuYasha wasn't there! 

"Especially at breakfast!"  LOL - that was kinda cute.  :)  



Author's Response: Well InuYasha did promise Souta he would look out for Kagome. Glad you liked the chapter. Hope you\'ll like the next one as well and review. Chat with you later! Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - A Night on the Town - Pt. 1

Yay!  I love the two new chapters.  But is Kikyo back in town now?  In spite of the fact that she's never come to a performance, I keep expecting her to walk into the bar and jack the fun!  LOL  I guess Kagome doesn't like Inu drinking...that doesn't surprise me.  He does seem to be a big fan of the sauce, though...I predict problems arising from that.  Keep up the great work - looking forward to another update!  :)

Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm trying to rewrite this story from memory so it may not seem the same as before.  Yes, InuYasha is a great fan of the sauce and Kagome does have her reasons for not liking it.  Hope you like the next chapter as well though.  Chat with you later!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Night on the Town Pt. 2

Oh, no!  Is that Houjo?  Where is that hanyou when he's needed?  Oh, that's right...he's home screwing his girlfriend (fiance?).  GRRR!!!  Great update - can't wait for the next!  :)

Author's Response: Happy to know you like the chapter.  Wording on the next one so it shouldn't be too long to get it up.  Please keep reading and reviewing.  Hope you hear from you later!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Clash! InuYasha vs. Sango, the Slave Driver

Wow - two chapters in one day!  Awesome!  :) 

I like that you told Miroku/Sango's story and how they met Kagome.  It's always nice to get background on characters; it makes for better development.  Wow - they really had it rough!  I wouldn't have imagined it would have been that bad for them.  Their families are assholes!  lol  I like that Inu wanted to know about it, but I'm wondering if he asked because he was just curious or if he is showing his protectiveness over Kagome?  

Wow, Kikyo...what a bitch!  Although it doesn't surprise me that she doesn't trust InuYasha...isn't she cheating on him, too?  Or at least he thinks she is...I think I remember reading that in one of the earlier chapters.  I'll have to go back and check.  But yeah, she's a hoe.  lol  I hope she's not planning on using Houjo in some way to get to Kagome!  Or Souta??!!  Man, if she does, I think I'm going to have to suggest she get a massive beatdown from whomever is necessary, whether it be Kagome or Sango or even InuYasha himself.  Well...maybe not him, but you see what I mean.  

I love the fight you portrayed between Inu and Sango, but man, they were really going at it!  That was pretty heavy.  "Sango the Slave Driver"...I love it!  lol  She's crackin' that whip!  

Oh, and is it just me, or does Kagome seem to be settling into the idea of having a romantic relationship with InuYasha despite his current involvement with the bitch uptown?  That doesn't seem like her...then again, who can resist the loveable hanyou?  :)



Author's Response: I really love this review.  You ask a lot of questions telling me you're really interested in the story.  I hope my next chapter will cure some of that curiousity though.  Hope you revew again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2008
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - An Afternoon of Sorrow and Delight!

This was so sweet.  InuYasha was so gentle and loving to her, especially when he was teaching her how to please him (*ahem*, when she used her teeth...awkward!!!).  And grrrr....Houjo seriously needs to die.  Correction: Houjo needs to get raped by a 300-lb linebacker, strung up by his cajones, then die.  I never thought I'd read a story in which I hated him so much, but this one takes the cake.  I'm assuming he'll get his in the end....

Great chapter, as always!  I hope you update soon - I can't believe Kagome wouldn't even listen to InuYasha!  I can't wait to see what he says to her, and how she takes it.  And HELLO...she needs to get up out of that apartment!  Though I know she can't afford to move....  Update soon!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the great review.  Hopefully things will become clearer to you in later chapters.  But I have to say you really make me happy with you wonderful reviews.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2008
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 -Surprises for InuYasha

“Don’t you want to smell pretty, InuYasha?”  XD  Too funny!  And the oral in the shower...very nice.  Good for Kagome; she finished her first BJ.  That's a huge stepping stone!  lol

Okay, time to get serious.  Kikyou has officially been added to the "Needs to Die" list.  I know she's going to ruin this whole thing InuYasha has planned with Kagome.  And on that note, why didn't he talk to Kagome that night like he said he was going to?  What - dude gets a blow job and loses his mind?  ...Actually, that isn't too far from the truth....

And Kagome was pretty hypocritical.  She chastises him for not wanting to go home to Kikyou, saying he shouldn't "do that to her."  All this after she blew him in the shower.  WTF??  I know she's confused, but damn!  Send mixed signals much??

I loved the quick update - here's hoping for another one!  :)



Author's Response: Well, if you'll remember, Kagome didn't finish with the bj the first time, thinking she didn't do it right.  So she tries again in the shower.  And yes, she is quite confused.  Especially with a nut case like Houjo hounding her.  Thanks for the great update.  Loved hearing from you.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: November 24, 2008
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kagome's Unexpected, Joyful Surprise

Wow - this is getting kind of crazy.  I would think Kagome would be slightly worried about having a baby while she's single, but I guess with everything she's been through with Souta's death, it would make her happy.  And I bet Houjo's going to be pissed when he finds out, especially since he'll probably know who knocked her up.  Boy, I am NOT looking forward to when he confronts her about that....

What the hell is Kikyou doing to take up so much of InuYasha's time?  Is he planning the wedding himself or something?!  What a bitch!  And man, when he told Kagome he had "plans" for that night, and I seriously wanted to slap the sh*t out of him.  Ugh!  And lay off the sauce, dude!  

Bah - enough ranting.  Great update, ma'am!  I can't wait to see what happens when InuYasha makes it over to Kagome's apartment...he'll actually make it this time, right?  



Author's Response: Good question.  Will he?  And Kagome is just overjoyed to be pregnant.  So read and find out what happens next.  Great Review, by the way.  Yours always puts a big smile on my face.  I put the chapters up so quickly just so I can read your reviews of them.  Am currently working on the next chapter so it might be up by Wednesday.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady.





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2008
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Demons, Mates, and Fiancee's

Grrrr...Kikyo!  I could seriously rip her to shreds! 

I hope InuYasha meets up with Kagome in the next chapter.  And I'm just about sick of his excuses.... He hasn't had the chance to tell Kikyo?!  WTH???!!!  He is acting LAME.  Seriously.  

Something tells me Houjo is going to be making an appearance soon...I just hope Inu is there when it happens, and not out with Kikyo, or at work...or drunk.  Sheesh!  



Author's Response: InuYasha just doesn't want to hurt KiKyo's feelings, is all.  Glad to have heard from you again.  As always your review made me smile.  Thanks.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Kagome's Nemesis

What an awful chapter...not the writing, but just what happened.  I can honestly say that I was not happy to read it at any point after Kikyo showed up.  (I'm not flaming you...you know what I mean.)  I'm heartbroken, and a little disappointed in Kagome; her faith is so warped, but then again, she's been pushing Inu away since they had sex anyway.  And why the hell didn't he show up this time?  Seriously!!  I have to admit, it's getting a little frustrating when it seems like he's going to go to Kagome, then the next chapter starts and it's a few days or weeks later....  I'm seeing a lot of heartache in the next chapter because of the damage Kikyo has done.  Come on, Lady...it's the holiday season!  Don't do this to us!  lol 

Author's Response: Sorry sweetie, but KiKyo will do anything, and I mean anything to keep her Inu.  Especially if it means keeping away from Kagome.  I'm hoping as the story progresses, you'll understand more about the young woman and hanyou.  Thanks for the great review!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2008
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Kagome...Betrayed!

Oh. My.

Thank goodness InuYasha finally built up enough cajones to tell Kikyo he was leaving.  And that bitch had the nerve to tell him - repeatedly - that they were still getting married and were a "happy couple."  WTH????  Is she demented or what??!!  Seriously, her brain is FRIED!!  

Ugh, Kagome.  Believing that bitch.  

Please, Inu - get to her on time!  It really shouldn't be hard for him to find her, even if she's in a different apartment, because all she did was switch with Miroku and Sango.  He knew where they lived, right?  So don't be a dumbass, InuYasha, like you've basically been throughout much of this story!  Go get her!!!  GOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!  

...Whew!  I'm so excited but still anxious!  Sorry about that!  *wipes brow*  Okay, Lady - awesome update!  I was almost in tears in the beginning, but then I was hoping Sango would be able to convince Kagome's she's loco, but...I guess not.  But I guess we'll see what happens in the next chapter!!  :)



Author's Response: Yep it should be quite interesting.  Thanks for the wonderful review.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2008
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - A Hanyou's Search Begins

I find this a little odd...you would think that InuYasha would be able to smell Kagome just down the hall.  But I guess maybe he was just so upset he didn't notice...?  Hmmm.  Well, what is he going to do now?  Fly to America and start banging on doors?  Knowing his tenacity, he just might.  XD  I was hoping Kagome would pop her head out of her door at some point when he was talking to Kaede, but then again, she's probably asleep.  Gah!  What now?  I have to know!  Please, update soon!  :)

BTW, Miroku and his antics...too funny!  XD  Sheesh, he just can't take a hint, can he?  LMAO



Author's Response: Well he did just learn the woman of his dreams has moved away, is out of his reach.  Also, she's the mother of his child.  So who wouldn't be upset?  Also Kagome is asleep.  Remember she was wanting to rest up for the next day.  So glad to have gotten your review.  Hope you like the next chapter as well.  InuYasha is going to be having it rough for while, now.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: December 16, 2008
Chapter number: 17
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Close But Not Close Enough!

Poor InuYasha.  He really is heartbroken and taking it out on Kagome; he doesn't mean it like that.  I hope he finds her soon! 

Author's Response: Yeah, he's hurting right now.  So he shows Sango the tough act so she would know it.  Thanks for the review though.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2008
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Closer But Not Close Enough!

Damn, Miroku!  Let the bitch get what's coming to her!  Personally, I would have let Sango wail on her, but then again, Miroku is an all-around good guy.  That and he probably doesn't want to bail his wife out of jail.  XD  Ugh, Lady, this is getting super frustrating.  All this angst!  I can't take it!!!  Please update soon!!

Author's Response: As soon as I finish this chapter, I'll post it.  You need to remember though, the Demon's Encounter services both Demons and Humans.  Just imaging what would happen if a fight should break out?  And Kagome is there as well.  So it was best Sango didn't start a fight, if only to keep InuYasha from knowing the mother of his child is there.  Thanks for the great review.  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: December 17, 2008
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Closest Still but Not Quite Close Enough!

I don't understand why InuYasha hasn't clarified that he and Kikyo aren't together anymore.  When he's sitting outside their apartment, he ponders why they don't realize he's best suited to protect Kagome...duh!  Maybe it's because they think you're still marrying Kikyo!  How dense can he get?? 

Author's Response: InuYasha has an unsual sense of pride.  He just doesn't give a damn what anyone thinks he will or will not do.  But when it comes to Kagome, his fair maiden?  There's where his pride is just about non existant.  And didn't he tell KiKyo he wasn't interested, in marrying her at the club?  That alone must say something for the poor guy.  So glad to have heard from you again.  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: January 14, 2009
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Moonlight Lodge Part 3

I understand that this is a long story, but I think what some people may be getting frustrated with is the fact that nothing seems to be progressing.  It seems to be the same problems over and over again, with nobody learning anything about themselves or each other, and maybe that's what's giving the "dragging out" feeling.  Your plot is very good, but the actual storyline is what seems to be in need of some tweaking. 

I don't mean to sound negative at all, and I'm certainly not flaming you.  But I will admit that my interest in this story dropped somewhat around chapter 19, mainly because of what I said above.  I am, by no means, a perfect writer - we all have our weaknesses (one of mine is characterization), and you certainly don't have to take my advice.  I'm just trying to give some honest feedback, because that is really what helps writers the most.  

Good luck - Selina



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your honesty, Selina.  Bobcat Lady




Summary:
Written for the Fall InuErotica porn party Quickie Challenge, "Carried Away," theme. It is an AU setting. A bored and horny InuYasha calls his secretary and girlfriend into the office for a little "job" he has in mind for her....
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Hentai
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 816 Read Count: 491

[Report This] Published: November 06, 2008 Updated: November 06, 2008


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A Little Under the Desk Work

WHOOPS!!!  LOL - that was awesome.  You love giving those two a hard time, don't you?  :)

Author's Response: LOL! My muse Lyris loves to do things like this - and she is my dominant muse! (Yeah, I am up to 4 muses, but Lyris is my muse of hentai and comedy, and writes most of my stories with me...). And thanks - for all the lovely reviews you leave here and on AFF.net, I really appreciate it!



No Different by L0VER Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

Sango took a deep breathe to calm herself, tears clogging her throat "You know what you are? Huh? A pathetic little boy who’s stuck in the past."

Maybe love can't conquer all. Wounds heal but there are scars.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16057 Read Count: 10468

[Report This] Published: November 09, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Mystery

YAYY!!  This story is great...can't wait for a fantabulous update!  (From ch. 9, that is!!  *wink wink*)

Author's Response: LOL! OMG. You got me all excited... I was like ... "wow, it just got up and i've already got an review" but it's just you.......... AHAH i'm just kidding :) Anyway... I don't know .. I have a feeling my story isn't gonna do that good on this site .. D: I might even take it off after a few days .. if there's no response... LOL! I know, i'm horrible! You mean chapter 10 right? ;P





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Crash and Burn

I wish you'd stop beating yourself down!  You are doing an awesome job with this story.  And yes, I did mean chapter ten!  WHOOPS!!  :)  Come on, girl - you're better than you think. 




Summary:
Kagome has been itching for Inuyasha but he's holding out on her. So she finds something else to get his attention.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1074 Read Count: 653

[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2008


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Very nice.  But the thought of using the sword sheath...ouch!  I don't care how waxed up it was...that's gotta hurt a little....

Author's Response: no penetration! that would be a little too much. plus all the places that sheath has gone, ew. i don't think it would ever be clean!



SLAVE by Inu Hanyou Nikkie Rated: Salacious [Reviews - 2]

Summary:

He thought himself completely above others. Better. They proved him wrong.



Categories: Fables

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP
Warnings: BDSM, Explicit Sex, Homosexual/Gay Sex, Inu-cest, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1592 Read Count: 555

[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2008


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: SLAVE

I'm normally not into yaoi at all, but I liked this one because Inu finished with Kagome, not with Sess.  Made it better for me that way.  :)  Very hot - I'd be interested in reading more if you do end up continuing. 

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a bit to write but I was only happy when Kagome was domming her hanyou and he goes to her for his completion. I think I expressed how deep he loves her by catering to her whims (again within reason)- because he knows she\'ll be completely wanting him after it. Plus this was also about InuYasha and Kagome both \'putting Sesshoumaru in his place\'.




Summary:
The official posting site of the "Let Forever Begin" challenge.
Categories: Fables
Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Divergence, Drama, Fantasy, Fluff, Hentai, Horror, Oneshot, Parody, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14294 Read Count: 3032

[Report This] Published: November 15, 2008 Updated: December 17, 2008


Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: New Lives

Very touching.  You seemed to capture InuYasha's emotions as a new father perfectly, including the moments leading up to becoming a father.  Nicely done.