Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed
April 14, 2009
Chapter 49: Declarations of Intent Part 2
OMG. OMG. You.... OMG.
Once again, my excitement at realizing this story was updated has reached the ridiculous level. For real. This my absolute, all-time favorite fic; no lie. Words cannot express.
I was FLOORED when Sesshomaru showed up at Rin's home, and my jaw hit the floor when Kenren came out and recognized him. O.O I honestly wasn't sure the dude had it in him, but I was happy to be wrong. *slaps Sesshy on the back* Better late than never, Fluffy!
The scene with Kagome and her dad was heart-wrenching; it was serious to keep myself from finding somebody to punch to take my anger for him out on! But hmmm...I'm wondering if his faltering anger will falter enough to make any headway in their relationship? Perhaps take some of that nasty shit back? At least keep the funds flowing? Somethin'???
And 'Jiro - I love him, man! And I love your Miroku SO much; sarcasm, humor, and just enough intelligence to make the first two seem unnatural when it comes out. I absolutely love him. He certainly put Kagejiro in his place, didn't he? >.> I gotta admit, I was a little worried for the boy for a minute....
Have I said yet how excited I was that this story was updated?
Great, awesome work, girl! And I'm sorry you're sick. :( That stuff has been going around it seems. Keep taking the Taisho meds, and feel better! Author's Response:
LOL, glad you enjoyed it? LOL. Thank you!!! That's awesome that you love the fic, it's my goal. as for Sesshiles, yeah, he is learning how to be a man.
Kagome's father is a scummer. It didn't seem to come across properly early on so i thought i would torment her to get the point across a bit clearer. No, sorry deary, but her father is a dirtbag. he will never recant. you probably won't see him again, honestly.
As for Jiro and Miro, i love them both. at least Miroku is modeled after a person i know (and i swear they are one in the same) and Jiro is partially my boyfriend's creation (he just can't write it). It's fun though. a lot of interesting situations come up through them and it's just a blast to write. i just don't want jiro to overshadow any other character.
Thanks!!!! i will. hopefully it wn't be a huge wait for the next chapter but there are no promises.