Reviewer: inulove Signed
July 11, 2007
Chapter 3: Mango Goo
WOW this is amazing!!! You know what's the best thing about your tale... it's not the sexy and sooo adorable way inuyasha point of view of the things... it's not the roller coaster and happy endings to each chapter... i mean this story is so well structured...
What I really apreciate and love abaout your story is that you give us a happy ending to our favorite couple in every chapter and you show us how they grow and mature,not making them to OCC or whatever... Inuyasha is the tender, romantic type of man that just won't show it, so he keep his rude attitue and adores his loved ones with all his migth, he just is more open to himself and emrace what he feels... on the other hand, Kagome is the same loving but some of inuyasha's maners has get into he... I don't know if I explain myself, but you did an excellent job capturing their personalities and puting them in perspective, what would hey do and feel ... Please continue with this work it's perfect in every ways possible. You're the best!!!
Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head ^^
I tried to write InuYasha in a way that made him older and more accepting of his feelings, but still outwardly the same old Inu we all know and love =p
I also try to give Kagome some spark, but it\'s tough when the main focus is on InuYasha...I hope when I concentrate on her, it doesn\'t seem half-assed to you readers XD.
Thanks for the review