Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
July 24, 2010
Chapter 5: Kindness
Okay, the Pikachu part (and InuYasha's line to go along with it) was HILARIOUS! I cracked up like you would not believe.
Pouring water on her first was just plain mean on IY's part, but I have a feeling she and the new guy might be in for a lot worse if she follows through on meeting him. Poor guy. He seems nice (so far...) but thinking back on InuYasha's warnings about how boyfriends get taken on a ride...I don't know. I'm kind of scared for him, at least until we find out more. I wonder if he'll be even worse than InuYasha or someone who will try to help Kagome (can't see that being easy with IY standing in his way).
I've gotta admit that now I'm shamelessly hooked on this. The first few chapters (though I did read the warnings) made me a little uncomfy, but keeping in mind that this is fiction and I usually really like your stories, I read on and I'm glad I did. I'm excited to see what you have in store for Kagome and the Devil (aka. Yash). There needs to be more villain-y Yasha's in this fandom, and though this one is borderline too dark for me, I'm really eager to see how this turns out! Write on, and don't let 'em tell you otherwise ;)
~Amber Author's Response: XDDD I had an OBSCENE amount of fun with that one. Not even kidding. I'm like, okay, WHO could I possibly make Kagome dress up as that would be both humiliating AND add a little lighthearted humor to the story? PIKACHU!!!! XD I'm glad you liked it so much! (And of COURSE, InuYasha had to say the fabled line!!!!) I must have stared at the computer screen for a good minute like, "Wow, did I really just type that?" Loz!!! And the water part I actually got from personal experience. Like, when I used to act up (and I mean like a henious little brat) my mom--who didn't play that mess--wouldn't get me then. No, she'd wait for days when my guard was down and then get me while I was in the tub. DEFINITELY got the point across and it hurt like HELL. And thank you so much for your honestly. Really, love, I so appreciate it. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the storu very much! Thank you, thank you, and THANK you!!!!