Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
November 09, 2008
Chapter 9: Crash and Burn
They are NOT sucky, lol! As for choppy...I kind of like the timing you've got going on. Stuff doesn't go on forever but it also doesn't happen too quickly. And woah! I did NOT expect what happened to Kagome to happen...
Though I probably should have. Was it intentional for this girl to have such bad luck with cars? The whole thing with InuYasha traces back to him breaking the windshield on her limo. Her parents die in a car crash and she gets put into a coma. She meets Bankotsu after almost getting hit by a car and...then she DOES get hit by a car, landing herself in another coma.
Either the fates hate her or the Gods love her. I'm surprised she hasn't developed (another) complex, or a phobia of cars.
Hmmm....so Yash is feeling guilty? (A little?) Great. But Kagome, even though I kind of favor her in this fic, should be eating some crow, too. I've yet to see or hear a "Sorry I'm the reason your mother died even if I can't remember it." I mean...shes kind of paying up since her life sucks (what with no parents and not being able to pay tuition), but still...
They both have a lot of growing up to do. And waking up, in Kagome's case...
Can't wait till the next update, but for now...
I should probably get started on that homework -__-
I enjoyed reading this! Update soon!