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Summary:

When the men are tortured, the women raped, and the children slaughtered, how is hope to linger in the hearts of the good?
This eclipse of despair leaves a crescent of light shining upon the broken, and one chance to escape the eternal darkness. Inu/Kag, Mir/San, Sess/Kagura

*Warning: Sexual content, Implied Rape, Religous influences, and EXTREME Violence.
Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Fantasy, Hentai, Romance, Thriller
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35274 Read Count: 1531

[Report This] Published: July 18, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 01, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: A Vague Reality

Wow...this story is really good. If you really do publish it as an original I want all the info. I would so buy this ;) ~Amber

Author's Response:

Gladly  :)

In fact I just got a Livejournal account so check me out there if you've got one, it'll have all the info... eventually. lol

~EoE





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 07, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Fear Thy Fate, Fear Thy Past

I don't know...to me this flows pretty smoothly. A lot of information in this chapter, too. A war between cats and dogs (or..creatures similar)? Does this mean we'll be running across the panther devas soon? As for InuYasha. Silver eyes? Very cool. I love the feel of this story. It's hard to guess what'll happen next and even though a lot has happened(Kagome graduating, Shawn, the hospital, meeting Kaede, etc.) everything slowly begins to piece together. It's not like one chapter you give us a mystery and the next you answer it...which is why I won't be losing interest any time soon ;) Or ever...lol. Till next chapter! ~Amber

Author's Response:

Thanks for the ressurance! :) My brain has something wrong with it, I'm paranoid about EVERYTHING lol.

I'm glad you feel that way about the mysteries and I must warn you that this is one of those stories where you really gotta think ya know? Hell, I'm having trouble keeping up with it myself! lol

~EoE





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 31, 2008
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: The Lost Warrior

"InuYasha," said Kaéde, "is an old friend that we have dearly missed for a little over three years."

Has it been three or ten years that Yash has been gone? I got a little confused with that...but otherwise...great update! I'm lovin' Yash's characterization. And these carthrid creatures fascinate me everytime I read. Did you make them up or are they some mythical/fantasy-type creature that exists already? Just curious. Loved the action, the story...the chapter. Keep writing! Till next update! :D ~Amber



Author's Response:

No. I made them up myself :) It's funny how such mindless creatures can intrigue so much interest. lol.

Yes it was three years. Sorry about the mix up!



Training Hearts by lil6ter Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]

Summary:
 

Hundreds of competitors seek one common goal; two seek each other. 

 

 

"I didn't do this for me!" he finally shouted out, exasperated as he paced the small room over looking the blue square building and round metal bird's nest.

"What do you mean?" she whispered.

"You once asked me why I did this. Why the high bar? I did it for my mother, but now, I do it for you."

"Inuyasha..."

"No! You wanted to know, right? Fine then. I pushed myself like this ‘cause I love you."


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17284 Read Count: 1722

[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 11, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

You SCARED me! Lol. I really thought you were giving up on fanfiction when you announced that you were ending White Rose! Let me guesss...inspired by the Olympics? Very cool. Love to see where you take this. ~Amber

Author's Response:  

No...I could not stop writing now even if I wanted to. Ideas just keep popping into my head and I can't stop them. If I could talk to write so that things would go faster, then I would so I could get all my idea's down sooner! Haha...yes...I wonder how you could tell that my trip to China and the games were inspiration? Thanks for the review, and enjoy the next chapter!

 

 

~Lil6ter





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 11, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I was right! Olympics it is! I do think it's VERY original though...and one of the few athlete-centric fics that caught my attention in a while. Funny, too. Especially the bit about InuYasha being an asshole. Loved the chapter. Till next update! ~Amber



Author's Response:  

Hehehe...that was one of my favorite parts too. I think that I was smirking when I wrote that part...but I am not sure. There wasn't a mirror near by at the time. Yay! Someone thinks that it is original, and yes, you were right ;-).   Thanks for the review, and enjoy the next chapter!

 

~Lil6ter





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Aww..how cute, Yash gets a date! I absolutely love the subtle humor and fluff laced within the story. Till next update! It's definetely worth the wait ;) ~Amber

Author's Response:  

Hehe....yes...Yasha gets a date. I am trying to keep this one light and fluffy....but this it ME we are talking about. There are quite a few things that Inuyasha still gets to deal with. I am evil...what can I say? Thanks for the review and I hope that you like the next chapter!

~Lil6ter





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Chapter number:
Title: Training Hearts

Understandable. Senioritis sucks, doesn't it? I'm going through the same thing on my end, too =[

Minus the novel, of course. But I wish you the best of luck with it! ~Amber




Summary:


The official posting site of all Hyakumonogatari Kaidankai contest entries.
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Divergence, Drama, Fantasy, Hentai, Horror, Occult, Oneshot, Parody, Psychological, Sci-fi, Thriller, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23937 Read Count: 3398

[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: October 16, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: No Trespassing

*sigh*

Well...there goes my chances! Lol...just kidding, but this'll be pretty hard to top. :D Good luck! ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 16, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Am I Beautiful?

Nice :D

I would be freaked the hell out though if something like that ever happened to me. But I guess it's a good thing that this gave me jitters! Good luck with the contest! ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 09, 2008
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Playing Games

Oh...my...GOD! Amazing! You really have a knack for scary stories and canon. Good luck with the competition! ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 11, 2008
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: The Ouija Board

Awww...that was cute.





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 12, 2008
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: Do Not Speak

WOW! This was amazing. I can't wait to see the full fic when its posted. Very scary. Good luck! ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 14, 2008
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: The Curse of the Wet Noodle

LOL! This made me laugh soooooo hard! You really have a talent. Good luck! ~Amber




Summary:

23 year old Inuyasha Takashi used to date the average, non-beautiful Kagome Higurashi druing their junior high school years. But on the first day of high school he left her for none other then her cousin, Kikyo Hitamoto. He has been regretting that decision ever since. 7 years later he is given the chance to meet his favourite band --The Vampiress Sisters-- when his best friend Miroku announces he is engaged to the silvery one of the band. Even being thier #1 fan like he was Inuyasha was never able to find out their real names. They always went by their stage names in public: Scarlet, Salithum, and Shadow. Inuyasha is more then startled to find out that the lead singer is the Kagome he had dated in junior high. He's even more shocked to learn that these three girls have taken the top 3 places in the 'Hottest Females On The Planet' list . . . . . .with lead singer Shadow at the very top.

 

Inu/Kag        Mir/San        Kou/Aya 


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: Ayame, InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5790 Read Count: 676

[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: October 07, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 29, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Okay, the summary pulled me in like right away. And your first chapter did NOT dissapoint. I'm lovin' it. Now onwards to see how karma plans to bite InuYasha in the ass for just dumping Kagome like that.

But not before I put this on my favs ;)

~Amber



Author's Response: Aha, thanks for the review. and Yes, i an tell you right now that karma is most definatly going to bite Inuyasha in the ass but not before Kagome kicks it.





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 29, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Scarlet, Salithum, and Shadow.

Ouch! You want some ice for that burn, Yasha?

Nice developement. So now they'll all be going to Hawaii! Even more so, Yash and Kaggie will be staying in the same cabin...on the same island! Um...one thing though. It's a little wierd that they'll all be staying on different islands. Doesn't one need to take a plane to travel between them? That'd be pretty inconvenient for all of them, but I could be wrong...

ANYWAY, I'm liking the story so far. I def can't wait for the sparks to fly (or the fur...lol...whatever floats your boat) that'll result from Yash and Kag being in ANY kind of close proximity. And of course, the karma-biting aformentioned in my last review. Lovesit! ;D

Update when you can!

~Amber



Author's Response: I was kinda thinking of having a boat or something. But these islands aren't really that ar apart, and it's only incovenint to Kagome cuz she doesn't like Inuyasha. Everyone else was trying to get them back together becuase --though Inuyasha and Kagome don't know it yet-- Kouga, Ayame, Sango, And Miroku (Kaggy knows Roku) knew how great a couple Kagome and Inuyasha made in junior high! See! I got a plan . . . either that or I just made that up off the top of my head . . . hmm . . .and I think it'll be the fur that starts flying before the sparks, the fur off Inuyasha's doggie ears!



Hide and Seek by Ayamegusa Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:
A little game of 'Hide and Seek'
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2232 Read Count: 607

[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: October 01, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 01, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very tastefully done. I liked. :D ~Amber



Experiment of the Heart by russgirl Rated: Salacious [Reviews - 6]

Summary:
InuYasha is a cyborg created to protect Kagome, the daughter of his creator, but he soon realizes that Kagome is a cyborg as well.  They must fit into a world where they do not truly belong and wonder why her father would instill upon them this fate.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Sci-fi
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Implied Incest, Language
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9036 Read Count: 404

[Report This] Published: October 05, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 06, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: The creation of a cyborg

Interesting! Kinda reminds me of the movie Godsend what with Kagome being designed after Kikyou (I'm guessing). I liked! And will be looking out for updates :)

~Amber



Author's Response: Thanks, and yeah you're right I just didn't want to explain too much in the beginning.




Summary:

Summary: she lured him in with promises of incredible sex, it proved to be his downfall. . . perhaps he should have remained faithful to his wife that night.

Won First Place! Entry for the Vampirism Prompt of inumadmusings contest at LJ.
Categories: Fables

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku
Genres: Hentai, Horror, Oneshot, PWP, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Homosexual/Gay Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1683 Read Count: 362

[Report This] Published: October 17, 2008 Updated: October 17, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 17, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Elixir of Life, Potion of Lust

This is...WOW. I'm speechless, Nikki. Especially after the last line which utterly and completely just blew me away! So dark, but deliciously citrucy and the scene where Miroku realised his life was coming to an end ("Miroku knew in that instant...") I think was really well written.

But, on a seperate note, I can't say that I feel any sympathy for Miroku =/ You just don't DO that when your wife is prego! Especially when Sango is your wife, because if Vampy Kaggie and Dracu-Yasha hadn't killed him after sexin' his brains out...I'm pretty sure Hiraikotsu would. And both scenarios are and would've been deserved.

I LOVE this! And can definetely see why you placed. Congrats! :D

~Amber



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m not normally one for Dark fics.. but this was soemthing to try. *blushes* Thank you so much again! No.. I don\'t either. Sango would definitely beat the crud out of him... but she would have taken him back.. and the cycle would repeat. *winks* I hope I can please more.



Do Not Speak by KeiChanz Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
A seemingly regular and successful Halloween party goes horribly astray.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hentai, Horror, Oneshot
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3162 Read Count: 412

[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: October 19, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Do Not Speak

"At least I'm not Batman."

LOL! I got the best mental image of that. Love the extension, but I have to admit I liked the contest version a bit more. It left more to the imagination and that gave it a bit of a scarier element. But hey, I'm definetely not complaining about the happy ending (or the lemon, lol) in this one, either! I think both versions are great. :D

Terrific story! Thanks for posting!

~Amber



Bruised Heart by JeevaraniRoyal Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]

Summary:
Girl dates guy. Guy cheats on girl. Girl leaves him. Guy is devastated. Girl is...murdered? How will InuYasha ever solve this problem? [No demons, human InuYasha. No Japan, U.S.A. instead.]
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Miroku, Naraku, Sango
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5951 Read Count: 250

[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: October 31, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

WOW. I like! It'll be interesting to see what you have in store for Kagome and InuYasha. Till next chapter! :D

~Amber



Author's Response: I'm not sure how long it will take me to update. I'm sorry for teh inconvenience, but I just don't have much free time anymore. I have all my ideas set, though it is possible I'll change them, it's just a matter of getting them down on paper. I thank you for your comment. I wonder what people are thinking I will do with our favorite pair. Nobody really knows whether I like stories with a happy ending or not. *evil laugh*



No Different by L0VER Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

Sango took a deep breathe to calm herself, tears clogging her throat "You know what you are? Huh? A pathetic little boy who’s stuck in the past."

Maybe love can't conquer all. Wounds heal but there are scars.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16057 Read Count: 10454

[Report This] Published: November 09, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Friend

Awww! Sango and Kagome's grandpa are so freakin' cute in this story...which I definetely like. I can't wait to find out how Kagome is responsible for the death of InuYasha's mother and why he hates her so much...could it have anything to do with the car crash? And if he can ever get over his hatred of her, if she ever gets her memories back...

All in all, I'd say this is an enjoyable read! *adds to favs* Till your next update!

~Amber ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Amber!! Well, I finished the chapters revealing that .. but I just didin`t post it up yet! x).

If she gets her memories back......... hm. I don`t know .. stay tuned ;) THank you for the rating as well! I`m getting giddy :D





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Past Pt. 1

Oh...my...GOD! The flashback with InuYasha's shoes is so sad! I mean, hes kind of an asshole in this story (from what I've read so far), but still...his mother spent a fortune on new shoes! At least let the kid where them.

And this makes me wonder...
I'm decently sure the girl with the french braids is either Kagome or Kikyou and if it IS the latter, then maybe Yash's hatred of Kagome is all one big misunderstanding? And you, evil author(ess?) are just throwing us off with the amnesia thing?

*shakes head*
Don't mind me...I like making predictions, especially when a story has me THIS wrapped up in it. Darn it for pulling me away from my economics homework but I gotta press "next" to see if I'm right! Lol...

Will do that now ;)

~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Past Pt. 2

Damn...I'm wrong :(

On the upside, Kagome's grandpa was being "cute" again. He reminds me especially of my grandmother, telling embarassing stories to everyone who comes around. That, and more of the past was revealed.

Only now I think Kagome is the asshole. I'm so confused! And I have a feeling that opinion will volley between Inu and Kag A LOT as more of their past comes to the light.

Hokay...onto the next chapter!

~Amber 





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: A Visit

See! I knew it would volley! InuYasha is such a jeeeeerk! If he knows about the amnesia why hold over her head what she can't remember? Granted, he probably found out recently, but......

*moving on*

~Amber ;)





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Meeting

Alright...I liked Inu and Kag both in this chapter. But I LOVED Sango. "Stilettos baby, I just had to do it." One of the best. lines. EVER. I was laughing so hard by the end of this chapter.

Beginning, too. Who needs 9-1-1 on speed dial? You KNOW the number! Lol.

Loved the chapter!

~Amber