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I'm Still Here by InusMistress Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]

Summary:


It had all started one morning; one that Kagome would never forget. How such an argument could have led to her love’s death, she would never understand. [IK, rated for later smut ^_^] Dedicated to InuGrrrl.

Won 1st place for the "Best Tearjerker" award on ED Destined Awards, first quarter, 2007.

Won 3rd place for the "Best Melodrama" award on ED Destined Awards, first quarter, 2007.

Won 3rd place for the "Best Plot Twist" award on ED Destined Awards, third quarter, 2008.


Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19359 Read Count: 4115

[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: September 17, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Awakening

I LOVE this story! And of all the fics I've read with the same plot, I think this is THE best. Seriously.

I mean, the idea that Kouga could be a schizo? I never would have thought of that. And did Kaggie just sense Yash at the end of this chapter? (The part where she gasped and thought his name). Shweet! He awakens!

Unless thats Sesshomaru -__-

In which case I would be soooo disaapointed. Or not really because the twists and turns you've dished out have been deliciously entertaining. ;) I can't wait to see where you take this story! You've even had me biting my nails a few times, lol. Update when you can! I really enjoyed reading this! :D ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Fall Into my Lies

Awww! A whole chapter dedicated to me? That's so nice! Thank you! I had no idea the review would inspire you to post, but that's really cool. I guess I'll be reviewing more often ;)

As for the chapter...beautifully written! Kagome's breakdown and emotions (the sympathy that she feels for Kouga, the guilt because she feels that way, her mourning over Yash, etc.) all seem so real. Also, the length is about the same as the last chapter and...I think...longer than the one before it(?) so don't worry. There are no complaints there. Plus as dark as this gets I figure it must be leading up to something good if Kagome (of all people) is willing to risk the whole village to escape. I'm dying to know what'll happen! A little action when once our resident schizo finds out what she's done? Or does she even get to do it? The awakening of Yash...Sessh...or some random other golden-eyed boy whose eyes can also turn red? I'm sure I'll love (and can't wait) to see what you have in store! I'm glad you updated and am even more ecstatic to hear(er...read?) that it was me who got you to post! *Huggles back*

Till next chapter! ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2008
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Hold Tight to What I Know

It's cool. Glad to have noticed something! So...is Shippou wrong? How can Kags be so sure? That'll be interesting to find out...especially if it wasn't Kouga. As for Shippou, he...kinda deserved that, though I didn't expect Kagome to slap him. Still, emotions were kept very nicely in check. I thought the most she'd do when they were arguing is snap and start yelling but her reaction is completely understandable in that she's overwhelmed. Hmm...I wonder who's a-knocking on  the barrior. Till next chapter! I can't wait to find out :D ~Amber



Goodbye To Romance by Dangersque Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]

Summary:

A new journey starts for Inuyasha after the ultimate betrayal by those he considered his friends. A nameless soldier finds his village destroyed by demons. And the barriers between the living and the dead are crumbling.


Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Language
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61154 Read Count: 6258

[Report This] Published: July 13, 2007 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: October 26, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: And Set Them On Fire

Woah...is there a chapter missing? What happened to Yash being in the cave and finding out about the herb-use, nearly overdosing and that whole confrontation from Chap2? This just skips to him getting mad over the rosary and then what happens after Yash leaves the gang. And chapters 2 and 3 are the same.

(was re-reading this ;]..great story!)

~Amber



Author's Response: Hmm... That's odd... Not quite sure what happened. It's fixed now though.




Summary:

Some fun with role reversals. Inuyasha is a normal boy living in modern day Japan, but when he gets pulled down an odd old well, he finds himself 500 years in the past. Can he live up to the adventure, and can he deal with problems a lot worse than failing math?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the stuff that I am writing about. Rumiko Takahshi has all rights involved in the Inuyasha franchise, and I'm just scrounging around with bits and pieces of my own to play with. Fun for me, but otherwise useless.


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32058 Read Count: 903

[Report This] Published: August 16, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2009
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Anger Issues and Bird Demons

Wow...interesting twist to the crow story. I wonder if they made it to his world, and if they did, what awaits Inu/Kag when they get back. Loved the chapter. I laughed sooooo hard when Inu said "Girls sucked" because of what Kagome did...hilarious! Can't wait to read more =D

~Am



Author's Response:

You will see soon enough, because I'm working on chapter 6 now. I can't seem to stop myself the last couple of days. I'm glad you are enjoying it!





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2009
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Better Bird Demons Than Liars

Awww..they didn't beat up Sesshomaru :( But the chapter was still amazing. Hmm, I wonder how the parents knew about the well though, and what awaits Inu/Kag on the other side? Have the crows been running rampant with the jewel, or.....? I love that this isn't just the regular story flipped, I couldn't imagine the family taking Kagome's shooting of Inu lightly (Izayoi's glaring...hilarious!). And omg! I used to have one of those electricity-ball-thingies! From Spencers! So that was fun to notice.

And I'll be interested to see where this goes from here, especially since the whole Kikyou arc is being cut. Though a love triangle would've been interesting, I'm not one to complain about pure Inu/Kag ;) And action..it'll be fun watching Inu still angry over his family keeping secrets let loose on a bunch of carrion demons. Until next chapter!

~Am :D



Author's Response:

Ha, sorry no, Sesshy's ass was not whooped. I'm trying to see the softer side of Sessh, where he actually cares about his brother. They were raised together in this version by Inuyasha's mother so, shit changes.  His parent's didn't know about the well. They know, in a way to be revealed later, about portals existing and Inuyasha eventually finding one. They did NOT know there was one next door, or they would have moved away. As for the jewel, you will see next chap. I included the Spencers thing because it always suprises me how little Inuyasha is shocked by the modern world. I think someone from the past would be pretty blwon away by cars and computers and electric balls. I had one too, it distracted me for hours.

 As for Kikyo in this story, her story is what it would have been if Inuyasha hadn't been there, but had died anyway, and the jewel was passed on. She is an anscestor and historical figure. Kags might even be her reincarnation, I haven't decided yet. But she will not play a part in this story. HOWEVER, for fun's sake, I may include a female Hojo-like character for Inuyasha to maintain at least some friction. Its funny.

 Anyway, I'm so glad to see your reviews, and I hope you enjoy future chapters. I need to study for a test tonight, but tomorrow, when its over, I will get on chapter 7!



White Rose by lil6ter Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 152]

Summary:

Love. It’s a funny thing, really. Over the years I have been told many things about love. That it can change lives forever, or make people do stupid things. I have even been told that it can overcome anything. I believe that. It changed my life. The person who loved me did do a stupid thing because of it. Because of her, I am now...this...thing…this monster. Why? Because I didn’t love her in return. So now I wait. For fifty years I have waited for someone to love me. Do I believe that love can overcome anything? God I hope so. I pray I can find the one who can change my life forever. I have a chance to now, but can she learn to see beyond what I am, and discover who I am? She alone has the power to change my life forever, but for better or worse? A Monster… A Beauty…A Curse…A Rose…The Time Has Come…Let The Fairytale Begin…

NOMINATED FOR 2007'S IYFG FOURTH Q. BEST INU/KAG ROMANCE


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4502 Read Count: 3420

[Report This] Published: December 18, 2007 Updated: July 08, 2010


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 06, 2008
Chapter number:
Title: White Rose

You are really good at writing fluff and I love how you've incorporated elements of beauty and the beast. I read the book a long time ago so now, reading this, I always get a little deja vu and remember little parts here and there (like how beast asked beauty to marry him every night). I'm glad this story isn't too similar though and that it isn't written verbatim and can't wait to read that next chapter! ;) ~Amber



Author's Response: Hehe…well, the story is about Beauty and the Beast. I have always been in love with the real version, so I had to write this. Some people thought that I was a bit crazy having Inu ask Kagome to marry him every night, but it was just too good an aspect of the original to let go. I tried to distance myself a bit from the original story (and the stereotypical Disney version) and I am glad that you like how that is coming across.  I hope that you like the next chapter. It should be posted later today. Thanks for the review and I hope that you enjoy the end of white rose!  ~Lil6ter





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 08, 2008
Chapter number:
Title: White Rose

Are you sure? That'll leave off with a lot of questions and judging by the end of the last chapter, pretty hard to wrap up. You can't put the story on hiatus or something? We still don't know what Inu promised the queen, the consequences of that promise, the two acts of love Kagome has to perform, what'll become of Kouga, what became of Kikyou, and all that...

*sigh*

I'll still read, no matter what you decide to do, just to let you know. This was an amazing story and I really really enjoyed reading it. Sorry it has to come to an end. :( ~Amber



Author's Response:  

I am sure. I have been thinking about this for quite some time, and I have finally come to this conclusion. I have talked about it with everyone in my family, and most of them wanted for me to call it quits here and now, but I can't do that. I need to post the next two chapters to offer some sense of closer to everyone, including myself. I truly wish that this story would continue on, but it can't. The next chapter has been perfected, but the epilogue was thrown together, so it will be very very very rough. I have no choice though, and I will not go back and redo it. It is time for me to move of from this story. I hope that the epilogue wraps up things sufficiently, but I must do what I must do. I can tell you this though. People in the 1800's did not live very long, so Kagome is already considered and old maid. Kikyo is dead and has been for a long time, since she would have to be about 63 to still be alive. That is almost unheard of for this time period, just like living to 100 is almost unheard of now. Koga has been captivated by Ayame, and we will hear nothing more from or about him. I hope that this helps you some.



Lying With the Devil by chanda Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]

Summary:

Kagome and Hojo had been friends for years before she went through the well and met Inuyasha. When she came home to her era one day, Hojo asked her out. Finding no reason not to, she accepts. Moving to college, she realizes that Hojo is not the perfect boyfriend he seemed to be. Now, beaten and used, she wishes that she hadn’t left Inuyasha back in the feudal era, 500 years in the past....

This story has been collaberated with my beta O-Mega Lead. This is soley his plot and asked me to write it, while he beta'd it. This is a Dark Fic and has graphic rape scenes. We do not condone such behavior.

This is a Inu/Kag Fic but starts off, Hojo/Kag.

This story has been nominated and has taken Third Place in 2008. And in 2009 won First Place by Eternal Destiny Award for Best Nightmare. Thank you to all who've voted and nominated this fiction; you have made me a very happy author! :)


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Angst, Psychological
Warnings: BDSM, Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Rape/Non-consensual
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39298 Read Count: 3067

[Report This] Published: March 25, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2012


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: July 22, 2008
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Wow...when you said gore you really meant it, lol. I actually cringed away from my computer screen a few times. But hey, at least Houjo's dead. It'll be interesting to see where you go from here. Judging from what Inu said to Kag he's still a little bitter about her leaving and theres still that talk she has to have with Sesshy. I kind of like his characterization. Everybody loves an ice prince but the way you've written him makes him seem more real. Anyway, can't wait till your next update! :) ~Amber

Author's Response:

I tried to live up to my expectations, I see I did. Wow! You had to turn away from your computer, and here I am telling myself that it wasn't detailed enough. O.O LOL. Yes, there is going to be a long healing process, hence the reason it is in Legends. LOL.

Yes, the talk, well... it's been postponed, but I assure you that I didn't forget about it. It'll be brought up in future chapters. Thank you, I do love writing Inuyasha as much as I love writing his brother. I really thought long and hard about his character in the Manga, and seen how much he has changed. I figured keep his facace, but let some light in as well.

Thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you again :D

Chanda





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2008
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Nice! Very powerful chapter, especially the line "...she had no choice but to obey his commands, to be another prisoner to yet, another man." Seriously...that made my jaw drop because it summed up so much in just a few words (and I swear I'm not exaggerating. I might just be a really animated reader but I real-deal gaped when I read this). I really liked this chapter. The emotions were portrayed pretty accurately--sporadic, but not the writing, the emotions that Kagome was dealing with. It was very real to natural, human emotion.

...not that I can speak from experience or anything. But if I were to imagine myself in this situation or someone else in this situation, I think this is how they or I would act. Hell...its better than what I can imagine! So kudos on the great chapter...it was definetely worth the wait! Until the next one!

~Amber :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Amber. I tried to keep this as realistic as possible; however, there are some issues that aren't realistic in this story. Usually, rape was dishonarble in the fedual era, unlike Today. Men were dominant and I didn't want Inuyasha, Miroku, or Sesshoumaru to act that way.

I do have some experience, but nothing like what Kagome went through, but enough to know about trauma. I went through a very angry time, and then I dealt with my trauma.

I can't promise when I'll get the next chapter out. I'm busy with writing essays and people begging me to update another story.

Thank you again! :D

Chanda




Summary:
This is my first story so please be nice... Kagome and Inuyasha have hidden their true feelings for a long time now... Will they finally be able to fess up???
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2144 Read Count: 478

[Report This] Published: March 27, 2008 Updated: April 15, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 29, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...I'd be scared for my 'puppy ass' if I were InuYasha. When Kagome is mad...she doesn't play!

About the chapter...I thought this was really sweet! And funny. Your style is definetely unique, too. The ending oozed just the right amount of fluff and natural teenage awkwardness. You made Yash and Kaggie REAL without them acting older or younger than they should be. I liked. I liked it a lot.

And now...onto the next chapter ;) This is off to a great start.

~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: September 29, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damn! *snaps fingers* An almost-confession. But Kagome is pretty dense if Souta could figure out what Yash planned to say and she couldn't. I mean...what did she think he was going to say? This:

Yash: "Kagome, I have something important to say. I...I love..."

Kagome: "Yes, InuYasha?"

Yash: "Ramen. I love ramen."

...

Nevermind, that's totally possible -__-

And their little game of footsie (metaphorically speaking since they're kinda just DANCING around the inevitable) is what's making the story so GREAT. Love it by the way! *next*

~Amber



Trial And Error by MomoDesu Rated: Provocative starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]

Summary:
Sometimes you search so hard for something, that you don't realize what you need is right in front of your face the entire time.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19662 Read Count: 1505

[Report This] Published: March 29, 2008 Updated: December 18, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: July 29, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Two Guys, A Girl, and A King Sized Bed

Awww...this is such a cute story. I love how you don't just jump into Yash/Kag right away...just subtly hint at it. And I'm lovin' Jakotsu. Will be looking out for updates! :) ~Amber

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I don\'t think I could just jump into the relationship. The tease is half of the fun! And I am in such a Jakotsu mood I couldn\'t leave him out ^_^





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 29, 2008
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: The Ball Starts Rolling

Lol! "Mama food" should be patented, it makes everything better. Loved the chapter! Update again when you can. :) ~Amber

Author's Response: I know, right, lol. Especially when you are sick or times just suck in general. No matter how hard I try I just can\'t make Chicken and Stars like Mama, even though it\'s just open can, put in bowl, then nuke for a minute and a half. \r\n\r\nI\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter. Roughly seven more left until it\'s over! -MD





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2009
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Let's Skip The Formalities And Cut To The Sex

Ouch! I wonder how Inu plans to pull himself outta this one! It seems he has a lot to learn on relationships...aw...and their first date was so cute, too! Glad to see an update! Will be looking out for more! ~Amber

Author's Response: Poor, dim Inu. He\'ll get himself out the best way he knows how, which may not say very much XD



The Last Time. by Keiko-Chan Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]

Summary:


InuYasha must give upallthat he has come to cherish.
Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4676 Read Count: 2646

[Report This] Published: April 27, 2008 Updated: February 22, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2009
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Worth Saving.

This is such a beautiful piece ;)

I love how you've written InuYasha, and his emotions as he's told he has to leave everything behind, then the after-effects of that when he's in the jewel. I love the pacing and "flow" of the story...your style is really unique. And I especially love that Inu/Kag got reunited. I see there's a "no" under completed, so I will definetely be looking forward to another installment when you get around to it. It was a sweet read. I smiled when I read it!

~Amber :D



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I'm glad you enjoyed it--and my style. Although, I didn't know I had one. lol.  Yeah. I hadn't intended to continue it, however I was asked, and eh. I figured "why not?"  LOL. there IS a "no" under completed because i'm trying to write an epilogue of sorts. That'll hopefully be up within the next two weeks or so.  Thanks so much for your review! 

~KC





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23, 2009
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue - Heaven On Earth.

Aww...the ending was sweet. I love it. You captured so much in so few words and it was amazing. I look forward to reading more from you if you ever decide to post again. :)

~Amber



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review Amber!  I will most definately post again... but I doubt I'll get around to anything hardcore before May. What can I say besides... school sucks *pouts*  lol.I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

~KC



Leading On by InusMistress Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]

Summary:

[AU] When the girls meet the guys in France, the flirting starts – Inuyasha’s interested in Kagome, who appeals to Kouga. Kagura is in love with Sesshomaru, who has eyes for Rin, who’s gushing all over him. And Sango’s gushing over her internship in a hotel in Paris – owned by none other than Miroku!


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7823 Read Count: 304

[Report This] Published: May 01, 2008 Updated: July 28, 2008


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: July 28, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Complications

Ooh, I like. This story has such a light, interesting feel to it. And I can't wait to see what happens once Miroku gets in on the action. But I have a question. If Miro runs his own 5-star hotel, then why are Yash and co staying at the Mariott? He can't give his friends free service? Lol, I guess that would be OOC for him though seeing as how in canon Miroku is a bit of a hustler, but still. You've written an interesting story. I'll be looking out for updates ;) ~Amber

Author's Response:

Oops, just realized that I hadn't answered this!

As I think I've pointed out enough, Sessh etc don't need any free service ;) and also, it's a local hotel in Paris, and they're in Corsica now. Did I ever mention that in the story? I'll make sure to add it somewhere later on.

Chapter coming soon I think! :)  



No Future For You by Dangersque Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]

Summary:
Sequel to Full Of Grace. How is the gang coping with Inuyasha's departure? How is Inuyasha coping?
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Horror
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8496 Read Count: 650

[Report This] Published: May 24, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah...another wondefully cool and evil villain. Wonder what her motive is and why she wants InuYasha for her king. The story is really exciting what with Inu now in captivity and the friends on the right track to find him. I can't believe Kagome suggested Nosferatu, though, lol! And that Sessh was a principal! Amazing. So action-packed and thrilling...can't wait for the next! ~Amber

Author's Response: Okay, I'm going to be a bit of a douche here and give out a spoiler. This should have actually gone into the chapter, but I couldn't figure out a way to write it in that didn't sound stupid. Her plan is to create an army of super vampires by finding hanyou, turning them into vampires, and giving them jewel shards. She needs Inuyasha primarily for his shards (and because it's one less hanyou to recruit), but wants him to be her partner because he was strong enough on his own to go out and get them. So in case I don't get it into the next chapter (whenever that comes), there it is.



Utterances by PseudoHanyou Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]

Summary:
I am a demon, stupid girl. I am a thing of nightmares and terror. I am that which causes you to hold the fox close at night and I will be the one who awakens you to this truth.
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Psychological, Yaoi
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Homosexual/Gay Sex, Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5397 Read Count: 1224

[Report This] Published: May 24, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 20, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So dark! But I love your style :D

Keep writing! And update when you can.

~Amber



Bark At The Moon by Dangersque Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Summary:

Photobucket Inuyasha was looking forward to the best summer ever after graduation. Instead, he finds out his father's alive, he's not human, and he's being recruited by both sides of a secret war. And he thought calculus was hard...
Categories: Fairy Tales

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Other
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29087 Read Count: 2270

[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: March 07, 2010


Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: July 18, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this! It feels like I'm watching an action flick instead of reading a fan fic. And InuYasha and Touga's characterizations are amazing, as usual, just like they were in Goodbye to Romance. I can't wait to see what happens next. :) ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: July 19, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice update! I thought the little hanyou in the alley was gonna be jinenji though. Is shiori hanyou, too? The next chapter looks ESPECIALLY interesting now that Kagome's going undercover. I'm kind of liking her characterization now, too..but what's with InuYasha and the people on the radio? That just kept making me laugh even though I really did not get the joke. The last part made me laugh too, with what Sesshomaru says. I got a mental image of him sitting all stone-faced next to a radio waiting to confirm if what Inu said was true, lol. And InuYasha 'requires' pancakes to journey the house for strange imperfect rooms? Interesting..I am loving the subtle humor laced within this story :) ~Amber

Author's Response:

The hanyou in the alley was actually supposed to be Jinenji without being overly obvious about it. About the people on the radio; Inuyasha is quoting songs from his favourite radio station (the classic rock one that wakes him up in the first chapter). The first is from Go Your Own Way by Fleetwood Mac and the second one (which Sesshoumaru finishes at the end of the chapter) was from You Can't Always Get What You Want by The Rolling Stones.

And yes, Sesshoumaru is the type of person to do that. It's not like he'd have to wait very long to hear either song though.  





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
Date: August 28, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn! I can't say I expected that kind of ending. Go, Yash for making Sessh squirm. And Kagome. I love the Kag/Shiori friendship and how she's starting to see how things are for the other team...and react to it. I'm surprised Sesshomaru didn't youkai whip her for throwing him on his ass. And Yash did blades of blood! Very cool...I can see that coming in handy soon. Update when you can, thanks. ~Amber





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ooh...interesting! I wonder if Kagome will ever use those beads. She doesn't seem like she wants to but maybe there'll be a situation where she has to? At least the power won't be abused like it usually is (by her...Kaede seemed to have a different agenda).

On a seperate note, the Sesshomaru/InuYasha, InuYasha/Shiori interaction was pretty funny to read! Ice prince is starting to soften up (and even admitted to hating him for the wrong reasons) and they played what I'm guessing is an ancient version of Mario Bros? I guess Papa Taisho's scolding got to him. The Shiori phone conversation was cute, too. "I want someone to be in contact with in case I get lost." I do the same thing when I walk home from work and its dark out...it drives my friends crazy!

Until next chapter! I'm guessing it'll be pretty action-y what with Inu going to stop some terrorists with Papa Tai and Sesshomaru. Hmm....I wonder if the DOYA will be there? Thanks for updating!

~Amber :D





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LOL! I feel so bad for InuYasha. Everyone is surveillance-stalking his life xD First his Dad...now Kagome has pictures of him all over her wall? He should go live in that dungeon they called a basement (unless there's surveillance there, too...then the world just isn't safe).

But on a serious note, WOW! Now that Hiten sorta confirmed what her Dad/concience/dream-papa told her, I wonder what Kagome will manage to dig up and if it'll lead to her changing sides in the war. And her Dad and Shippou's parents knowing InuYasha's parents was interesting. So I'm guessing his parents were taken out the same way. I'm curious, too, about who/what the Judas is (Biblical and Superbad (I think?) references aside) and what part Kohaku...unless he IS the Judas...plays in Naraku's plans.

Very exciting chapter! I loved how Souta still managed to hero-worship despite everything and the DOYA gang teasing Kagome. But 3 boxes of DNA?? xD No matter what she says, I think Sango comes away looking like the bigger creep...

Till next chapter!

~Amber :)



Author's Response:

Yeah... Inuyasha gets no privacy. Except maybe in the shower.

The DNA and the boxes are different things (let's just say Kagome's not the only one who does surveillance). I'd hate to see what DNA someone would need 3 boxes for.