Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signed
March 11, 2009
Chapter 6: Better Bird Demons Than Liars
Awww..they didn't beat up Sesshomaru :( But the chapter was still amazing. Hmm, I wonder how the parents knew about the well though, and what awaits Inu/Kag on the other side? Have the crows been running rampant with the jewel, or.....? I love that this isn't just the regular story flipped, I couldn't imagine the family taking Kagome's shooting of Inu lightly (Izayoi's glaring...hilarious!). And omg! I used to have one of those electricity-ball-thingies! From Spencers! So that was fun to notice.
And I'll be interested to see where this goes from here, especially since the whole Kikyou arc is being cut. Though a love triangle would've been interesting, I'm not one to complain about pure Inu/Kag ;) And action..it'll be fun watching Inu still angry over his family keeping secrets let loose on a bunch of carrion demons. Until next chapter!
~Am :DAuthor's Response:
Ha, sorry no, Sesshy's ass was not whooped. I'm trying to see the softer side of Sessh, where he actually cares about his brother. They were raised together in this version by Inuyasha's mother so, shit changes. His parent's didn't know about the well. They know, in a way to be revealed later, about portals existing and Inuyasha eventually finding one. They did NOT know there was one next door, or they would have moved away. As for the jewel, you will see next chap. I included the Spencers thing because it always suprises me how little Inuyasha is shocked by the modern world. I think someone from the past would be pretty blwon away by cars and computers and electric balls. I had one too, it distracted me for hours.
As for Kikyo in this story, her story is what it would have been if Inuyasha hadn't been there, but had died anyway, and the jewel was passed on. She is an anscestor and historical figure. Kags might even be her reincarnation, I haven't decided yet. But she will not play a part in this story. HOWEVER, for fun's sake, I may include a female Hojo-like character for Inuyasha to maintain at least some friction. Its funny.
Anyway, I'm so glad to see your reviews, and I hope you enjoy future chapters. I need to study for a test tonight, but tomorrow, when its over, I will get on chapter 7!