Penname: Deathmvp [Contact]
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Member Since: June 01, 2008
Membership Status: Member
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I am a lover of Inuasha and kogoma.  I can see alot of my self in inuasha so that is probly why.  And yes I am a hopless romatic.

 

Yes I know I said I plain to add a nother story but so far it is not working out well.  Sorry.

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Memories of You by kmoaton Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 166]

Summary:

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A wish was made and Kagome went home with no memories of the past. How are things changed when a new threat forces Inuyasha to help Kagome regain her memories, including the love they had for each other?


Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Psychological, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 84246 Read Count: 19163

[Report This] Published: June 18, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2016


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2009
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Very nice.  I like how they are starting to work throu everthing.  I am looking foward to more of thier talk next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.  It's time to work something out, espcially before new drama erupts!





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2009
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice chapter.  For a moment I though that you where going to say he was thinking of killing him self without Kagome.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this one.  Inuyasha was holding on to the words of Midoriko.  She told them that one day he and Kagome would be together and this is what keep him going.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2009
Chapter number: 24
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think this showed alot about how they felt at the time and how hard it is.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying this and thank you so much for sticking with it!





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2010
Chapter number: 29
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I like the idea of a bite better then someone else casting the spell in all honesty.  I do not know the bonding like that seem to be something that should be just the 2 of them and not anyone else there when it happend.  Even if it was a spell they had to cast would be better then the 3rd party to me.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I for one do not think she should balme him for it but I know alot of women would.

Author's Response: I don't think she'll blame him but she has to come to terms with the idea of another woman in his life, especially when she knows the woman in question.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Nice how she reacted to getting them back.

Author's Response: She still will have a few issues but things are becoming clearer for her.  Thank you so much for your continued support.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great work with the Seer in this chapter.  I also loved the line “You, mister, have to learn how to trust me and trust my instincts.”

Author's Response: Thank you!  Sometimes, Inuyasha just needs to be told! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter!





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2010
Chapter number: 30
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice chapter and I loved the idea of Inu's drawing strenght from nature and it expains why they seemed to never stay still in cannon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The nature angle made sense to me because they never stayed still and didn't like to be indoors.



Yesterday's Tomorrows by Knittingknots Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]

Summary:
Caught up in the danger of a land in civil war, how does the Inu-tachi adjust to a post-Naraku world? I/K, M/S Starts with Spoilers for Chapt. 558
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20103 Read Count: 803

[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Perceptions

I like how simple the changes are going. It is also nice to see some of the insight to the people trying to deal with the changes. Please keep this going.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2008
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Spinning Thoughts After Dark

Very nice.  I like how you are setting up some problems fown the road for them but at the same time how much they want to and there friends want them to be togther.  One thing I did notice you saying that she does not know how to cook over a open fire.  I though she rosterd boars and fish in the anima and manga.  While I know she would need to learn more it would not be all new to her.  One thing I wounder is can she mane ramon for him now that she is back.  I know it would not be instan ramon but I bet one of the things she may have learned in her time to feel close would be how to make raman from scrach and while it may not be quite right I bet should could make at lest something like it for him.

Author's Response:

There's a real difference between campfire cooking and cooking real everyday cooking, like making rice and soup and all the other everyday food on an open fire.  It does take some learning.  Noodles are harder.  They had noodles in Japan at that time, but they weren't exactly Ramen.  And they take a lot of work, and were usually only made on special occasions and holidays because of the work involved in making the noodles themselves, although with InuYasha's fondness for Ramen, I suspect Kagome, once she got the knack down, would probably make them more often than most people. 

 So I see Kagome used to being able to make a wide variety of dishes on a modern stove, but learning how to do that in a fire pit is different.  She'll get the hang of it, but it's different.  



Kagome's Diary
by Bobcat Lady Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]

Summary:

Kouga learns a painful lesson in snooping.

Categories: Fables, Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga
Genres: Drama, Songfic
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4969 Read Count: 239

[Report This] Published: July 06, 2008 Updated: July 06, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 11, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Kagome's Diary

This is a very difrent type of story but yet still very much the same.  I liked it alot.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was really scared the readers wouldn\'t like it. I only wrote this songfic because it wouldn\'t leave me alone. Everytime I heard it, I saw Kagome and Kouga. So I really appreciate your review. Hope to hear from you again soon. Bobcat Lady



Race Against Time by Roxotaku Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
 Third place winner at iyfic_contest on Livejournal. Theme was Sunrise. On InuYasha's most vulnerable night of the month, he and Kagome race home before the change. When they don't make it and the worst happens, it is up to Kagome to do something..
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1532 Read Count: 179

[Report This] Published: July 06, 2008 Updated: July 06, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Race Against Time

A nice short story.



Side Effects by Bookworm810 Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]

Summary:
After Kagome is injured by Naraku, Inuyasha blames himself and vowes that it will never happen again. He seeks out a Youkai Magician who once served his father, so as to make him stronger, but the spell used has some side effects.

May have some lemons in later chapters.

Categories: Legends
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Divergence, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15197 Read Count: 934

[Report This] Published: July 06, 2008 Updated: January 25, 2009


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Myoga and Koga

Very intresting chapter. One thing I though was since the tail helps Shippo with illusion can he now learn any to look human. Thank you for the early x-mas gift.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2009
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: A Future Tail

I am starting to wounder if Kagome will have any sideeffect from the spell.  As they get closser and closer will something bleed over to her.  Very nice work.  Please keep it up how it is going.

 

I also wanted to say I love the "As a result, Inuyasha time in Kaede’s village was surprisingly annoyance free, and amazingly enough he actually found he missed it."  I am a person that thinks a perfect life would be no fun to live in and for him and his gang this is so true I think.



Eavesdropping by xxRickyScenexx Rated: Risque starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]

Summary:
{I suck at summaries]
This story consists of:
-suspicious mothers
-hanyous
-time traveling teenage girls
-lotion
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 690 Read Count: 192

[Report This] Published: July 11, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A very cute story.



Mine by kmoaton Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
Kagome is tired and she's decided to stake her claim.  The definitions I used for force are "Anything that is able to make a big change in a person or a thing" (Encarta) and "The push or pull upon object because of the interaction of another object" (Physics tutorial).  After all, attraction is a force!

Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222 Read Count: 222

[Report This] Published: July 21, 2008 Updated: July 21, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice. While I do not see her doing this willingly I can see her SOUL saying this.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I always thought of this as what would she say maybe if she had been a little older and decided one day enough was enough!  ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I always thought of this as what would she say maybe if she had been a little older and decided one day enough was enough!  ^_^



Useless Sentiments by PseudoHanyou Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Written as a gift for my cousin on her birthday. Inuyasha must hide his true nature from Kagome.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 775 Read Count: 152

[Report This] Published: August 02, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 05, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Useless Sentiments

Very nice.  While I normly like them togther by the end this shows what he was going thow probly for a very long time whenever she came throw the well to him.




Summary:
Post Manga Chapter 558. A day alone together turns into an unexpected test of strength for Kagome.  Written as a kiriban for my 32123 viewer at deviantART.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1825 Read Count: 372

[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Strength of Heart

This is very nice.  I also know for a fact you can do things you normly can not do when you have to.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do appreciate it. Yes, it's amazing what one can do when they have to - you read about things like a woman lifting a car that fell on her husband, and you realize that even though it can't be explained, it can happen.



A Simple Gift by doggieearlover Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]

Summary:
InuYasha and Kagome have been married for a year. A hot summer night leads to a confession and understanding.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1143 Read Count: 547

[Report This] Published: August 19, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: A Simple Gift

This is a very nice story.  I could easly see them have this conversation espeacaly if Sango is now pregnate again as the child would have some one there age to play and grow up with.  Keep up the good works.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It was a combination of Sango being pregnant again, making Kagome wish she was, and InuYasha realizing that the villagers did accept them, and it wouldn't be like it was for him. By this point, they were both ready for a child of their own.



Costs by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
Kagome ponders the price of living with InuYasha. Post Manga
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Psychological, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 344 Read Count: 772

[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Costs

Very nice.  I also think it may bother her for a moment but not for long.

Author's Response: And more because it puts down InuYasha than her, I suspect...



A Slice Of Heaven by lil6ter Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]

Summary:
 

Inuyasha tries something new...and he likes it.


Categories: Myths
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Hentai, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 311 Read Count: 142

[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: August 28, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just want to know where I can buy that one. Very nice.



A Moment of Clarity by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:
Often it is only at the moment of death that a person sees their life most clearly, something Inuyasha learns first-hand one fateful moonless night.  What will Inuyasha gain from such a moment, and how will it affect his relationship with Kagome?
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11962 Read Count: 1311

[Report This] Published: September 03, 2008 Updated: September 03, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2008
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Completion

This was a very good story.  I liked it alot and hope to see more like it or a part 2 from you.  I also love how Kirara helps them so much.



Curiosity by salomewilde Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]

Summary:

The happy couple enjoys hot springs afterglow when Inuyasha starts thinking.

Originally written for the LJ community "inukagathon" with "hotsprings/pool" prompt and 500 word limit.  My first submission to Eternal Destiny.  Happy to be here.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Hentai
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 495 Read Count: 310

[Report This] Published: September 03, 2008 Updated: September 03, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity

lol Nice.

Author's Response: *curtsey*



InuYasha's Love by Roxotaku Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
Written for "angst" theme at Iyhedonism on LJ. Kagome visits Kikyos empty grave, and has anguished thoughts and memories. InuYasha finds her there, and must console her. This is an after the manga story, so Kikyo is well and truly dead...
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Hentai
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 802 Read Count: 193

[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: September 04, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 InuYasha's Love

I like how he made sure it is her he loved.



Separation by King Baka Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]

Summary:
An insidious plot leaves Inuyasha and Kagome stranded on opposite sides of the well.  How far will Inuyasha go to get her back, and will they realize how much they truly mean to each other? 
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69314 Read Count: 3623

[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2008
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Truth

This story is very good.  I am enjoying the twist and turns you have been thowing into thier lives and while you put in alot of forshadowing you do not over do it. 

 

The only thinkg I think you need to watch out for is that you have so many sepret story lines running at the moment.  While you are balancing it well and I do feel you will have them merge after awile please be very careful with it.  If you push it to many story lines I think it could ruine what is a very intresting story to read.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review; it was nice to get some constructive criticism for a change.  Most of the reviews I've gotten have been very brief and while encouraging, not very helpful.  Anyway, I have the rest of the story all planned out (it's just a matter of finding time to write it), and things will definately start narrowing down soon.  I've pushed things pretty much as far as they will go, and next chapter will resolve at least one story line...