Penname: Deathmvp [Contact]
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Member Since: June 01, 2008
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I am a lover of Inuasha and kogoma.  I can see alot of my self in inuasha so that is probly why.  And yes I am a hopless romatic.

 

Yes I know I said I plain to add a nother story but so far it is not working out well.  Sorry.

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Separation by King Baka Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]

Summary:
An insidious plot leaves Inuyasha and Kagome stranded on opposite sides of the well.  How far will Inuyasha go to get her back, and will they realize how much they truly mean to each other? 
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69314 Read Count: 3623

[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2008
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Specter of the Past

This is a very good chapter.  I like how the fight played out for Sango and how it show they are growing more togther even though they have many things to still work out.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2008
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Purity

Nice to see her kicking ass.  I am starting to wounder id Daisuke may know more about her and inuyasha's pasy (as if it is a legend) then he is letting on.

 

I can not waiti till the next part.  I am sorry that not more people have been reviewing this for you though.



Author's Response:

That's ok; it's part of the reason I'm posting on more than one website.  I appreciate every review, so thank you.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2008
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: Calm

Another good chapter.  I reley like how you mad Sango go to Inuyasha.  Even though he did not tell her anything just having it come back to her like that let her know what was in her own hart.  One of the problem many fanfiction have with these 2 couples is it goes from No No No one sentance to Yes yes yes in the very next without a reason.  You gave a very good and belivable one for this.

Author's Response: Yes, I have that same problem with many fanfictions when people bring these couples together.  Some of them really get my eyes rolling.  So I was very cognizant of that fact when I wrote this chapter, and I'm glad you picked up on it.  I try my best to keep characters 'in-character' and make the actual romantic scenes believable.  Thanks for the review.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2008
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Storm

This story just get better as you go.  I love how Inu was able to cleanse the Gem with love.  I can not wait to read more.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2008
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Reunion

This was a very good ending to the story.  I like and hate at the same time how open it is at the end though.  I like it becouse they are togther and happy at last.  I hate it becouse I want a part 2 since you left it off.  Mind you this is compleate it just can easly have more adventures since you know know the will live a long time and they can still use the well with possible troubles on both sides.

 I can not wait to see the next story you are writing.



Author's Response: Yeah, I thought I might get that reaction with the ending.  I purposefully left it open for a sequel, but as of now I have absolutely zilch for ideas and I don't know it will ever happen.  I won't stay away too long from writing; I already miss it.  But I need some time off to recharge my batteries.  Back soon!



Dark by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]

Summary:
Post Manga.  InuYasha wakes up from a nightmare to learn more about what's really important
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 624 Read Count: 740

[Report This] Published: September 05, 2008 Updated: September 05, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Dark

This is a very sweet and touching story.  I think it also hits his number 1 fear dead on the mark.



Rescued by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
InuYasha rescues Kagome for a little private quality time.  Post Manga.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 714 Read Count: 716

[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: September 08, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Rescued

This is very nice.  It shows that while not everthing is a fairytail ending she loves this life becouse he has him with her.



The Long Way Home by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
Kagome goes with InuYasha to do an errand at a neighboring village, and rediscovers something that she had forgotten. Post Manga
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 291 Read Count: 781

[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: The Long Way Home

Very cute.  I can so see them doing this.




Summary:
A story about a boy who found out that sometimes... just sometimes... dreams can come true
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language, Molestation, Religious
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2163 Read Count: 236

[Report This] Published: September 12, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed
Date: September 12, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It has a start to work well.  I can not realy say more then that at the moment becouse it is a very small start. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I only hope the first chapter (which will have some history in it will be appealing as well!)



Possibilities by Knittingknots Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
Post Manga.  Kagome has a bad day working with Kaede. comes home, and InuYasha helps her deal with it.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Drama, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1291 Read Count: 192

[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: September 14, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very sad but well writen.  This would probly be on of the hardest things for Kagome to learn to deal with taking over the work and living in the past.



Memento Mori by LuxKen27 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

She was the embodiment of virtue.  He was her forbidden temptation.  AU; rated for citrus.

**1st Place, Best Oneshot, 3rd Quarter 2008, IYFG**

**1st Place, Best Oneshot, December 2008, Feudal Association**

**Best Oneshot, Best of 2008, IYFG**


Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26753 Read Count: 2623

[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: March 23, 2009


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Memento Mori, Part 1

This is very very good.  I do hope you will do a second chapter to this.  Even in this strory you can see they need each other. 

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)  I've been convinced that I need to continue this universe, LOL, so I'm working heartily on a sequel oneshot.  In the meantime, there will be an interlude posted very soon.  I'm only sorry the text formatting got screwed up here, because it definitely adds to the feel if you know the strength of certain thoughts...



Hidden Spring by Knittingknots Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Post Manga.  InuYasha takes Kagome to a special place.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 266 Read Count: 144

[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Spring

Short but very cute.

Author's Response: Yep...a little afternoon fluff for our amusement!  LOL...



New Moon by Knittingknots Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Post  Manga, and connected to Yesterday's Tomorrows.  InuYasha and Kagome spend the first New Moon together after he returns.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441 Read Count: 118

[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: September 16, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very nice.  I realy like the line about how we learn the most when we are weak.



Heart Talk by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]

Summary:
InuYasha wishes he was better at speaking than he is so he could tell Kagome how he feels, but then finds out that Kagome hears him better than he realizes.  Post Manga
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 421 Read Count: 735

[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice.  I like how he is still nerves and she is still there to help him throw it all.



Inugami by Knittingknots Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Post Manga.  InuYasha and Kagome are on a trip to a neighboring village to deal with a problem there, and InuYasha overhears people whispering.  This puts an interesting idea in his mind.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Oneshot, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 536 Read Count: 232

[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 22, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Inugami

This was a nice one shot.



Chance Meeting by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
One day, while watching Rin and Kagome in a meadow, Sesshoumaru talks with InuYasha about Kagome's return.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Rin, Sesshomaru
Genres: Comedy, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 482 Read Count: 845

[Report This] Published: September 23, 2008 Updated: September 23, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chance Meeting

I though I posted a review on this oh well.

This is very nice.  I would love to see a second part for this taking place like a year later with rin asking Kagoma and Sesshoumaru asking Inu advise how to go foward since they are the closed to there own romantice lives.



Author's Response: I'm pretty sure there will be more Seshoumaru and Rin stuff going on in this story universe...not yet exactly sure how it will turn out, but do expect things to evolve forward!




Summary:
Inuyasha may have pushed too far during one of an argument with Kagome. He soon learn of the consequence.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Drama, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 858

[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed
Date: October 02, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this as a start to something bigger.  Call me a softy if you will but I do not see it ending like that especaly the last few lines.  This trouble may just be what they need to push them togther.



Presumptions by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
InuYasha takes a wounded Kagome to a nearby village for help.  How will the healer there deal with a hanyou and miko traveling together?  Follows my story Painful Lesson.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Drama, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1357 Read Count: 752

[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: October 07, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Presumptions

Very nice showing some the the problems Inuyasha must have always fear about being with her.  I love the last part how they reflect real fast about how there friend do not treat them like that.



Fragile by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
Post manga.  Kagome gets sick while they are away from the village.  How will InuYasha react?
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Drama, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 664 Read Count: 730

[Report This] Published: October 10, 2008 Updated: October 10, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That would be one of the worst things for him to deal with when it come to pain for her.  Demons he could fight colds there is not much he can do.



Weeds by Knittingknots Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
InuYasha and Kagome get downright dirty one day.  Whatever will Miroku think?
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 803 Read Count: 768

[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: October 11, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Weeds

Very nice way to kill some time.



Gimme some Honey, Baby by KeiChanz Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:
Baby wants some Honey... Will Honey give what Baby wants?
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Oneshot, PWP
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1600 Read Count: 694

[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: October 15, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Gimme some Honey, Baby

Very very nice pure lemon.




Summary:

Kagome, Inuyasha, Miroku, and Sango got together on Halloween to tell some stories. Kagome brought up the myth Kuchisake Onna,


Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Sango, Shippou
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Horror, Occult, Oneshot, Psychological, Songfic, Thriller, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Language, Suicide
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1420 Read Count: 172

[Report This] Published: October 16, 2008 Updated: October 16, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Kuchisake Onna, Slit-Mouth Woman

I liked the story very much.  It got me lol.  One thinkg though.  In the beginning you have Sango telling a scrry story about a bus but she would not know about busses.

Author's Response: I based the story on the present time, I should have said that, thanks for pointing it out, but I put the characters well, in this time.



Misconceptions by MadMistress65 Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
This drabble was written for the LJ Community, iyhedonism's Week 19 prompt, "Kagome's Nipples."
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145 Read Count: 154

[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: October 18, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Misconceptions

Love it.



Three Hints by MomoDesu Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Summary:
Kagome is keeping something from Inuyasha, and he doesn't like it.
Categories: Myths
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209 Read Count: 871

[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: October 20, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Three Hints

This is very cute.  I could defitly see Kagome doing this too.



Skirt by InitialA Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Summary:
Kagome digs out an old favorite...
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Sango
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Oneshot, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249 Read Count: 905

[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008


Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Skirt

Lol.  I do think it was left in the past the 3 years she was in her time so yea.

Author's Response: I went back later and looked, she definitely had it after graduation, and then it was gone during the whole final battle. This opens up an interesting alley of drabbles now, ne?