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Inuyasha braves a world of humans. Surviving and scoring are of equal importance to him and he does so in creative ways.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Romance
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sex, GenderBender/TransGender, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Rape/Non-consensual , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11975 Read Count: 492

[Report This] Published: July 22, 2014 Updated: March 18, 2016

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Want Some Help to Please Myself

This is one of my favorite one shots. I know you big time authors get requests for sequels and continuations all the time, but I'd love sneak peek into her life as a sexual slave of our favorite half demon. And nice use of a kitsune! I've never read a story like this before.

Author's Response: I'm actually working on a sequel right now =D It's gonna be a lot longer than the previous one and I think it might even have a ghost of a plot

Forget the Storm by chelseatygers Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]

Inuyasha spends all day working at the Sunset Shrine as a jack of all trades and all night in bed with the lady of the house. It's the ideal life for him until a girl comes back from summer camp and changes everything. Now he finds himself struggling to survive with her rather than dying without her.
Categories: Legends
Characters: Ayame, Hojo, Inu no Tashio, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jaken, Jii-chan, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs Higurashi, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Souta
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Family, Fluff, Hentai, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Blood/Gore, Character Death, Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Pedophilia, Implied Rape, Language, Male Dom/Female Dom, Masturbation/SoloM/F, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Rape/Non-consensual , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Suicide, Underage Pregnancy, Voyeurism
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105122 Read Count: 1740

[Report This] Published: March 14, 2015 Updated: December 29, 2015

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

Alright. I'm usually one of those assholes who never review. Like, I don't even know how to rate this chapter. I selected 10 hoping that means I love it long time, but I really have no clue. And I meant to review joy especially after reading you were coming to my state and I wanted to tell you it isn't all farmland. But I just had to let you know, I love your stories! And I'm so excited to read this one. Yours in Ohio.

Author's Response:

Thank yoooou! =D Haha, usually I only review stories I really, really like or stories I really, really hate or incomplete stories where I like to be a total jerk about the wasted potential. I really hope you like this one, although I feel it moves too fast in the beginning, but I get excited and rush to get to the meat of the story almost every time.

Yeah, I've never been to Ohio. I drove across Arizona, New Mexico, Texas, Oklahoma, Arkansas, Lousisiana, Tennessee, Alabama, and I've been all over California. I'm gonna be starting school in Ohio either this August or this January, it depends on family junk. I just get really uncomfortable in other states because it feels like I've been living in another country my entire life without knowing it. Everyone speaks and acts differently and the products in the stores are different and so are the restaurants and it's so foreign to me.  I've lived less than 10 minutes from the beach my entire life and now I'm going to a place where it snows and I totally hate the snow and I'm freaking out about it, haha. Also I'm from Orange County and once people hear that they start grilling me about the show The OC (which I've never seen) and asking if I surf. Just no, hahaha.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review!!!

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signed
Date: May 12, 2015
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: The Kampf is Real

Yeah I totally forgot to vote in my review of BLT (haha). And this chapters title is hilarious. The kampf is real! I have a husband and just one child. We both work full time and I went to a website today where you can sell your hair. No you didn't misread. Sell. Your. Hair. And apparently if you've never colored your hair, it's called "virgin".....just to make some extra cash because babies are expensive. Daycare is more than our house payment. Maybe inuyasha should look into it. If I had to choose one fanfic , I'd say this one. But I like all your stories and I'm an indecisive individual. The question, "Where should we eat?" Has almost resulted in divorce.

Poor naive Kagome. As a new mom she has no idea what's she getting into. And I don't mean that traditional no sleep, diapers, spit up. I mean having a baby with someone who doesn't want the baby is the WORST thing you can do. I see it in some of my friends relationships. I hope he comes around.

And I really thought the Hojo thing was going to happen. He's such a little twerp he would have totally offered to help her. Maybe big bro sesshy can offer some financial assistance. ...hahahaha

Author's Response:

Haha, I remember in Little Women where Jo had to sell her hair and I only found out a few yeaars ago that it was actually still a thing. I've honestly looked into selling my used panties on the internet to weird people. You can make a LOT of money and all you have to do is be gross. There's even a Cracked article about it now. I might still do it. And my brother says you can sell your own poo. Really. For science. I don't even know.

Wow, I didn't know daycare could be that expensive! I never even had a babysitter growing up because my grandparents always filled in even if they had to drive the 7 hours to our house to do so.  This is why businesses/universities should provide daycare to their employees/students at minimal to no cost. 

Yep, Kagome's  gonna have a lot of growing up to do, but Inuyasha's going to have even more. This is actually the first fic of mine where I've had comments telling me they wished Kagome miscarried/got an abortion. Like woah, calm down, guys. She hasn't even known about her pregnancy a full week yet, haha. 

I was toying with the idea of actually writing out the Hojo thing, but I only like his character when I make him gay or crazy, and he's not allowed to be either of those things in this fic. I know it's going against the holy law of creative writing to introduce a plot point and then not explore it, but I'm not a liberal arts major so I don't even care, haha.

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2015
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Hide and Go

Hola! So I missed the like what, 2 months? I did try though! I went to the website and couldn't see the poll. So I thought , maybe you need to be a member! I even created an account and still nothing! I followed you as a
favorite author and hoped you didn't think I was a creepy stalker. Then a light bulb went off and I thought, hmm maybe I should try from my computer instead of my phone. Mobile sites and
all. But I got too lazy. Back to the story, im reading

it!!!!! It is a bit depressing but I am familiar with the roller coaster of emotions. I think my last review was suggesting sesshomaru could help.....boy did
you prove me wrong! Then he gets sexually
abused, she gets anally raped, oy vey! I recently gave birth so I sympathize with Kagome a bit more. You truly do take on this new instinct when
you have kids. Like, this will sound mean but I almost feel stronger. If my husband were to leave me, Im living for someone else. You can't just fall
apart. I'm the food source-the everything to this
tiny person. And I will say I thought kikyo was Mrs. Higurashi! Again, blame the hormones but I kind of hated him for banging her and her for eventually liking it. Or at least stopped being so compliant. This is a inu/kag website but if she messes around with Koga, I'll be on board. And I do hope that baby gets his demon back. Maybe kick his dad's ass! Next story: hajime gets his groove back. At least tell me we are on the upswing.....until she finds out about Miss.

Author's Response: If following means stalking, then I am a mega creep, haha. I follow like pretty much everyone, it's ridiculous. Let's just say everything before this moment in the story was smooth sailing compared to where we're gonna go. Oh yeah, things get out there. My beta even suggested I make 2 separate storie, but I was like nah, man, let's just go CRAZY and lo, I did.

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2015
Chapter number: 15
Title: Chapter 15: Woo Her or Rue It

Aww. What a sweet chapter! I felt like I was holding my breath the entire time. I kept thinking, this is it. He's going to sigh Kikyou's name in his sleep, he's going to get a call-she's pregnant. Oh lord, no!! Do you like how I just automatically think he's going to ruin the honey moon? And is she breast feeding? Hope girl brought her pump. Engored breasts are not pleasant! And she is handling sharing a room nicely. That makes me think she does want them to work this out. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: She's still breast feeding, but I kinda gloss over that and didn't include details of like the pump and everything. Haha, with the way everything's been going, I wouldn't be surprised if he did something to screw it up. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signed
Date: August 29, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

Nooooo!! Ok I knew she wasn't just going to transfer and his infidelity was going to disappear. Damn, Inu! You made one baby, already. Wrap it up! Well, at least they're mates......ugh. poor Kagome. Could Inuyasha care less about hijame? I hope that baby gets his super powers back. His half brother will totally be able to kind know his ass. If he's born. ...... this story has me in a tailspin. Can mates cheat on each other? Or is like they only have feelings for each other? Is it mean I want his dad to just "fix" this? Ok I know it's mean. Kikyou did nothing but her job and what was forced of her. She's actually the victim. But I still hate her. She's a thorn in my perfect couples side!!!

Author's Response: Haha, I think Toga wants to see Inuyasha try and fail at fixing his relationship[s] and then he'll step in only when begged, though we both know Inuyasha's not the begging kind. We'll see what happens next, though. We've still got quite the rollercoaster left to go

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2015
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: When it Rains

What!! Man alive do I feel like a fool! Here I am, poor Kagome. Inuyasha cheated. He's a jerk. And she did the same thing! Maybe if I could forget the rape thing I would say what she did was worse as she was going to start a new relationship. It wasn't just sex. But when she reminded him she had to wait until she was healed to have sex, it reminded me he anally raped his wife. Unless she was just talking about being healed after having a baby....either way, he still sucks.
And Miroku!?!? What the hell. And can a mother refuse DNA testing forever? I get not wanting it before the baby is born. That needle is big! But once he's born ...human? Wont it be obvious. I guess that logic doesn't work because Hajime is human
..for now....:) I want that baby to be even more demon than his father. I want him to be super jealous of this baby even more. Because he's the only character I've loved and hasn't let me down. #teamhajime

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2015
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: Fool for Love words...wait. I found some. What! Ok I feel like I mention baby Hajime in almost all of my reviews. Were you like, oh boy she isn't going to like this chapter. I don't know how'd I react in seeing a mad woman suffocating my child. I like to think I'd bust that bitch in two, but maybe I'd just call for my husband. I thought maybe some pent up priestess power was going to come out from either one of them (mom or baby) or you know my personal favorite, baby H gets his demon back. But daddy Inuyasha to the rescue! Worked out for the best. I'm going to pretend everything is fine with the baby and the oxygen he lost didn't affect his brain even if you write otherwise. My heart can't take it.
Let's talk about Kikyo! Before this chapter I disliked her. Then I felt awful! She didn't want to do this to Inuyasha! She didn't say the baby wasn't his but I got the feeling it wasn't by the way she said they were ruining his life over KOGA'S crush. Then Koga rapes her. And I'm like,no! This Kikyo is good too! But ok, if life hands you shitty cards-that's sad. I feel bad for you. But you do not get to turn crazy and start killing people! Let alone innocent babies! You're pregnant you monster! Ugh. It's going to get better right?

Author's Response: Haha, actually, while I was editing this, I thought of you and was wondering what your review would be like. I'm not one for baby violence, but this scene just popped into my head and I had to include it. I would like to have had the truth come out and Kikyo would be saved and understood and vindicated, but then again I like the drama. Kikyo was under so much pressure, and we know how she reacts when she's stressed (she freaking kills people/attempts to kill people before inevitably falling off a cliff). I will assure you that Hajime is okay and possibly has some dormant demon blood in him that prevented any long-lasting effects of his suffocation.


Kagome is a freshman at university pursuing her love of history when tragedy strikes and she is forced to start living in her car. Taking advantage of her distress, her favorite professor makes her an offer she just can't refuse...

Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hentai, PWP, Romance, Yuri
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, BDSM, Bisexuality, Blood/Gore, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Homosexual/Gay Sex, Language, OOC/Out of Character, Oral/Hand job, Peg , Sensitive/Controversial Subject Matter, Threesome
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44332 Read Count: 918

[Report This] Published: April 20, 2015 Updated: March 30, 2016

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2015
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Mysophilia

Another story!!! Although it makes to me nervous to read any uncompleted fanfic. (Turnabout is fair play gave me trust issues) Your track record speaks for itself. And I had to google the chapter title and now I'm wondering where her clothes really went! And am I suppose to review every chapter? I'm the worst at reviewing. I'm one of those jerks who made inugrrl (too many r's? Not enough?) go private. I'm trying to not be like that anymore. And I like leaving you reviews because it kind of feels like a conversation. In a totally not stalker-ish way. ..... anyway awesome story. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Ugh, I never read any uncompleted fics until Movie House Hanyou, and that one fucked me up BIG TIME. How do you end something on a cliff hanger and just never update again?! Freaking maniacs... So yeah, haha, I totally get what you mean. I only post stories that have at least been outlined completely, although I do frequently change outlines on a whim and take the plot somewhere else entirely. Like I said a while back, I pretty much have nothing going on this year other than writing, so have no fear, there will be many updates, hahaha.

I actually never reviewed anything until I started writing. Still, I only started reading Inuyasha fanfiction in like August 2013 and I started writing in October 2013, so it wasn't very long, but now that I know how important reviewing is, I always do it. I think it's perfectly fine to not review every chapter, just whenever you feel like you wanna share your thoughts/reactions or make any sort of comment. Otherwise we just have a bunch of "lol update soon plz" posts cluttering everything up, haha.  I'm sad Inugrrl (not clear on the amount of r's either) made her stories private since I only got into Inufiction recently and I think she went private when I was still in middle school, haha. And now I can never read them and I'm so freaking curious like wow.

A lot of writers think for some reason that just because they post a story they're entitled to so many reviews, but I always thought that was kind of psycho behavior. I do get a little hurt when I get all these reviews one chapter and the next slim to none, but if that's how it's gonna be, that's fine. What's even worse, though, is seeing all those stories with a dumb plot and terrible spelling and grammar get like twice as many reviews and more as my most popular fic, but I'll keep my jealousy on the down low, hahaha.

Thanks for reviewing!  And for liking the conversing, because I tend to talk a lot, haha.

Reviewer: alejandra2432 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2015
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Troilism

Dang! Another chapter title that is now saved in my Google searches. This was awesome. I'm usually not a fan of the love triangles. Well that's not true. I'm not a fan of making Kagome this love sick fool who let's a guy string her along because he can't make a decision. And I know her character is a forgiving one, but sometimes I wish I could read something like, "Oh you can't choose between us. Well I'm feeling generous today. I'll choose for you. Her. You pick her. Peace out" of course also in my little fantasy he realizes what a fool he's been. This is getting way off topic. What I'm trying to say is I love the direction this is taking. I've never read a fanfic like this. Is Kikyo the new inuyasha? Or even better, Kagome? Your mind must be a very scary wonderful.

Author's Response:

Haha, when I got the idea for how to title the chapters, I literally just went to google and repeatedly searched a list of paraphilias. Probably freaked the NSA out a bit.

My guilty pleasure is making Inuyasha a total jerk. He's often mislabeled as one in the anime/manga, but I really take it overboard in my fics. One giant frustration I had with him in the original series though was the fact that he was very indecisive. He's with Kikyo and he prefers Kikyo, he's with Kagome and he prefers Kagome. Crazy, but very human. I always felt that the choice was made for him, something he felt very relieved about. The entire time I binge watched it, I was hoping just once he'd make this big romantic gesture and lose his cool with Kikyo and tell her to fall off a cliff for real this time. But it never happened ='[

So now since I can manipulate the characters to my will, I'm changing it up. No more cat fights! Now Inuyasha's going to feel like the odd one out. We'll see how it goes.