Penname: psyco_chick32 [Contact]
Real Name: Kim
Member Since: April 07, 2008
Membership Status: Member
Bio:

I currently write only for the InuYasha universe, though I am a fan of many other anime, games and manga. Right now, my favorites include Detective Conan, Sailor Moon (always a goodie) and Slayers, just to name the other top three.

I'm a strong canon-shipper when it comes to InuYasha. You'll rarely, if ever, see me stray outside Inu/Kag, Mir/San and Kagu/Sess. Occasionally I'll write Rin/Sess, but it will be where Rin is grown. I tend to see her more in the daughter role than a mate role. Even when it comes to non-canon pairings, I'll still have InuYasha and Kagome together. I just feel they belong with each other... InuYasha says it himself in the manga!  (Hence, my love for this site!)

I promise you that I will never leave a story unfinished.
I love to chat with my reviewers. If you have questions, comments, or even flames feel free to leave me a message. I like to hear all sides of a discussion, though I am a debater, so if you flame me, expect me to respond.

On a more personal level: you can call me Kim. I live in Miami with my husband and have a cat, though I am a major animal lover and adore anything fuzzy and cuddleable. I work as a web news producer for the local CBS affiliate here in South Florida and enjoy my job immensely.

Want to know more? Feel free to send me a message!

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Nigousan by bluezinthos Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]

Summary:

A wife he loves, a mistress he took by law, and a scandal that could change everything he thought was perfect in his life.
Categories: Legends

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou
Genres: Alternate Universe
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 3452

[Report This] Published: February 13, 2007 Updated: February 07, 2009


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: February 07, 2009
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I was *so thrilled* to see this update, I really could've danced around the house (but I wasn't at home, I was at work, and my coworkers would've though me even more insane than they already do).  "My Soul", huh?  That's... intriguing!  And poor InuYasha, Kikyou's all upset but she knew what she was getting into when she married him (well, maybe not 100% knew, but STILL...)



Strength by inufan625 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]

Summary:
COMPLETE: When InuYasha arives in Kagome's room battered and broken, clutching the Shikon no Tama tightly in one hand, and the world outside seems to have gone mad, Kagome will find herself tested in ways she never imagined, and in the end will learn what true strength really is.


Categories: Legends

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60273 Read Count: 13028

[Report This] Published: March 17, 2008 Updated: October 18, 2014


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2008
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Seperation Anxiety

Noooo, he can't have to wait 500 years to see her again!!!



Swallowing Your Pride by Rinoa Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]

Summary:

Kagome is a 21 year old woman without a job.

There are only so many times you can ask your friends to pay your rent and bills for you, so now she would have to Swallow her Pride and work for, what she believed to be, a horrible man. After being fired from her last job for her outspoken ways would she be able to hold herself back and do as commanded or would she lose this job too, along with her home, car and everything she had ever worked for in her life? Could she really change who she was, and in truth, did she really want to?


Categories: Legends
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Hentai
Warnings: Drug Use, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66385 Read Count: 6814

[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: August 23, 2009


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: February 25, 2009
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: What To Wear?

*giggles*  I find it amusing that Shippou's gay.

I'd love to see Kagome give InuYasha the cold shoulder at the Ball... that asshole, thinking only of himself and nobody else.  She'll learn him alright - with a sharpy pointy heel to the groin!  :)



Author's Response:

Ha-Ha! You're not far off with that assumption...they say don't get mad get even! >8D I've never done a gay Shippo before and I needed an extra character so I though "Why not?!" he was a giggle to write!

Yup, Inu is an asshole! But we'll see if he can make amends...I doubt it! XD

Thanks for commenting!

~Rinoa~





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: February 26, 2009
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Off To A Good Start

*grins* can't wait for more.... good for her, showing off her hot bod.

Now let's see if he takes the bait...

I'm intrigued to find out what's up with Rin and Sesshomaru, tho...



Author's Response:

*Grins back*

I am still working on the fine details of the Rin/Sessh story line so hopefully you will find out soon...they are proving a tricky pair for me!

Hey if you got a hot bod why not flaunt it! I would if I were her...As for Inu, well that fish WILL take the bait! hehe

Thanks for reading and commenting 8D

~Rinoa~



Metamorphosis by King Baka Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]

Summary:
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"Sometimes in the winds of change we find our true direction." An unusual youkai attack transforms Kagome's very being. Can she come to terms with her new self, and can Inuyasha accept, perhaps even love, the new Kagome?


Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Language
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 387448 Read Count: 42696

[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: December 02, 2010


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Cats and Dogs

This is very interesting!  I agree with you that a lot of the time, it's just too easy of a transformation.

I giggled a lot at the idea of Kagome purring and InuYasha finding that amusing.  I'm very anxious to see where you take this story!



Author's Response: Thank you.  The purring thing was spur of the moment, but I'm thinking of ways to work it back into the story later.  A lot of the cat vs. dog things are amusing to me, except perhaps that cursed joke.  I know Inuyasha and Kagome are tired of it ;)





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2008
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Cats and Dogs

Oooh, and on that note - I'm super-excited to see how Kouga and Kikyou react.  I get the feeling Kouga's not going to be too happy ("his woman" is now a "disgusting half-breed", ya know) and Kikyou will probably be fairly upset, too.  ("You're corrupting our SOUL!")

Author's Response: Perhaps...or perhaps not...





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Chapter number: 27
Title: Chapter 27: Settling Her Debt

Awwwww!  InuYasha's reactions toward Shippou were so perfect - I like how he was flat-out honest about having mated Kagome, rather than a lot of fics where he refuses to mention it.

*giggles* The "virile" commentary was giggle-worthy, too.

 ^_^ I look forward hopefully to any foreshadowing of the "letting his guard down in Kagome's time" line...

Sorry the review is late in coming and short - it's been one thing after another and I feel like there's just not enough hours in the day anymore!  Congrats on finding summer-time!!



Author's Response:

Don't worry about the short review, and it's only been like a day since I posted the chapter.  I'm trying to take the middle road with Shippo.  There are some fics where he and Inuyasha are just at each other's throats, and there are others were Inuyasha goes into "father mode" soon after mating with Kagome.  Believe me, no one is thinking of Inuyasha as Shippo's father at this point.  No one is even thinking of Kagome as the kit's mother.  In my opinion, she has a pseudo-parental relationship with Shippo, but it's subtle.  Perhaps eventually he will become an adopted son more "officially," but not now.  And Inuyasha probably just sees the kid as someone under his protection and care.  But as I said in the chapter, they know they have to make an extra effort to get along now, instead of battling constantly for Kagome's attention. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Showdowns

OMG NO!!!

That is probably one of the most painful cliffhangers I have ever read a chapter end on.

I mean... OMG!

It was so awesome to see Kagome actually beat off the Damsel-in-Distress mode... and now, what, InuYasha wants her to go back to that?  Oh MAN does he have some explaining to do... she'd never ask him to change for her...

Somehow I'm thinking it has to do with him wanting to protect her (I'm hoping, anyway) from the stigma of being a hanyou... but on the other hand, I get the feeling Kagome may not want to hear his reasoning after that...



Author's Response:

I know, I know, but love writing cliffhangers.  It's probably a little sadistic, but...

"she'd never ask him to change for her..."  That's a good point, one I hadn't thought of yet.  I'll definitely be sure to bring it up next chapter.  Thanks for the review. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Chapter number: 19
Title: Chapter 19: Showdowns

Having slept on it - I feel so much worse for Kagome.  As a human, all he does is disparange her, make her feel weak, and make sarcastic comments about who she is and what little she can do.  She hears all his comments about how he hates being a "weak human" and everything...

Then she says she wants to stay a hanyou, and he basically tells her he doesn't like her like that, either.  Even though part of me knows he's basically hard-wired to protect her, the other part of me can't help but feel soooo sorry for Kagome!  Way to give the girl a freakin' complex, InuYasha!!  Hell, even if he explained himself, I know if I were in her shoes, I'd have a hard time biting down on a sarcastic "How do I know you're not lying now?" response ever time he said something after that.

:( All the fanfics I'm reading right now are, like, depressing!!!  I swear it's some sort of club I'm not a part of, teaming up.  "Angst, now!"

(Seriously, keep up the fantastic work.  I'm so into this story I actually *dreamed* about it!)



Author's Response: Wow, two in a row?  Thanks!  And you actually dreamed about the story?  The funny thing is that I slept like a log.  I'm glad people are getting so into the story.  I swear, within hours I had recieved at least a dozen reviews, all condemning Inuyasha.  I've vowed to not give anything away for next chapter, so no comment on your predictions.  In my experience, angst just makes the eventual happy ending that much more satisfying.  Again, don't be surprised if you see your thoughts put in next chapter.  It's part of the reason I love getting reviews like yours; they give me good ideas! 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2009
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: Shatter

Oh, I think I understood InuYasha's point of view from the very beginning.  He's hard-wired to protect Kagome, and he thought he was doing so... that doesn't mean that (like he realized) he didn't hurt Kagome more than any mean-spirited villagers put together.

That being said... I'm somewhat concerned that even though her heart pretty much shattered, it'll be one quick rescue and she'll give in and turn human for him and forgive him and everything will be hunky-dory (not that I truly think you will, but I've been reading a lot of crap lately... you have no idea how thrilled I was to see you updated.  YAY for awesome stories!!).  I hope she strings him along a little while and lets him know just how much he hurt her... like she thought, she'd never ask him to change.  He gives her crap about being a human (even if they're further in-between, they're still there) and now insists he lied about accepting her as a hanyou... honestly, I love my husband to death, but if he told me he hated me one way and then told me he couldn't stand me another, I'd be hard-pressed to believe he wasn't lying when he's all "Oh noez really I do love you just the way you are!"

Personally, right now - I think Kikyou and InuYasha deserve each other.  "Change to make me happy! so the world will accept you!"

(Again - I really do see his reasoning... and you've captured his "foot-in-mouth-ten-minutes-after-the-fact characterization perfectly.  I guess I'm just bitter - too many lying jacakss ex-boyfriends for me?  *giggles*)



Author's Response: Wow, what a review!  And no matter how I respond to it, I'm bound to give some plotlines away.  I don't want to do that, so I guess you'll have to content yourself with a short response.  That said, this issue isn't going to be resolved quickly with a hunky-dory ending; it's going to linger for a little while.  I don't think Kagome really has it in her to "punish" him too much, but I can guarantee the hurt will remain.  I fully understand reading bad fanfiction...you finish a section and raise your arms above your head screaming "WTF!"  Hopefully I won't make you do that.  You don't seem too bitter to me; this is serious stuff here!  Anyone would be hurt by what Inuyasha said.  Thanks for the review. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: March 12, 2009
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Picking up the Pieces

First of all - I'm honored you put Clinging as your recommended fanfiction of the week over at Mediaminer!  Thank you so much!

Now - onto the fic! (warning: this could get long!) I thought Kagome's reaction after she called out InuYasha's name was *perfect*.  And OMG being paralyzed like that (not even able to talk) would drive me *nuts*... I can just imagine what Kagome's thinking.  After all, she's ALWAYS on the move!

I think you're right about hanyou skin - after all, InuYasha was fine inside the sage's belly (until the sun set) and more okay than the others inside the stone ogre's stomach.  *squirmsquirm* OMG OMG OMG ACID DOES NOT BELONG ON THAT PART OF THE BODY DO NOT WANT!  Holy mother of GOD that would SUCK SO MUCH.

*giggles* I shouldn't find InuYasha's discomfiture at having to wash her THERE so incredibly amusing... but I did.  But oh GODS when I thought about how much PAIN that would cause... hell, that'd be enough to put me off guys for a while, that's for sure.  "Hey baby..." "No thanks.  Last time a guy touched me there I wanted to die a very quick death.  Let's just cuddle."  *shiftshift*

"It’d be pretty shitty to drown in a bathtub after surviving getting fuckin’ eaten alive."  LOLOL  That's so incredibly in-character of him... and really true, too.  And shoving his foot even further down his gullet... no wonder InuYasha's a man of few words.  It seems when he opens his mouth, he's either cussing or chomping on ramen or his foot, hehe.

The ending was very well-written, too.  She believes him but can't necessarily forgive him for those comments... and it's not surprising.

Keep up the great work - now I'm anxious to learn where InuYasha's goin'!



Author's Response: Oh, and you even deleted the other one for me.  Thanks.  Let's hope for the sake of my readers that Kagome doesn't swear off guys.  Then we'd never get a lemon!  I'm glad you like Inuyasha's characterization; most of the stuff that comes out of his mouth just gets him into trouble, but he had his moments...  Of course, usually after a good moment he goes and screws things up again, like leaving in the middle of the night.  I wonder where he's going?  I left a few clues, but so far only one person has guessed it. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Chapter number: 21
Title: Chapter 21: Picking up the Pieces

Having re-read this fic today, I'm trying to figure out where InuYasha could be going or what he could be doing.  Part of me thinks he might be headed to Totosai's, but I wonder if anything made with his fang would work, since it would be to seal *her* blood.  Although technically he's stronger than her...

Hmmmm... I have to go read those chapters again in the manga, lol!

And hah, I'm your 100th reviewer here!  Congrats on a great response to a great fic!!

(I still shift uneasily at the whole acid thing... ow ow ow ow ow!)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  ED is officially the best place to get reviews.  I get more readers on other sites, but nothing like the response I've gotten here.  I love the feedback because it helps me to critique my own writing and figure out if I'm getting my points across to the readers. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2009
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Assumptions and Revelations

(Warning: Long rambly review ahead)

Gah!  Just when I thought the angst was going to end, it's back in full force!

Then again, I can see both sides, so I just kind of feel bad for all of them... InuYasha's upset because his friends jumped to conclusions, and just when he finally had an epiphany and was able to say good-bye to the past, and look forward to the future, and now it's like that future is turning him away.

On the other hand, it's time for InuYasha to do some thinking... his friends only find that easy to believe because as far as I can tell, he didn't swing by the village at all to say things were okay so heck, Sango could still be mad about the "I lied" incident... also, they wouldn't have such an easy time jumping to those conclusions if he hadn't had such an easy time leaving their group before for that same purpose.  And of course, he leaves rather than plead his case (or argue it, as the case may be), which makes it look to Kagome like he IS going "back" to Kikyou...

I think I'd have to side with the group on this one after looking at it (though I feel bad for InuYasha).  The last one made sense, he was being "cruel to be kind" in a sense.  And this time he was off doing something nice, but he KNOWS Kagome is still stinging from what was basically his rejection, he admitted to Daichi (who I adore, by the way) that Kagome might not have forgiven him completely yet...

The group needs to learn never to jump to conclusions when it comes to InuYasha, and I'm sure the aftermath of this could help cement that... but the repercussions of running off to Kikyou's beck and call are coming back to bite him in the ass this time.

Just to let you know - I thought InuYasha's revelation was perfect.  Not too sudden, very careful... now I just hope he can hold on to that revelation and have a smaller one... perhaps one that can bring the whole group together?  *crosses fingers*

I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN HANDLE THE SUSPENSE!  *cries*

Author's Response:

I love long reviews!  You really captured all the conflicting emotions I was going for here.  And don't worry, all will be explained next chapter, though I suspect you already have a good idea what's going on.  Just remember that both Inu and Kag are hotheads; they prefer to fight or run before thinking clearly when it comes to each other.  Thanks for the review. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Chapter number: 23
Title: Chapter 23: A Fresh Start

Aw, I'm glad they could come to an agreement like that.  There's probably some bumps in the future (with these two, there will always be bumps, LOL), but starting anew will be nice... I wonder how well they can, though, if InuYasha's still hurt about things - they both have to let go for this to work.

I'd like to see how Sango's faring - I'm thinking her irritation with Miroku certainly didn't help matters when it came to InuYasha and his alleged time spent with Kikyou; one person used to a man wandering off and propositioning other women will assume the same thing of others.

:) Keep up the fantastic work - I was thrilled to wake up and see the new chapter... and I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: Oooooooo, another great idea!  I definitely need to work Sango and the others into next chapter.  I hadn't thought that maybe her experience with Miroku would make her more suspicious of Inuyasha, but it makes perfect sense.  Thanks for the review. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Chapter number: 25
Title: Chapter 25: Frustration, Part 2

OMG I just realized I never reviewed the last chapter!  Every time I started to leave a review, I got called away (stupid, stupid work and real life...)

So this review will make up for TWO chapters at once!

First of all - OMG THE FRUSTRATION.  THE TENSION.  IT'S SO HAWT BUT IT MAY KILL ME.

You know, I have to give you extra kudos for your non-destruction of Shippou.  So many people get upset as to the way he acts, but not only is he a child... he's a male child in Japan!  Of course he gets the love!

OMG Kouga... You get even MOAR cookies (products of MY imagination this time) for not having InuYasha just start coming up and blurting out his love in some sort of poetry.  Your characterization of him is so incredibly fantastic; I'm envious, really.

Overall - this is fantastic.  Absolutely awesome and you get a billion points of rocking it out.



Author's Response:

Don't you just hate real life?  I completely agree with you about how Shippo gets treated sometimes in fanfiction.  He's a kid, AND Kagome absolutely adores him.  Did she ever reprimand him in the anime/manga?  Inuyasha...poetry?  I can't even imagine that, and my imagination is pretty good!  I could see him maybe blurting it out in anger, but decided to go a different route this time.  He's actually cognizant of what he's saying, which makes it all the more powerful (even though he went a little wishy-washy on us).  Thank you kindly for the compliments; I really appreciate them. 





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2009
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: New Beginnings

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *fangirl squee*

*breathes heavily*  Okay.  Okay.  I think I'm fairly good now that I got that out of my system...

Whoooo boy... *snickers*  InuYasha's reaction to everybody ELSE'S reaction was priceless.  "I, er.. um... THIS IS STUPID" *runs away*  It was so very HIM and awesome and Kagome's all "Huh?"

Poor Kouga.  He knows the truth, even if he won't accept it!  *snickers*  Watching Kagome hand Miroku her ass was fairly fabulous, as well.  I completely understood why Sango didn't get pissed with Miroku about Kagome - she knows he's not interested in her friend.  It's like when my hubby hits on my single friends - I know it's in jest.  It's when he's eyeing the beach babes in string bikinis that the claws come out...

*clears throat*  Ah, er... anyway.  Yeah.  Story!  *sniffles*  Poor Kagome can't kill the bunny... hell, I know I wouldn't be able to!  They're so fluffy and lively and adorabubble and who could kill a bunneh?!  InuYasha's description of his childhood made a lot of sense and I just wanted to reach through the computer and hug him but I think Kagome's reaction was better.

I think you approached the lemon soooo very tastefully, too.  It always drives me INSANE when writers (in the canon-verse) make InuYasha out to be some sort of sex God - it's not like he really has had a lot of opportunities to get the sex lecture...

*imagines Sesshoumaru sitting InuYasha down, "When a man loves a woman... or is really, really horny..." and dies*

It was a fantastic "first time" and makes sense that Kagome would kind of initiate things - it's not like sex was that popular of a topic in that time period anyway (especially compared with now!) so overall - I really can't stop gushing.

And sorry if this makes no sense - I'm really trying but am kind of dying of an indiscernable illness and am stuck in bed and my meds are kind of making me really loopy.  It's not a good combo really... if I feel like crap and am tired, why does my medicine make me hyper?  I don't have the energy to get rid of the energy (if that makes any sense)...

And ew, law school exams for the lose.  I have a close friend at GW and she's taking exams right now and I get the feeling she wants to throw her computer (and books) out the window... good luck!!



Author's Response: Your review made a lot of sense (and it was funny as hell too!)  Oh, holy cow...you just gave me the best idea for a one-shot!  Thanks!  Part of Kagome's difficulty was killing the rabbit, but a lot of it was just killing *anything.*  For someone whose never hunted in his life, I know it would be difficult for me, especially if I had to do it with my BARE HANDS.  I'm glad you enjoyed the lemon.  I was really conscious this time of making it a "first time."  I tried to bring out the conflict between inexperience and desire.  I'm always a little nervous when I post a lemon, just because I have to put so much effort into writing them.  It's so difficult to not repeat myself, and avoid just telling about the act when I really want to *show* it.  That's what all those natural metaphors are for, but then you have to be careful not to overuse them too.  In summation: writing this lemon was tough, so it's very gratifying to hear people liked it.  I hope you feel better soon, and you can stop taking those hyper-loopy meds of yours ;)




Summary:
Kagome is a shy, young woman with a troubled past. InuYasha is a hanyou, who also leads a troubled life. Kagome stumbles over InuYasha, lying unconscious in an alley, and through an act of kindness takes him home. What will be the results of her unselfishness?

The story InuYasha as well as its characters, belong to Rumiko Takehashi. The story, For the Love of a Child, belongs to me, Bobcat Lady. I receive no monies writing this fic, only reviews from my readers.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 280459 Read Count: 10058

[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: December 17, 2010


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: November 16, 2008
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Clash! InuYasha vs. Sango, the Slave Driver

Oh, dear!  I wonder what Kikyou has up her sleeve... And awww it's good to see InuYasha happy.

Author's Response: Indeed.  What could KiKyo be scheming?  And will InuYasha's happiness last?  Hope to hear from you again soon!  Bobcat Lady





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Chapter number: 22
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Confrontation

I have to be honest with you - I'm very interested in this story.  That being said, the whole thing is really starting to drag out.  Nobody is learning anything; everybody is repeating themselves.  Kagome won't trust InuYasha.  Kikyou wants InuYasha.  InuYasha swears he loves Kagome but won't trust her... even though he wants her to trust him.  Sango and Miroku want Kagome happy but also like InuYasha but are more devoted to Kagome.

Is anybody going to put their foot down anytime soon about anything?  It's hard to think that anything will change if nothing ever evolves.  I mean - I'll admit, I can pretty much guess what's going to happen next chapter.

(Sorry, I know the review isn't all raving and such... and I know how frustrating it can get.  But I felt like if nobody ever spoke up, nobody would ever get an outside view, ya know?)

Now, that being said - I think you do a fantastic job with characterization, and I am interested in seeing where this goes eventually.



Author's Response: Don't be sorry, psyco_chick32.  I like reading the opinions of my readers and yes I know it may be dragging at this point, but I'm hoping the next few chapters will help you understand everyone.  Thanks the great review and Happy New Year!  Bobcat Lady



Sword Envy by King Baka Rated: Provocative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]

Summary:

They've got it bad...


Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sesshomaru
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 611 Read Count: 247

[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: November 18, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Sword Envy

*cracks up*

I giggled.   I am a big fan of innuendo, and this rocked my tiny little world.

(and now my co-worker is staring at me all confusedly!) 



Author's Response: That will teach you to read fanfiction at work!  Though I can't say I've never read it in class...and I would have done it at work too, except I didn't work in a cubicle. 



College Days by pooky11602 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]

Summary:
Kagome leaves her abusive and cheating boyfriend. While living with her brother she stumbles onto a room for rent in someone elses apartment. The person owning the apartment just happens to be our fav hanyou, Inu!  Will romance blossom or will they be destined to be 'just roommates'...
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Other, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Explicit Sex, Language, Rape/Non-consensual
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68179 Read Count: 14969

[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2011


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: December 06, 2008
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Meetings and Thunderstorms

This seems like a really great start to a story!  Keep up the good work and update soon!



Let's Play by KeiChanz Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]

Summary:
"If I didn't know any better..." he suddenly rumbled, leaning forward to graze his lips across her cheek.  "...I'd say you liked being chased, Kagome." It's playtime; let the games begin.
Categories: Fairy Tales
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Fluff, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13794 Read Count: 1200

[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2011


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Let's Play

Oh that was HAWWWT... and then it just *ENDED*

*sob*

This could be a rather fun little collection :-)   I look forward anxiously to seeing more!!




Summary:
Companion story to Setting the Record Straight, Inuyasha takes a stance on Kagome's place in his life.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2635 Read Count: 349

[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2009


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Acknowledging His Choice

*hugs* I have had an absolutely AWFUL day today - health problems, smashed my car... basically a whole lot of suck.  This has been an incredible turnaround for the day.

Can I tell you how incredibly thrilled and honored I am that you not only wrote this, but dedicated it to me?   I don't know if I can; my brain is still kind of addled and I don't know if I can find the words.

Nonetheless, know that I'm beyond honored and absolutely thrilled.  Thank you, thank you, thank you!

This was incredibly well-written!  Kikyou's reactions were both awesome and unexpected.  InuYasha's attitude was absolutely spot-on, same with Kagome.

Thank you, again!  The sequel was everything I thought it could be, and more :)

Author's Response: (Blushes)  I am sooo glad you liked the story, I did my best, tried to Post it over on fanfiction but for some reason I can't get on the site,oh well.  Glad you were on here and got to read it....and thanks for the awesome review!




Summary:

Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru explain the birds and the bees...


Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1371 Read Count: 336

[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2009


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2009
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: The Birds and the Bees

*chokes**cracks up*
Thank you, sooooooo much... I really, really, really needed a laugh.  I wondered where this might be going and second-guessed myself a few times, but everything I came up with paled in comparison to the ending.

*snickers* "Would have gulped if he wasn't such a manly man."  <--loved it.

And that episode remains one of my favorite South Park eps... though "Red Sleigh Down" and "Woodland Critter Christmas" were up there, too...



Author's Response:

Glad I could help!  That's one of my favorite episodes of South Park too.  Cartman's expression as he sees himself on AFHV is classic.  "I'm...going...to...f***ing...kill...you...guys."  The first time I saw "Woodland Critter Christmas," I think I just sat there slack-jawed for a while staring at the tv screen and wondering if I had really just seen that.  I think my favorite is "Christians Rock Hard." 

The "manly man" quote comes from a review I left Selina MacCloveror for BLA.  I wrote her, "I might have cried if I wasn't such a manly man."  So in putting that in this story, I was making fun of myself, in a way.  Thanks for the feedback. 




Summary:
The official posting site for the "Can You Taste the Summer?" fanfic challenge.


Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Fluff, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50748 Read Count: 2638

[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: May 29, 2009


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2009
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Tête-à-tête

Mmmmmm so hot!  ^_^  I'm glad I could help keep the bunnies on the path to "englightenment"  ;)  It appears the yoga bunnies are getting rather flexible!

Cannes was such a perfect place for this, too!

*hugs* Fabulous writing, my dear!




Summary:
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We all know the type of frat house: Drinking, drugs, sex, horny guys and every year, a ceromony that takes place when the head hancho is offered a 'lucky' girl as a sacrifice. Yep, just a normal frat...Right?


Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: Ayame, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Hentai, Psychological, Romance
Warnings: BDSM, Drug Use, Explicit Sex
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125653 Read Count: 18186

[Report This] Published: April 29, 2009 Updated: March 15, 2010


Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: In The Beginning, Part 4: Conclusion

"Not a rapist" <--- yeah, you know, unless you count what they were going to do to Rin at the beginning.  Mind-control doesn't mean it's not rape

Hell, if I were Kagome, I'd be more concerned about what InuYasha said back when Kagome confronted him. "I'm a demon. She shouldn't have gotten so close." Mating's pretty damned close for somebody to get, considering he himself suggested it wasn't a smart move...

Intriguing backstory, tho - very well-written!