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A Torn Heart by Rinoa Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]


I’m going to tell you a true story.

It’s about friendship and love.

Let me ask you one thing; if you had a deep connection with someone right from the word go. How would you react to the overwhelming emotion of never being able to act upon your feelings, knowing that if you did you could be ruining someone else’s happiness in the process?

This is about one girl’s journey through love, life and understanding.

Categories: Fairy Tales
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Angst, Comedy
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48862 Read Count: 2950

[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2010

Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

XDD Bwahaha! You can only say sorry so many times dear Inu.. lol. It was a good update! Worth the wait! Besides we all go through busy stages in our lives! can't wait to read more! update soon!

Author's Response:

8D I'm glad you feel it was worth the wait! Glad I didn't lose any of my readers *phew*

Thank you so much for the support and for still reading my work. I'm working on the next part right now so hopefully it won't be too long a wait this time.

Thanks again!


Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: March 19, 2009
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

uwah! Awesome chapter! I loved it! Although I will agree that men are extremely confusing.. update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, I loved writing the flirty text and conversations in this one 8D

Men are just from MARS! Update coming tonight, thanks for reading and reviewing hun!


Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: March 19, 2009
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I did like this chapter even better than the last! The driving part made me laugh though! And the banter between Kagome and Inu is hilarious! Still... Inu and his confusing-ness! What does that boy want! XDD Update when you can!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the banter, most of it came from memory of real life situations, which is what this fic is based on, with the exception of some tweaking here and there 8D

The driving lesson made me laugh too, it was all sunny and sparkly then BOOM WTF happened? o.O LMAO I'll update as soon as I can, thanks for reading and reviewing 8D


Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: March 21, 2009
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

WOW! I didn't see that one coming! How long have you been hiding that plot twist up your sleeve! Sneaky one, aren't you?! XD Anyway, aside from the sad ending.. LOVE THE CHAPTER! Update when you can!

Author's Response:

Hehe I'm sneaky! 8D I tried so hard not to give it away in the last chapter with all the phone calls that he kept you know it wasn't him mum that was on the phone XD

I'll try and get another chapter out tonight. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

trust.. its always a hard thing to rebuild once its been broken! But I'm glad Kags decided to give inu a chance! Good chapter! update soon!

Author's Response:

Trust is a hard thing to earn back, you're right!

Thank you for reading and reviewing 8D


Reviewer: Karma-hime Signed
Date: April 12, 2009
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Kagome! I feel so bad for her! We can only hope things get better for her after this! XDD Please update when you can! XD

Author's Response: I know! Poor Kaggie, I\'m almost done with the next chapter and hope to have it up later on today 8D Things have a way of working themselves out but there is still a long way to go with the two of them. Thank you so much or the comment and for Reading \r\n\r\n~Rinoa~