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Shades of Gray by fallenangel7583 Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 116]

Summary:

Kagome wants to escape from the pressures of the Higurashi name, InuYasha wishes to prove him more then a black sheep. Both lead duel lives at sun set. When paths cross in that gothic setting, fires of the soul ignite. Little do they know who the other is. Toss in complete disorder of outside influences that refuse to let the lovers unite, and Chaos ensues. AU, inu/kag...with ::gag:: some kikyo/inu and kag/oberon
Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Comedy, Hentai, Psychological
Warnings: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 435743 Read Count: 9792

[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: August 09, 2012


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 07, 2007
Chapter number: 29
Title: Chapter 29: Loosening Reality part deux

Guess what!? I finally got the time to read this! XD What an awesome story! I had only ever read bits and pieces but now I'm hooked. This is great work, wendy!
Update soon. I'll be reading this time XD

Author's Response: Thanks Axel!!! i'm glad that you got around to reading this one. i'm happy with it, i think it came around pretty well. i'm glad that you're enjoying it, that makes me smile!!




Summary:
Everyone has secrets…they shape the world we live in. Every choice holds a consequence. What happens with those secrets and consequences ignite chaos? Teenagers must learn the harsh realities of the real world...or die trying. AU Inu/Kag, Rin/Sesh.
Categories: Legends
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Action-Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Hentai
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67315 Read Count: 503

[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: February 16, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Sanity

I found you =p
Wow, what a bitch. And the two brothers are shit heads .o

Author's Response: Lmao, yeah Axel, you got me. ^__^ yeah, Launia is a peice of work (a crap shoot, but nevertheless). yes, the brothers will remain to be shit heads until about halfway through. :-p





Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: In da' club

Gah. Kikyou.
This is really interesting! I'm hooked!

Author's Response: thanks. >.<





Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2007
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: The First Day

Well aint he too cool for school

Author's Response: lol...more or less...:-)





Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2007
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Gossip

*addicted*
Update soon!



Through Amber Eyes by Angel449 Rated: Reserved starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]

Summary:
When Kagome needs to go home for a while, she unknowingly uses a different method to convince the hanyou to let her go. She had no idea that it would hurt him so much.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1604 Read Count: 801

[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 05, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 23, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Here I am reading ._. Wasting my precious homework time (/using it as an excuse not to do homework) to find some good stories to nominate for the awards. I liked this one, it was short and cute. So it's getting nominated whether you like it or not. (And so I don't have to read any others XD)

Author's Response: LOL! Axel-chan, you are awesome. "It's getting nominated whether you like it or not." Thanks a bunch girl!



Iris by Patchcat Rated: Risque starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]

Summary:




A quiet night with a sleeping Kagome and a haunting melody that strikes a chord within a hanyou’s mind leads to some reflective moments.


Categories: Fables

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2074 Read Count: 531

[Report This] Published: January 07, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 23, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Iris

How come I haven't read this before?? Gah, I need to spend more time on ED. I LOVE the song - one of my all time favourites,  and I love the way you used it. You got my nomination for the ED awards ^^

Author's Response: Thank you for the reveiw and for the nomination.  I'm glad to know you liked this story enough to do that.




Summary:


Old flames ignite when two lovers try and find love for the holidays. But they have to get over their differences first.


Categories: Fairy Tales
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Alternate Universe, Comedy, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32481 Read Count: 3017

[Report This] Published: January 20, 2007 Updated: December 27, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 07, 2007
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Winter Wonderland

How come I haven't read this one yet! It's great! I love the cute story and I can't wait to read more. Great work!



I'm Still Here by InusMistress Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]

Summary:


It had all started one morning; one that Kagome would never forget. How such an argument could have led to her love’s death, she would never understand. [IK, rated for later smut ^_^] Dedicated to InuGrrrl.

Won 1st place for the "Best Tearjerker" award on ED Destined Awards, first quarter, 2007.

Won 3rd place for the "Best Melodrama" award on ED Destined Awards, first quarter, 2007.

Won 3rd place for the "Best Plot Twist" award on ED Destined Awards, third quarter, 2008. 


Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sex, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19359 Read Count: 4140

[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: September 17, 2008


Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17, 2007
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, the plot is progressing slowly >< I hope we can see some of Inu next chapter, he better come back soon



For Everybody by Dangersque Rated: Risque starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]

Summary:
Inuyasha and the gang spend an uncomfortable night in a village. Entry for Concealed Rose's unusual songfic challenge.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku
Genres: Songfic
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1502 Read Count: 345

[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: July 26, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 07, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: For Everybody

Hey, nice work, danga! (yeah, I finally managed to read some more of your stuff.) I love your work - it's always short and sweet and you make InuYasha such a likeable person. On top of that, I always remember lines from your stories after reading them. Just specific dialogue or phrases that stay with me.
Not many authors can do that. Great job.
~Ax



Author's Response: You remember lines that I write? Hell, I don't remember lines that I write.



Afternoon Delight by Fyrloche Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]

Summary:
Kagome and Inuyasha get some naughty ideas from an old song.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Oneshot, Songfic
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 389

[Report This] Published: August 17, 2007 Updated: August 17, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: September 23, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it =D You wove in the song in a cute, witty way and it worked well. You got my nomination for an ED award ^^



Mornin' My Beloved by inuaddict Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Summary:
first this in the morning, and what do you think Kagome and Inuyasha are up to? treating each other to each other... get it? lol.. ok..yea! Inuyasha and Kagome having fun first thing in the morning.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 991 Read Count: 343

[Report This] Published: September 30, 2007 Updated: September 30, 2007


Reviewer: axel720 Signedstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2007
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Mornin' My Beloved

Nice and short, I like it! I like how you played with first person POV and present tense. It's tricky to stick to and you did it well. The mood was nice and relaxed - but steamy XD - and your characters seemed really comfortable with one another. Good work =D

Author's Response: thanks a lot. this is pretty different from how i write regular stories, i usuall like to tell a story that has already happened, but as the main character, so writing it as it is happening was quite the challenge for me. thank you so much for your support!




Summary:

Just read it. A little Hojo bashing. InuKag. First fanfiction, although I have more, this is the first one. Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha anime or manga characters, the Anime itself, or the Manga itself.


Categories: Fairy Tales, Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 872 Read Count: 744

[Report This] Published: January 12, 2008 Updated: January 12, 2008


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: January 14, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Inuyasha the Victor!

Is this your first fic? I think it was a nice try =) You really need to work on your formatting though (i know ED can be annoying when you're uploading a chap, but good format adds to the overall quality of the story). I think the plot was a good idea, but you should try setting the scene more, have some more explanations, descriptions, dialogue. I can tell an author is great when they can pull me into their story and their characters. This doesn't necessarily mean the fic has to be one great big long descriptive thing, but you need to establish your personal writing style and make a simple idea something more interesting and engaging for the reader. The title really caught my eye, and I loved how Inu just went right to the point. With lots of practice you'll write some really good stuff, and i'll look forward to seeing how you progress as an author =)



Anywhere is... by 0nimusha Rated: Salacious starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

Summary:
As the hanyou-turned-full demon came to the other side of the well, he paused and scented the air. When he noted that his soon-to-be mate was alone, a low growl started in his throat and his groin started to ache with need.
Categories: Fables
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Hentai, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1749 Read Count: 660

[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008


Reviewer: axel720 Signed
Date: January 14, 2008
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha. You know no one ever mentions the fact that InuYasha is always waiting in the same place every time whenever Kagome stomps up to him demanding to know where he's been XD I'm glad you acknowledged it! I was beginning to think that I was the only one that noticed he's always up in the damn tree and she's always stupid enough to ask =p

That aside, I think this was a good try, but the plot is way too over-used (not that you can avoid it much when writing in a cannon setting). You mixed up your tense a lot, so maybe read your work out loud to yourself before submitting it to see if it sounds right, to see if you can add anything else etc.

Anyways, keep writing and you'll come up with some great stuff. Try to incorporate some of your own personal style into your writing to make it more interesting and unique.

Keep it up!

Author's Response: Well it is common sense when Kagome's gone. Yes, I agree with you on that point being the plot is over-used. And, as I have slready responded to my first review, I will be doing a revise on this piece. Thanks for your review.