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Nigousan by bluezinthos Rated: Salacious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]


A wife he loves, a mistress he took by law, and a scandal that could change everything he thought was perfect in his life.
Categories: Legends

Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou
Genres: Alternate Universe
Warnings: Explicit Sex, Language
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 3452

[Report This] Published: February 13, 2007 Updated: February 07, 2009

Reviewer: umeboshi_girl Signed
Date: December 25, 2007
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! This story is so original and interesting! I don't think I've ever seen a plot like this and the IY fandom has almost everything.

I love how you emphasized scent and it's importance to Inuyasha. Kikyo's refusal to give up her perfumes is very telling and I can tell that the tension between her and Kagome will only get worse before it gets better. I was so happy to see demon!Inu make an appearance in this chapter. Hopefully, he'll convince the rest of Inuyasha that Kagome is definitely the better choice!

I can't wait to see what happens next with this! Please update soon! :)


After the death of Naraku, an attack on InuYasha and Kagome leads to the discovery of a priest at war with youkai and hanyou, a mysterious Inu Youkai, fox magic, and a beautiful Kami who has plans of her own. Can they save themselves and come to terms with who they are and what their life together means?

Categories: Legends
Past Featured Story
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: Action-Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48694 Read Count: 3545

[Report This] Published: August 11, 2007 Updated: June 22, 2008

Reviewer: umeboshi_girl Signed
Date: January 03, 2008
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Foxlight in the Evening

This is a really charming story. I loved all of the poems and fables. It's obvious you did a lot of research about Japanese culture. Some of the religious references went over my head, but the plot was still easy to follow and it added a nice atmosphere to the story.

I particularly liked the little poem about Rin and the details regarding Teijo's swordwork. 

The characterizations are great - Sesshoumaru in particular is perfectly himself. You've written Inuyasha with a maturity that really suits him and I love his relationship with Kagome. They're so sweet together! 

I'm really curious about what happens next in the story and I hope you update soon. :)