Reviewer: umeboshi_girl Signed
January 03, 2008
Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Foxlight in the Evening
This is a really charming story. I loved all of the poems and fables. It's obvious you did a lot of research about Japanese culture. Some of the religious references went over my head, but the plot was still easy to follow and it added a nice atmosphere to the story.
I particularly liked the little poem about Rin and the details regarding Teijo's swordwork.
The characterizations are great - Sesshoumaru in particular is perfectly himself. You've written Inuyasha with a maturity that really suits him and I love his relationship with Kagome. They're so sweet together!
I'm really curious about what happens next in the story and I hope you update soon. :)