Date: December 05, 2013 6:21 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: After the Storm
The byplay between the two of them is so very telling, I just loved the back and forth of it all. In the beginning it almost seems like InuYasha is annoyed with Kagome, but then I like how you tied his annoyance to the weather and the tree being knocked down. It really made the reader sit up ad pay attention. Also I like that InuYasha didn't say anything about the over cooked soup, character development! This was great, thank you for sharing!