Reviews For After the Storm
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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2013 6:21 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: After the Storm

The byplay between the two of them is so very telling, I just loved the back and forth of it all. In the beginning it almost seems like InuYasha is annoyed with Kagome, but then I like how you tied his annoyance to the weather and the tree being knocked down. It really made the reader sit up ad pay attention. Also I like that InuYasha didn't say anything about the over cooked soup, character development! This was great, thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2010 7:04 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: After the Storm

Cute <3





Reviewer: mysteriousmoon30 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2009 4:49 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: After the Storm

Cute and sweet!



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