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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2013 1:44 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

InuYasha's gruff demeanor played really well with this story, it worked especially well when he told Kagome she was coming with him, and at the end where he told Kagome she couldn't doubt his feelings anymore. I like the insecurity you gave to Kagome as well, it made everything feel more real. This was very well done, and I greatly enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing!





Reviewer: JakkaruKitsune Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2010 8:15 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

A bit OOC for all three.
No matter how much I want him to forget about Kikyou he will always go to her.
He is cold by chasing after a dead woman
thus I don't think the two never had good chemistry goin on.
I think Kagome is his type.
Hyper,funny,happy
he is the same way
the two are even stubborn.
And I don't care for the 'my girlfriend looks older then I' thing.
Inuyasha may be attractive.
He may be my favorite character.
BUT!
He is irritating when choosing.

And Kagome knows he loves her.
But she also thinks he doesn't love her as he loves Kikyou.
I think Inuyasha is holding on to his past.
He is afraid that it will repeat it self.
So he tries to block his feelings away from Kagome.
He runs after Kikyou in guilt.
Yes he loves Kikyou.
He still loves her.
He loves Kagome as well.
I think he is just afraid.
Thus him living a lonely hated life.
His father dying when he was just born.
His mother dying when he was just a small child.
Demons and humans hating on the poor hanyou.
I think when him and Kikyou met, he held on to his dreams of having what others can.
A family.
He didn't want to be lonely anymore.
So he chose her from depression.

When Kagome came.
That's when the true learning began for him.

He needs to let go.
And see whats been in front of him this whole time.
Hell.
Even if Kikyou is stronger with her archery and spiritual power.
Kagome is stronger in trust and love.





Reviewer: JakkaruKitsune Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2010 8:12 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

A bit OOC for all three.
No matter how much I want him to forget about Kikyou he will always go to her.
He is cold by chasing after a dead woman
thus I don't think the two never had good chemistry goin on.
I think Kagome is his type.
Hyper,funny,happy
he is the same way
the two are even stubborn.
And I don't care for the 'my girlfriend looks older then I' thing.
Inuyasha may be attractive.
He may be my favorite character.
BUT!
He is irritating when choosing.

And Kagome knows he loves her.
But she also thinks he doesn't love her as he loves Kikyou.
I think Inuyasha is holding on to his past.
He is afraid that it will repeat it self.
So he tries to block his feelings away from Kagome.
He runs after Kikyou in guilt.
Yes he loves Kikyou.
He still loves her.
He loves Kagome as well.
I think he is just afraid.
Thus him living a lonely hated life.
His father dying when he was just born.
His mother dying when he was just a small child.
Demons and humans hating on the poor hanyou.
I think when him and Kikyou met, he held on to his dreams of having what others can.
A family.
He didn't want to be lonely anymore.
So he chose her from depression.

When Kagome came.
That's when the true learning began for him.

He needs to let go.
And see whats been in front of him this whole time.
Hell.
Even if Kikyou is stronger with her archery and spiritual power.
Kagome is stronger in trust and love.





Reviewer: sunset in love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2009 3:38 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

ah, so cute!!!





Reviewer: inuyashaandkagome1993 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2009 4:35 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

needs to be longer





Reviewer: kmoaton Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2009 1:03 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

It's about time Inuyasha let Kikyo know how he felt about Kagome.  I thought it was wonderful that Kagome was there to hear everything!  I was surprised by Kikyo's reaction but overall pleased with the whole thing!  Good work and great companion piece.





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2009 5:00 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Acknowledging His Choice

*hugs* I have had an absolutely AWFUL day today - health problems, smashed my car... basically a whole lot of suck.  This has been an incredible turnaround for the day.

Can I tell you how incredibly thrilled and honored I am that you not only wrote this, but dedicated it to me?   I don't know if I can; my brain is still kind of addled and I don't know if I can find the words.

Nonetheless, know that I'm beyond honored and absolutely thrilled.  Thank you, thank you, thank you!

This was incredibly well-written!  Kikyou's reactions were both awesome and unexpected.  InuYasha's attitude was absolutely spot-on, same with Kagome.

Thank you, again!  The sequel was everything I thought it could be, and more :)

Author's Response: (Blushes)  I am sooo glad you liked the story, I did my best, tried to Post it over on fanfiction but for some reason I can't get on the site,oh well.  Glad you were on here and got to read it....and thanks for the awesome review!



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