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Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2009 5:19 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Second Night

Very, very moving.  And sexy.  :)  This reminds me a lot of "Yesterday's Tomorrows," but I'm sure you did that on purpose.  Kagome always seems to cool and collected in your stories.  I'm curious to see if she would ever feel - and express - the untamed passion that InuYasha does.  Or maybe that would be too OOC...I don't know. 

Anyway, I love it!  Boy, you are really crankin' it out lately, huh?  XD  Either that, or you've been writing for a while and letting it build up without posting...shame on you for keeping us waiting!  :D  *hugs*



Author's Response:

I wrote this first, and wove  a bit of it in YT...YT is supposed to be the definitive in-depth telling of my post manga story, but the oneshots are where I sketch it out...they really are the same story universe.

 I did get behind on posting here, but I am working to fix that...

I sort of see Kagome as mostly collected, a lot like her mom, especially now that she's out of the adolescent phase.  It's not that I don't think they don't argue, although I haven't written about it...but I do think the three years apart gave both of them some serious growing up, and they don't act like 15 year olds any more...If Kagome feels cornered though, she will still get angry and let you know what for...there's a pregancy moodswing piece I've worked on but haven't finished that I really need to get into the story arc, and I have a piece where she's ready to take off someone's head for looking down at Inu for his youkai blood, and another one or two flashes...but I don't see her as the type not to be mostly together...at least until she's running after her kids.  Kids bring out the part of us we thought we totally had under control....

 





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2009 2:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Second Night

Very romantic! Beautifully done!

Author's Response: Why thank you!  I'm glad you like!



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