Date: August 28, 2009 2:35 am
Chapter number: 19
I love this story. I mean a LOT. My heart did a quick skip when Kagome stopped short of saying "I love you". I can't wait for an update! (And I feel you with school...!) Somehow, even though 4/5 of my classes are online, I feel like I might as well be in the damn classroom!!! XD Anyway, loved the story!
Date: August 26, 2009 7:48 pm
Chapter number: 19
Oh that's so sweet, I just kinda wish that she hadn't chickened out and admitted that she loved him. I also don't think it's quite fair for Kagome's family to be mad at the Takahashi's for Kagome not telling them about the problem.
Date: August 24, 2009 8:27 pm
Chapter number: 18
Title: A Healing Touch
Sigh, unless you have a really good build up I wouldn't keep milking it. But that's just my opinion. You might have something great in store, which will be whatever you right next, all of your chapters are good :) It's a really good story. Keep on writing.
Date: March 31, 2009 8:52 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: What Really Happened...
It developed too quickly into a relaitonship. I mean, the met at 9 am, and by noon he was holding and rocking her. It really doesn't work on that time line.
Author's Response: if you havent read any further than this.... it will explain it more in the following chapters..... :P
Date: March 31, 2009 8:44 pm
Chapter number: 4
Title: Lunch and More Thunderstorms
Oh ok, frightened of rainstorms makes snese now. It is still a bit over the top. You sort of made her annoying. And easily panicked. And he is still wayyyyy to nice! It takes him a long time to like people enough to trust of be kind to them. You got him there to easily.
Author's Response: well i guess u would consider this an alternate universe...where as in the series, no one raised him so he wouldnt be as trusting to people, b/c no one loved him~~ in my story he has both parents that loved him and a brother that can stand him...so i would assume that he would trust people more~~ as for kags, well when u are young and tragedy strikes, whatever it is, it can have a terrible affect on the victim, thats with anyone, and i just made the situation more real.... thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: March 31, 2009 8:30 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Meetings and Thunderstorms
Its an interest plot, but a bit out of character in places. Inuyasha is too nice, unlike him, and Kagome is too...well, she's sort of chicken-shit in this, isn't she? The abusive boyfriend is hard to pull of with her because she is so strongwilled, but she takes a lot of crap for love (And i mean from bad guys, not Inuyasha) so it can be done. But making her afraid of thunderstorms? Its ooc.
Author's Response: it may be ooc but i thought that the plot was okay... it makes for a relationship to build b/w inu and kags;, trust, love, acceptance of one's self.... if u dont like the ooc'ness im sorry but thats how i wrote my story....
Date: February 23, 2009 6:11 pm
Chapter number: 14
Title: Brother Miroku
So miro's one of the family? that kinda cool to add. He should know better then to mess with sessy and inu didn't have to get hit to he was just as upset. well hope to read more soon
Date: February 11, 2009 9:05 pm
Chapter number: 13
So you were giving her a massage and it turned into a ‘get Kagome off’ session?” Toga asked his son bluntly. that was funny just pictureing it lolz!! My poor inu!! And YAY for Rin it's so cute thinking of shessy crying cuz of that!! loved it as always