Reviews For Golden Eyes
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Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 8:39 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I am sorry if you take this the wrong way but I think you need to write more.  I know how hard it is to write someting but this I felt was too short.  Your end notes was longer then the meat of the story and even the disclamer is almost the same size. 

Again I am sorry if you take this the wrong way but I did feel you deserved a coment since you did take the time to write it and post it for others to see.  I hope next one you post will be longer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review.  I am thrilled that you took the time to read what I had written and to let me know what you thought.  I was trying for a Haiku poem, but it has been an extremely long time since I have had to write anything. I am in no way offended, it makes me want to try harder for the next one.  Thanks!! :)

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