Date: August 03, 2010 11:21 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 A Condom Conundrum
It was nice, the ending pretty much what I expected. (Save for the fact that suprise parties are an invention of the American culture. At least we don't have them here in the Nordic countries and I doubt that they are popular even in the modern Japan.) I wish the begining would have been tad bit longer. Now the smut part came out of the bushes. But I enjoyed your style and your obvious techical talent for writing.