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Reviewer: cai20160513 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 8:10 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

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Reviewer: big inuyasha fan Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 10:01 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: New Lives

that was awsome. you are a great writter.





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 7:23 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: New Lives

Very nice and sweet I love it.





Reviewer: My-Only-Love Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 8:53 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: As Long As I'm With You

That was very sweet. You have a few spelling mistakes and need to take a new line for when someone else starts speaking, but otherwise a well written story ^__^





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 3:41 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: As Long As I'm With You

This was indeed sad, but also very happy.  You truly conveyed their love for each other and how it overcomes the hate that is thrown at them.  As usual, InuYasha is the one who is unsure if Kagome truly loves him enough to possibly put up with such negativity.  The poor guy.  Anyway, this was very touching; I like it.  :)





Reviewer: King Baka Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 12:52 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: As Long As I'm With You

This has the potential to be a very good story, but you are in serious need of a beta-reader, or just to do some proofreading yourself.  Several things I noticed:

1.  Loud = noisy.  Load = "hey man, that's a heavy load."  At first, I thought this was a typo, but then you did it again. 

2.  To = "I'm going to the market."  Too = also, or "that's too much." 

3.  Comma usage.  Basically, a good rule is to read your words out loud to yourself, and wherever you put a noticable pause, use a comma.  For example, you should say "No, Kagome came back to be with me."  If you don't put the comma, the meaning is flubbed because it's just a run-on phrase with no pause.  You'd be saying something like "No person would ever..." and I don't think that was your intention. 

I hope you will take these thoughts into consideration and do some serious proofreading.  If you need a beta-reader, I'd be happy to help.  Let me know. 





Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 8:35 pm
Chapter number: 10
Title: As Long As I'm With You

Awe that was so sweet! I love how you show Inuyasha's vulnerable side! We don't get to see it often enough! :)





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 6:25 am
Chapter number: 5
Title: Last Memories...

*Last Memories*

 Very sweet, but sad.





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 6:23 am
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beauty and the Beast

*Beauty and the Beast*

Oh most enjoyable as well as well written.





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 6:04 am
Chapter number: 7
Title: That Jewel, That Well, And That Hanyou

*That Jewel, That Well, And That Hanyou*

Totally unexpected, lol.





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 5:42 am
Chapter number: 4
Title: Special Delivery

*Special Delivery*

I very much enjoyed this.





Reviewer: inustrugrl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 2:44 am
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beauty and the Beast

This is good! I know how you feel, I wish Inuyasha and Kagome would have kissed at least once in the manga or anime, and no the movies don't count. Anyway, good luck in the contest!





Reviewer: inustrugrl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 2:40 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

(gasps) This was so moving and everyone was so in charactar! Inuyasha can't say 'I love you' but he doesn't need to cuz Kagome already knows and he shows it in his actions. You rock! You're quickly becoming one of my fave authors! I haven't started big league affair yet because there's so many fics on here I want to read and th e longer ones are hard to start sometimes! Bt it's recommended so I will read it soon! XD Good luck in the contest!





Reviewer: inustrugrl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 2:36 am
Chapter number: 5
Title: Last Memories...

OH no! Kagome died! I was hoping she would live, but now I'm crying! This was good though. Good luck in the contest!





Reviewer: inustrugrl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 2:32 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: New Lives

This was awesome and sooooooooooooooo sweet! Inuyasha is so in charactar, and Miroku didn't pity him when he remembered how he treated him! XD XD XD But so good. Good luck in the contest!





Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 8:43 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beauty and the Beast

Amazing story! I could actually feel their emotions in their memory when they were reunited! You did a fantastic job! Good luck in the contest!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 7:29 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beauty and the Beast

This was so sweet.  InuYasha and his newfound gentlemanly ways....  XD 





Reviewer: King Baka Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 5:11 pm
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

Nicely done.  Great to see something from Inu's POV.  DanaRose is right, you should try writing canon more often. 





Reviewer: Roxotaku Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 4:53 pm
Chapter number: 4
Title: Special Delivery

Oh, this was touching and beautiful, I just love your idea! Very original way to talk about how Kagome and Inuyasha lived their lives. Only, now I want to hear the stories Shippo is going to tell!





Reviewer: kmoaton Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 3:43 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beauty and the Beast

Beautiful job.  This was a wonderful story!





Reviewer: kmoaton Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 4:21 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

This was really beautiful.  I loved that you used Inuyasha's point of view.  It's always a thrill to know what's going on under those lovely ears! 





Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2008 8:16 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

You go girl! I absolutely love it! You do great Canon stories! You should try them more often! I like how everything is in Inuyasha prespective. :)





Reviewer: cutelittleears Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2008 5:51 am
Chapter number: 8
Title: Shell-Shocked

You are really good at writing.





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2008 3:17 am
Chapter number: 7
Title: That Jewel, That Well, And That Hanyou

This was different!  I have to admit I was sad that (it seems) InuYasha and Kagome couldn't have kids of their own, but I'm glad they adopted.  And their writing the story was very cute.  :)  Great job!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2008 3:07 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Good Morning

This was great!  Very sweet.  Poor InuYasha, but hey, what do you expect when you have kids?  XD  I'm sure he'll get to have his fun later....



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