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Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 10:26 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fear

I gotta say, I do find this ooc for Inuyasha's demon side. even in that form, when he kills things and geta a kick out of it, the way he reacts to her is almost as if hes more afriad of hurting her than anything else. Even when he was being puched over the edge by magic, just her kissing him pulled him back. I can't imagine even his demon side would let harm come to her. I think every part of him would rather die than hurt her. Just to say. But this was really written, even if it was nightmarishly dark.





Reviewer: Inu Tenshi 1 Signedhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 4:35 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fear

*Horror stricken expression*...How...How could...could you...I mean...this...I...I-I can't...believe...you would even think about something like THIS!!! *Tears streaming down face* He would never EVER do something like THAT!!! No matter WHAT FORM HE IS IN!!!!  I have Abosuloutly no intension of making you feel bad or being mean, but I am always, ALWAYS honest in my reviews.  Even if that was for Halloween, you never should have done this.  It...It's just TOO MUCH!!! *hiccup, hiccup* Gomen-nasia (I'm sorry)





Reviewer: freakyducky Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 4:37 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fear

wow creepy good! !





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2008 1:09 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fear

I am sorry to say I can not see his demon do this.  I personly feel that even his demon recounzes her.  His farther was willing to die for his human mom and his demon side comes from there. 

Author's Response: I admit I have trouble seeing this too, I agree, which made it hard to write. However, I thought that if Kagome's miko powers had unintentionally almost purified him twice (the arrow, and then the wave of magic that dissenigrated the oni), it might trigger something more primal, a deeper transformation that might not see her as his mate, and see her as a threat instead. Survival instincts, I suppose.



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