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Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2009 4:06 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Its interesting, but a little confusing there at the end because, clearly, she had no reason to think he was dead. So you know, the standard with fan ficiton is o double space between paragraphs because its easier to read that way. You also spelled the word "follow" wrong everytime you wrote it, so I figure you didn't know. The plot of it is interesting though.



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