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Reviewer: NekoYoukai90 Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 11:45 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Do Not Speak

I loved every minute of this! This one I'll definitely be re-reading come Halloween ;D





Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2008 2:56 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Do Not Speak

"At least I'm not Batman."

LOL! I got the best mental image of that. Love the extension, but I have to admit I liked the contest version a bit more. It left more to the imagination and that gave it a bit of a scarier element. But hey, I'm definetely not complaining about the happy ending (or the lemon, lol) in this one, either! I think both versions are great. :D

Terrific story! Thanks for posting!

~Amber





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2008 1:00 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Do Not Speak

Yay!!!  Very good, and I see now why you were so bitter about having to cut it back so much.  *Pointed Stare*...that was so funny!  The lemon definitely added more steam - I think it's great as it is!  And the ending made it more clear - I had thought from the original posting that Kagome had died, but I'm glad to see she didn't.  Bummer about Miroku and Sango, but then again, it is a Halloween spook!  lol  Congratulations again - can't wait to read more of your work!  :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! ^_^ Er..yeah, I did kinda sound like a bitch in the shorter version, and while I do apologize...I still hate word limits. hah. I'm glad you liked it!



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