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Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2008 3:09 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Kuchisake Onna, Slit-Mouth Woman

I liked the story very much.  It got me lol.  One thinkg though.  In the beginning you have Sango telling a scrry story about a bus but she would not know about busses.

Author's Response: I based the story on the present time, I should have said that, thanks for pointing it out, but I put the characters well, in this time.



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