Date: October 11, 2008 10:47 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Detective Inuyasha Meets Kagome
Definitely very interesting so far! I think you should continue, but maybe try adding a little more description where you can; it's just a tiny bit choppy. Great plot, though, and I can't wait to see what happens when Inu finds out Kags is the killer!
Thank you so much, will do, and thank you for the review!