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Reviewer: cesuraee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2013 8:20 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Sometimes these two kill me in such a good way that I don't even know what to do with myself. This was so astoundingly in character that all I want to do is applaud you, very well done and great little story line. I loved every word of it!





Reviewer: Elementwing Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 11:24 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Aww this was a cute story
I always did think that inuyasha liked the beads for reasons similar to this ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review as I always like it when people take the time to Review.





Reviewer: DanaRose31382 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2009 12:17 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Awe! That was so sweet! I love the ending! Most of all I love the idea that the beads can come off on his human nights. I never considered that but it makes total and complete sense since it's connected to his youkai blood. Anyways great work! You should DEFINITELY write more!

Author's Response:

I am writeing more but it is very hard for me even with my wife going over it a few time to clear it up for me.

 

I am very glade you liked it.  I always though it was a little funny you never seem him get Sit when he was human so I wrote it off of that.





Reviewer: mortimer Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2008 5:58 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

touching

 

lovely

 

sweet

 

glorious



Author's Response: I am very glade you liked it. 





Reviewer: kmoaton Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 3:48 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

You did really good for your first fic!  Welcome to the club!  A few typos but nothing major.  Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  I am still writing but even this took very long and was not easy for me to write.  While I normly have alot of ideas it is very hard to convay them to people.  I wrote 6 drafts of this and my wife when over it when I was done.  Again I am sorry I did not catch the other errors.





Reviewer: vikikibouki Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 2:12 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

So...she knows that the beads can be taken off on his human night, too. Good one shot.

Author's Response: You can tak it as one of 2 ways.  My wife pointed out that way to me when she corrected alot for me.  Orignaly I was going for that she was a sleep and when she said that.  I did not change it since I like both ways.



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