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Reviewer: vampire liaison Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 1:55 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Wishes in the sand and a Fiery Passion

i had to just let you know before i even finfished the story that i love the disclaimer. wish i thought of something like that. as for the story itself, i guess you dont have a beta, so dont forget to proof read. the revelations need to come a little bit slower to. end of criticism, onto praise. very cute story. though you made inuyasha a total ass so far, i find him amusing that way. all my favorite romances start between two people who don't like each other very much. it kinda gives me the giggles.





Reviewer: vampire liaison Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 1:46 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: You and I collide

there are a few inconsistencies, and a few things could do with a little more explaining, but overall i really like it so far.





Reviewer: Angel449 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 3:52 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Schemes and second chances

Very very nice! Why do I have the feeling the Inuyasha has the exact same plan as Kagome? Anyways, I'm loving this and I hope that you update soon!

Happy Writing!





Reviewer: INULUVER Anonymousstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 10:52 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Wishes in the sand and a Fiery Passion

MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE. it's great story line. I am from hawaii and I LOVE surfing. It is my life. My Boyfriend and I surf every morning and in the afternoon. I havent read a story about surfers yet and i am eager to hear the rest. Loving it



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